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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sa86

Shristi,you are right but Kiara,u definitely will charge for this from the channel.😊

By the way,Yesterday I read the part and write the comment and after that I delete it.😕
And this all incidents was happened for my sleepiness but what can i do i was not able to read it at early evening for my busy schedule and also not able to resist from it before tomorrow.😆
That is the effect of our darling K.
I lovee the whole part as if we went back in our old TEI says.
Kiara,u make the hunger level up,Please help to die down it.


Adiii,I was waiting for your comment 😆
Yes ofcourse I will definitely charge 🤣
I love how you always appreciate me,so let the love keep coming ❤️
And pls I will not let the hunger level die down,I love you guys,you'll make me feel so special and you see I'm greedy,I want the love 😉
Love you baba 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tricksters

It was awesome🤗...Please update soon...Eagerly waiting

Precap😳


Thank you so much 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maisarah

Tht was rckng , swty ...
No doubt tht ur an amzng wrtr...
With the whole ff u made us smile, cry nd exctd...
Lve u kiara
And sry fr the lte updt


Thank you so much Aura,you always make me feel nice
Love you too 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jambread3


Shristiii,first I wanna give you a tight hug 🤗
You've been making me feel so nice since the time I started my ff and I appreciate your love A lot
Thank you so much and don't be sorry pls
And well,CVs need to take my appointment first 🤣
Just kidding,I wish they showed something like that too 😉

Kiara so sweet of you *hugging you back*
I also wish that they showed smthng like that
but CVs being CVS are always so much behind you all good writers in these type of ideas 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy reading x

Chapter 16

A new lease of life begins today. The past had been bid adieu and a fresh new chapter had just begun.

As the sun's rays pierced through the window,it highlighted a couple who had wrapped each other in their embrace and who slept peacefully.

Kunj had his arm wrapped securely around twinkle's shoulder while twinkle slept on his chest. Both of them were cuddled up to each other. Their fingers of their other hand entwined hard never letting each other go.

The Rays were successful in disturbing Kunj's sleep as he moved a little while rubbing his eyes until his eyes fell on the petite figure who was wrapped around him.

He blushed slightly looking at her,he always wondered how did he manage to turn into a teenager who was madly and crazily in love whenever he was with her.

He moved towards her and removed that one strand of hair from her face that was disturbing his view.

She looked divine while sleeping. She was no less than a goddess for him.

Suddenly he remembered something that made him forget everything else

Kunj in his mind,
"Hey bhagwan,yaar yeh twinkle kitni distracting hai,mein toh Bhul hi Gaya,isse pehle ki twinkle uthe mujhe jaa kar surprise ki tayari kar Leni chahiye"

He carefully picked twinkle's head up and placed it on the pillow and gave her a feather light kiss on her head

"Good morning Mrs.Sarna" he whispered to her.
He then got up and went towards his cupboard to grab a towel before disappearing inside the bathroom.
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After sometime twinkle got up looking here and there. She realised she wasn't in her room. She then remembered her and Kunj's reunion last night and blushed thinking how they hugged and slept.

She then looked around trying to find Kunj. She called out to him but in vain.

He surely wasn't in the room,thought twinkle.

She then got up and moved towards the door when she saw a beautiful red Anarkali lying on the sofa with a white note on top of it.

She went and picked the dress up with one hand and the note with the other and started reading it

"Good morning Meri Siyaapa Queen! Mein jaanta Hun ki tu mujhe hi dhund rahi hai.Lekin tu mujhe yahan Wahan kyun dhund rahi hai? Bas ek bar aapne dil mein Jhakle mein wahi milunga..accha chal ab zyada blush karne ki zaroorat nahi hai,phatafat tayar Ho kar neeche aaja.Ek surprise tera wait kar raha hai. Aur hain pls apne pati pe rahem kha kar zyada time mat lagana. I'll be waiting for you.
Tera Sadoo Sarna cum pyaara pati,
Kunj."

Twinkle quickly kissed the letter and held it near her chest and rushed towards the bathroom.
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Twinkle gave herself one last touch up and ran towards the stairs.

As she was rushing down the stairs,she saw her whole family waiting for her smiling at her as she came to their notice.

Their smiles indicated that they knew what was about to happen.

She was so glad to see everybody present there.

Her mother,sisters,Raman mamu,Pinni mami,Mummyji,daddyji,Bebe,Surjeet Tauji,cherry bhaiya and her best friend Chinki

She ran towards them and hugged them one by one.

It was like another big reunion.
A little reunion last night and a big one today,what else did twinkle need in life?

Twinkle - "Arre wah aap log sab yahan par ek Saath! Aaj kuch special hai kya?"

Usha - "Haan putar aaj ek Bohot special din hai"

Twinkle - "Mein kuch samjhi nahi"

All the family members giggled at twinkle's state

Leela then moved forward and pointed her finger behind twinkle indicating her to turn around.

Confused,as she turned around what she saw left her dumbstruck.

She saw Kunj standing there wearing a simple yet Elegant white sherwani looking as handsome as always. He didn't even have to try.

Twinkle was surprised,why was Kunj wearing a sherwani?

Suddenly she looked at her family members for an answer but they acted dumb.

She then saw Kunj come towards her and slowly hold her hand.

Kunj - "Kya hua twinkle? Tujhe abhi bhi samajh nahi aaya? Hey Bhagwan,maa aapki beti na sach mein Buddhu hai."

Leela smiled at her kids. How lucky her daughter was to have a life partner like Kunj.

Kunj - "Okay so as usual mujhe hi samjhana padega. Twinkle,yeh jo 5 saal tere Bina meine kaate hai na woh mere liye kissi Agni pariksha se kam nahi the. Na galti Teri thi twinkle aur nahi Meri,galti Waqt ki thi. Lekin aab bas. Bure din jaa chuke hai,ab Sirf khushiyaan. Twinkle mein tujhe blame nahi kar Rahan Hun ki tune apna mangalsutra aur sindoor kyun nikala. And you know what? I don't even care. Mujhe humare past se koi pharak nahi padta,ab hum Sirf humare present mein jiyenge aur future ke liye hopeful rahenge."

Twinkle had tears in her eyes. She couldn't have thanked God enough for giving her the most precious gift.

The whole family was in awe. Their kids loved each other A lot and now there was nothing that could seperate them.

Manvi - "Wow di,saach mein jiju di se Bohot pyar karte hai aur di bhi Bohot lucky hai."

Mahi - "Haan Manu,saach mein"

Manvi - "I really hope ki Hume bhi humari zindagi mein koi aisa Mille jo humse bhi itna hi pyar karta Ho jitna jiju di se karte hai."

Kunj then continued
Kunj - "Twinkle Jab tak hum ek Saath hai na tab tak mujhe aur kuch bhi nahi chahiye.Humein ek hone ke liye kissi Bohot bade celebration ya big fat wedding karne ki zaroorat nahi hai,hum toh already ek hai. Yeh toh Sirf ek ritual hai. Isliye mein humare pu re family ke saamne tujhe yeh pyar ki nishaniya pehnana Chahata Hun."

Twinkle smiled looking at the sindoor and mangalsutra in his hand.

Kunj then moved forward and asked

Kunj - "May I?"

Twinkle - "Arre abhi toh tumne kahan ki hum ek hai toh phir permission kyun?"

Kunj - "Arre Haan,mein toh Bhul hi Gaya tha"

Twinkle giggled at his cute face.

Kunj then took the mangalsutra and made twinkle wear it as the family looked upon.

He then took a pinch of sindoor and put it on her forehead as twinkle closed her eyes letting the feeling of satisfaction sink in

The whole family started clapping as twinkle hugged Kunj.

Cherry - "Arre wah ji wah,badhai Ho twinkle babiji aur Kunj ki teesri baar shaadi Ho gayi hai."

All the family members started laughing including Kunj and twinkle.

Twinj then went and took the elder's blessings.

Bebe - "Khush raho tum dono. Rab Kare tum dono ko Das Das bacche Ho."

The whole family laughed while Kunj and twinkle blushed.

After sitting together for a while,everybody retired back to their rooms.

They weren't tired but they knew Kunj and twinkle wanted to spend time with each other and they wouldn't go leaving the others alone.
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Finally twinkle entered her room and went to the bathroom.

After sometime Kunj entered their room and locked the door behind him.

Kunj smirked

Kunj - "So finally ab mein aur Meri Siyaapa queen akele hai.Arre Lekin woh hai kahan"

Kunj then saw the bathroom's door open and what he saw in front of him left his mouth dry.

Twinkle was standing there wiping her wet hair. She was wearing a long black nighty.

Kunj was aroused by looking at her.He couldn't resist his feelings and literally ran towards twinkle.

Twinkle on the other hand didn't see him and got shocked when she saw Kunj running towards her

Twinkle - "Oh god Kunj! Tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya. Tum aise bhag kyu Rahe Ho?"

Kunj - "Kya karu yaar,jab bhi tujhe dekhta Hun apne hormones ko control nahi kar pata"

Twinkle blushed

Kunj - "Dekh twinkle ab mein aapne aap ko control nahi kar sakta"

Twinkle - "Toh tumhe Kaun keh raha hai control karne ke liye?"

Kunj couldn't believe his ears. He was literally on cloud9

Thinking that she would change her mind,without wasting a moment Kunj covered the distance between them and smashed his lips on twinkle's

What started slow and passionate soon turned rather wild.

Kunj held twinkle's waist and kept pulling her towards him,rubbing their bodies together while Twinkle kept pulling his hair.

They didn't need air at that moment,they needed each other.

Leaving her swollen lips Alone,Kunj grabbed her waist and dug his nails in her waist earning a moan from her. He then pulled her and lightly pushed on the bed and went on top of her.

Soon their room was surrounded with echoes of their moans and their celebration of love.
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Precap - new entry in Twinj's life.


P.S sorry guys since this is my first ff I wasn't very keen in writing 18+. But I'll write an erotic piece on them soon. Hope this lived up to your expectations.If not,then pls let me know. Honest opinions only please.
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Res.
Just be back after read it.
Oh!Kiara you are most welcome to write an erotic one on TWINJ and I am sure that this piece will not become a vulgar one.I have full faith on you and your writings.
Ok now about this part,Kunj Sarna is goal budddy.
His each reaction and every emotion make me to drool over him.The dialogues of him are so apt with his character.Nice craft dear.👏
And I always got soo excited with the thinking of hormone control and your writing is simply delightful to treat the part.Awesome K.🤗
P.S.-I love the fact that I am addicted to ur daily dose so continue please.

Edited by sa86 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful Kiara.,.
It was amazing..
Sooo happy tat twinj got married third time..
It was romantic...
Luved it..
New entry u mean baby???
Am excited.. Plz.continue soon..
Thx for pm..dnt fotget to pm..
Lots of love..
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Posted: 9 years ago
as usual its an awesome update Kiara
and Kunj's surprise was so cute only giving her back those things not the whole marriage as they are already one its so so sweet ...
and then his one liners in their room aweee he can't control😆 and his hormones 🤣
imagining Twinkle I.e. jas in black nighty she must be looking damn hot then how he can control Lol ...
and about 18+ things its upto you but don't go to far as m a chota bacha for it
ohhh so now new entry is coming up ha
what is it??? tell me please 😃 because I m really very curious you know
but I know you my dear new TEI writer will make me wait for the next update
so please update soonish
m waiting 😃
Edited by twinjlover9 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sa86

Res.

Just be back after read it.
Oh!Kiara you are most welcome to write an erotic one on TWINJ and I am sure that this piece will not become a vulgar one.I have full faith on you and your writings.
Ok now about this part,Kunj Sarna is goal budddy.
His each reaction and every emotion make me to drool over him.The dialogues of him are so apt with his character.Nice craft dear.👏
And I always got soo excitedwith the thinking of hormone control and your writing is simply delightful to treat the part.Awesome K.🤗
P.S.-I love the fact that I am addicted to ur daily dose so continue please.



Thank you so much Adi!
Honestly I love your comments,they make me super happy 🤗
But I'm afraid because I'll be ending this ff soon baba
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wonderful Kiara.,.

It was amazing..
Sooo happy tat twinj got married third time..
It was romantic...
Luved it..
New entry u mean baby???
Am excited.. Plz.continue soon..
Thx for pm..dnt fotget to pm..
Lots of love..


Thank you so much Lavs!
Hahah sorry I can't tell you the new entry
Pls wait for it 😉 🤗

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