Twinj OS: Dread - Page 2

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

THIS IS THE BEST SUNDAY. BEING BLESSED WITH OS' FROM ALL OVER. RESSS.

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Let me just start off by saying that I love stories like this. The pain and dread, the whole atmosphere and setting was so perfect. This was amazing Shakti seriously! I actually felt Twinkle's pain on realising that Kunj wasnt breathing. I'm glad you revived him btw because I was beginning to think it has a sad ending. Beautiful.

Out of curiosity, what inspired this?

Originally posted by: kardooks

Shakti this was just superb, your writing is so good.

The way you describe everything I can actually picture it while reading and the emotions was so raw.

I held my breath when she was holding onto Kunj crying.

This was very beautifully written!

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

THIS IS THE BEST SUNDAY. BEING BLESSED WITH OS' FROM ALL OVER. RESSS.

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Let me just start off by saying that I love stories like this. The pain and dread, the whole atmosphere and setting was so perfect. This was amazing Shakti seriously! I actually felt Twinkle's pain on realising that Kunj wasnt breathing. I'm glad you revived him btw because I was beginning to think it has a sad ending. Beautiful.

Out of curiosity, what inspired this?

Originally posted by: Sdea

Shakti this is beautiful. i was so scared reading it.I was really hoping its not a sad ending. I loved it. The way you explained twinkles feelings omg felt so real.

Do write more!!

Originally posted by: --Jenelle--

Shakti🤗

such a wonderful piece. I love it. The feels omg..

thank you for the pm

Originally posted by: kardooks

Nemo, what you really want to know is, if this was inspired by Aryan.😆

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

Shakti this was simply amazing

I love how i got so many stories to read today. But dude, this one made me so happy. I know i am weird but i LOVED it.

Yuvi ended up losing his life in his attempt to create havoc in Twinkle and Kunj's life. Idk why but i really think he'll face something similar in the show if he doesn't mend his ways while he can.

Also thank you for bringing Kunj back. This was such a good read

You are a wonderful writer

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

amazing loved it

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Ever since she disclosed that info, I have to think about it 😆

Although I dont know why I feel that her accident might've brought this about?

Originally posted by: Inkheart

When I saw the word "lifeless" my heart literally cringed.

For a second I thought our Kunj was gone to good but thankfully he was revived

Yours as usual are always wonderful... I wish I could write so flawless and excellent as you😆.

Job well done