Twinj OS: Dread - Page 4

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

What a beautiful piece of writing 👏 so heartbreaking! Loved it Shakthi 😳

Originally posted by: _Meena_

nice os ...

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

superb OS from a superb writer
I can easily imagine everything
twinkle's sorrow was so visible in front of me
and the ending is so good at last Kunj's heart starts beating

Originally posted by: harshi2000

Shakti tu ne mujhe rula diya
This is just so amazing
Very Well written

Originally posted by: zaara610

Awesome os..beautifully written..Loved it..😊

Originally posted by: Zenab78

It's superb Dii...so yuvi died ...thanks for PM

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

It was wonderful, Di.
You wrote down Twinkle's emotions brilliantly.. Her reaction on seeing Yuvi was perfect. Neither happiness nor anger nor extreme sadness.. The perfect blend of peace and 'dukh' 😆
Please don't lie.. Everything is in your writing comfort 😆
Thanks for the PM.. Beautiful OS

Originally posted by: shreeyoshree

😭 😭 😭
I was litteraly crying twinkle was anable to find kunj...
I knew at the end of the story everything will be fine
But still i was like 😕
U pinned it down so well 👏
I just loved it...

Originally posted by: tikit

Shakti everything happening in show and all u made my day. With this kind of writing u never cease to amaze me.

The time when twinkle came to kunj i was surprised and even i dreaded thinking kunj has died but the moment it turned out kunj was alive i was really happy. I adore ur writings shakti🤗. Thank u for the pm.

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

thanks so much krishi, so glad you liked it! 😳😳😊

😆😆 no this is really outta my comfort zone i don't like writing angst pieces usually

thanks again!