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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

RESS

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This is so heartbreaking and well written. The fact that Yuvi died and she had nothing to say more then just feel sad for him was just too much. At one point she did love him and that gets me everytime.

When she gets to Kunj and sees him shaken up and not breathing. I was really hoping that he would be okay after she said I love you and Im so glad you didn't kill him off here because it would've been too much for poor Twinkle.

amaizng as always!


thanks so much areeba!! ❤️ so very glad you liked it!
i feel like no matter what yuvi was twinkle's first love, no matter how much she hates him now there was something that was very real there and it would effect her if something like this happened
loll tbh i was gonna leave it with kunj dead but then decided to go for a happy ending 😆😆
thanks so much areeba! 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a beautiful piece of writing 👏 so heartbreaking! Loved it Shakthi 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
superb OS from a superb writer
I can easily imagine everything
twinkle's sorrow was so visible in front of me
and the ending is so good at last Kunj's heart starts beating
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Shakti tu ne mujhe rula diya
This is just so amazing
Very Well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os..beautifully written..Loved it..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
It's superb Dii...so yuvi died ...thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Brillian OS Shakti. absolutely loved it. was missing your OS. please write more :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
It was wonderful, Di.
You wrote down Twinkle's emotions brilliantly.. Her reaction on seeing Yuvi was perfect. Neither happiness nor anger nor extreme sadness.. The perfect blend of peace and 'dukh' 😆
Please don't lie.. Everything is in your writing comfort 😆
Thanks for the PM.. Beautiful OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
😭 😭 😭
I was litteraly crying twinkle was anable to find kunj...
I knew at the end of the story everything will be fine
But still i was like 😕
U pinned it down so well 👏
I just loved it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shakti everything happening in show and all u made my day. With this kind of writing u never cease to amaze me.
The time when twinkle came to kunj i was surprised and even i dreaded thinking kunj has died but the moment it turned out kunj was alive i was really happy. I adore ur writings shakti🤗. Thank u for the pm.

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