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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

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kardooks

@kardooks

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Shakti this was just superb, your writing is so good.

The way you describe everything I can actually picture it while reading and the emotions was so raw.

I held my breath when she was holding onto Kunj crying.

This was very beautifully written!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

RESS

This is so heartbreaking and well written. The fact that Yuvi died and she had nothing to say more then just feel sad for him was just too much. At one point she did love him and that gets me everytime.

When she gets to Kunj and sees him shaken up and not breathing. I was really hoping that he would be okay after she said I love you and Im so glad you didn't kill him off here because it would've been too much for poor Twinkle.

amaizng as always!

Edited by areeba_blossom - 9 years ago

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

THIS IS THE BEST SUNDAY. BEING BLESSED WITH OS' FROM ALL OVER. RESSS.

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Let me just start off by saying that I love stories like this. The pain and dread, the whole atmosphere and setting was so perfect. This was amazing Shakti seriously! I actually felt Twinkle's pain on realising that Kunj wasnt breathing. I'm glad you revived him btw because I was beginning to think it has a sad ending. Beautiful.

Out of curiosity, what inspired this?

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Sammy

@Sdea

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Shakti this is beautiful. i was so scared reading it.I was really hoping its not a sad ending. I loved it. The way you explained twinkles feelings omg felt so real.

Do write more!!

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--Jenelle--

@--Jenelle--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Shakti🤗

such a wonderful piece. I love it. The feels omg..

thank you for the pm

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kardooks

@kardooks

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tranquility123
THIS IS THE BEST SUNDAY. BEING BLESSED WITH OS' FROM ALL OVER. RESSS.

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Let me just start off by saying that I love stories like this. The pain and dread, the whole atmosphere and setting was so perfect. This was amazing Shakti seriously! I actually felt Twinkle's pain on realising that Kunj wasnt breathing. I'm glad you revived him btw because I was beginning to think it has a sad ending. Beautiful.

Out of curiosity, what inspired this?

Nemo, what you really want to know is, if this was inspired by Aryan.😆

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Cobra

@FoodSmuggler

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Shakti this was simply amazing

I love how i got so many stories to read today. But dude, this one made me so happy. I know i am weird but i LOVED it.

Yuvi ended up losing his life in his attempt to create havoc in Twinkle and Kunj's life. Idk why but i really think he'll face something similar in the show if he doesn't mend his ways while he can.

Also thank you for bringing Kunj back. This was such a good read

You are a wonderful writer