SS: Invisible Angel *Updated Part Two*

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hayeee what a wonderful surprise! I'll be back soon 😳

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-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -sumaiya-
Wow! So beautifully written and I can sense so many tears on the way! Just my kind of story! Loved reading the first part and the preview already had me almost bawling like a baby! I'll have to steel my nerves for the upcoming parts!

Loved it!

Cheers love for such kind words..really appreciate it <3

The writer herself is going to bawl whilst writing the coming up parts..I glad people are accepting of this genre and enjoy reading it

Thank you once again x

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Inkheart

@ChrissyA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

That was really wonderful

Kinda sad about the miscarriage thingy

Update soon

XOXO

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zaara610

@zaara610

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Interesting start..eagerly waiting for your next update

Please continue soon

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Sapna

@NainoMeinSapna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Wow, I really liked your OS, it's such a fresh and different concept. The end of the first part was kind of saddening because of the dramatic irony. Anyways, if possible, please PM me when you update, I've buddy requested you! :)

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: teddyyy
Hayeee what a wonderful surprise! I'll be back soon 😳

Omg I should've heeded the warning, "not for the faint hearted" because haye Allah mere dil! Inayah, why do you have to be such a beautiful writer?! The dread was slowly building up for me and I was like oh no I know where this is going but can we take a U-turn?! Twinkle's fear was eliminated for the time being, and now it seems she won't even be able to be the one to give him the sad news :( They both will be hurt by her pain in the next part and like I don't understand myself right now cause I'm so weak and I know I'm gonna cry, BUT I love angst filled stories. I am really excited for the next part! Happy you'll be updating soon 😃

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Loved the first part
So Beautifully written
Cant wait for the next part
Update soon

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docritu99

@docritu99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Omg.. Another clinical issue..
Sensing an emergency here..

What an amazing piece of write up buddy..!!

Don't feel urself heartless.. Since such accidents and mishappens do happen in reality and that too with majority of couples around..

Though its fiction but won't be able to see my babies cry and their world shattering..

Ohkay preparing myself to cry buckets along with u and twinj..

Do update soon..