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teddyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -WalkThatWay-

Meh!..don't praise too much, I'm just an amateur..I love writing and reading angst full stories so yeah I had this planned for a while, just hadn't had the time to pen it down..sure will be updating soon, love the kind words of gratitude Teddy..your too sweet x

PSH I believe you are deserving of the praise! Omg reading me too, writing I need to work towards haha. And aww no probs, my pleasure!

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1082575

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

This is amazing can't wait to know what happens next the title is very interesting
Can u pls update Unspoken Words too

Edited by harshi2000 - 9 years ago

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-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Part two is up to read..enjoy!

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

OMGGG LET ME GRAB MY TISSUES BRO. RES.

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-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Tranquility123
OMGGG LET ME GRAB MY TISSUES BRO. RES.

I don't think you will need them..this part is not quite heartbreaking as the next one will be 😆

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

I DON'T KNOW IF IM READY EITHER NEMO, I'm going I'm going 😆

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Yeah thank you just HAD to start with Kunj baby doing a little countdown right?! I'm not supposed to be emotional after the first line itself Inayah. Haye mera dil. I didn't cry this time but dude not fair, why a stillborn?!!?!? This is so horrible, they are both so happy and it's so close to the due date. And omg Twinkle's pain :( She should have said something but then I understand her fear and hesitance. I can't imagine Kunj's reaction at finding her in such a position. How's he gonna take care of her when he's the most excited one? My feels. Like when she almost got hurt and he yelled at her and then Twinkle being strong for him, I can't.

Remember we were talking about how a piece is good if we can visualize it? Every second dude, so I loved this part as much as the first, I thought you did a splendid job! Truly excited for the next part all while afraid for the pain haha. Your writing skills are brilliant

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

A miscarriage would've been easier to handle but a stillborn.. that broke my heart! Both of them were so excited for their child and everyone in family seemed so happy.

This was so brilliantly and well written honestly!!

Update the third part soonish !!

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-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: harshi2000
This is amazing can't wait to know what happens next the title is very interesting
Can u pls update Unspoken Words too

I will be continuing with that once I have completed this one..apologies I know it's been delayed but I had reason for it:

1. Exams came in the way when I started that story

2. I came to know from someone that it was plagiarised and posted onto a different website

These reasonings is why I lost interest in writing for a while because it's quite disheartening when someone blatantly copies work that has had a lot of hard work and effort put into it..but its encouragement from the likes of you and many others that motivates me to continue it, so I shall

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Sammy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

It's 3 am at my place and I saw your comment about uploading part 2 and I just couldn't go to sleep. And it was sooo worth it.
I literally love the way you write. You make even simple part sound so beautiful. It was wonderfully written. So simple yet so nice.So the major drama and angst is for the next one. And even though you updated just now am going to beg you upload soon. ❤️

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-WalkThatWay-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

A miscarriage would've been easier to handle but a stillborn.. that broke my heart! Both of them were so excited for their child and everyone in family seemed so happy.

This was so brilliantly and well written honestly!!

Update the third part soonish !!

I had originally planned for her to have a miscarriage but seen as though Twinkle in my story has a full developed foetus it would look illogical for her to have a miscarriage at such a late stage, as they happen a lot sooner..somewhere in between 10 weeks - 13 weeks

Meh!..I myself ain't happy with this update, my heart just doesn't feel content after reading it..its a mess and a miss, hopefully the next part gives me the ability to etch out my imagination much better

Third part shall be written up no later than Friday as I am off uni on that day and will be uploaded shortly after