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Duumps

@Duumps

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This is an awesome OS.

Loved it.

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

It is just too awesome. Loved it.

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Eshita

@tikit

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Areeba this was cute and awesome os and a well deserving one. Twinj are like this if one is angry the other one tries to pacify the other. Hoping u do write os's more. Thanks for the pm.

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Areeba!Thank you so so much for writing this piece and more importantly sharing with us🤗

This was so freaking adorable,I think I will never get tired of their playful nok jhoks.

It was spot on,typical Kunj-Twinkle,so want this in the show when the ongoing track ends.

The ending was absolutely perfect,him telling her not to check him out🤣

Oh and I loved the beginning too,Twinkle muttering in the pillow and then what all she did too get his attention🤣

How could Kunj even resist all of it😆

And undoubtedly the wardrobe scene was the best☺️😉

Edited by --Natasha-- - 9 years ago

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--Jenelle--

@--Jenelle--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Areeba🤗

i just loved it... it was so cute...

the wardrobe scene☺️

did i mention i loved it? cuz i do. beautifully penned...

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Amazing!!!!

I loved everything about this story...it was just so TwiNj.

Beautiful 👏👏

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

thank you guys for so much love! I'm glad you guys liked it because I'm super terrible at light hearted romance and excel at angsty stuff so the fact you guys liked this really means a lot!

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Totally get the feeling Areeba🤗

This was really a good one😃

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Yo I dont even know what to say. I'm smiling like a goofball right now 😆

The sexual tension between them is so hilarious but such a pleasure to read. I want to know what Twinkle sent him pictures of, dont leave it to my imagination dude, it knows no bounds 🤣

Seriously this was such a good read Areeba. And worth the wait too. Your analyses are always worded so brilliantly so I'm not surprised that this was equally well written. Dude you should totally write more often.

P.S Was in the middle of writing this when I received your PM. I was already here before you invited me, how awesome am I? (rhetorical question, dont answer it) 😎😆

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Tranquility123
Yo I dont even know what to say. I'm smiling like a goofball right now 😆

The sexual tension between them is so hilarious but such a pleasure to read. I want to know what Twinkle sent him pictures of, dont leave it to my imagination dude, it knows no bounds 🤣

Seriously this was such a good read Areeba. And worth the wait too. Your analyses are always worded so brilliantly so I'm not surprised that this was equally well written. Dude you should totally write more often.

P.S Was in the middle of writing this when I received your PM. I was already here before you invited me, how awesome am I? (rhetorical question, dont answer it) 😎😆

OMG that's why i didn't elaborate on the pictures. 😆

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