TwiNj 5S - Don't Fall For The Tutor - Part4/Page21

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naaz.samreen

@naaz.samreen

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it 😳
Welcome to the forum btw!

I don't have an index but all my work is listed in the Media Gallery under my username if you want to read anymore 😃

Ahh tysm. I sure would love to read all your works. <3 and pleaseee update this one sooon. The wait is killing me. :D

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: --Natasha--
res!!!!!!!!!!

WHY DID YOU HAVE TO LEAVE US HANGING!

Great!Now I can't pick a favourite chapter coz this was just as good as the previous ones so this is my favourite 5S overall!

I love how Twinkle gets offensive most of the times and she thought that Kunj wanted to go out with her.😆

Kunj asking the boys when trying to convince Twinkle about the 'Guys way' of paying attention to girls reminded me of Friends!

And I love that she has not only bonded with Kunj but withothers too,how protective everyone got for her

Update soon!!!

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livelovelaughh

@livelovelaughh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#173

When are you updating the next part ??? Please update soon !!

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...
res 😃😃😃
unres
uhmhmmm i'm sure he just wants her to prove it for the challenge not like he doesn't wanna kiss her 😆😆 his name should be changed to smart sarna cause that was a smart move right there 🤣
awww loved this update nemo! it was perfect!!
twinj were so adorable throughout the entire thing, like come on can they get any more oblivious they so have the hots for each other! 😉
so now time to bother you for the next update of this! it better be faster than this one :P😆😆 or team #nemoneedstoupdate will retaliate 🤣
loved it!

PS sorry teds for getting first 😳😳😆

LOOOL I LOVE HOW YOU HAVE A TEAM TO BOTHER ME 🤣

Kunj is an idiot in this tbh. We all know guys are stupid and next update will pretty much emphasise that to an extent. I didn't want to leave it at a cliffhanger but I thought it'd be hilarious to see all your reactions and I don't regret it one bit 🤣

They have definitely started to warm to each other, it's the small things ☺️

Thanks for the amazing comments as always Shakti, you my girl! Waiting 'patiently' for Just Friends to be updated you know... Just saying 😆

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
RESS
teddy ka spot gaga!
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NO FRIGGIN SHIT OMG WHATT!!!!

Ok first of all, that guy thing is so not a guy thing. Kunj just wants to be the one by her side to make sure the deal is fulfilled and he's making excuses at best to prove his own thinking and ego correct.

Also, little black dress does wonders. I loved how he was totally bowled over her and more so then the Verma douche!

PS4 is not cheap and gifting it like that. Man i wis i had that kind of money. But i totally loved the guys' reactions.

the fight in the end had me all tensed up until he asked her to prove him. THEY ARE GOING TO FRIGGIN KISS!

shizz is about to go down!

Amazing update Nemo!

Next one is last or in parts? update soonish okay. no pressure. 😃

ARE YOU ANALYSING MY WRITING? Bruh even I haven't thought about the reasons behind Kunj's actions yet 🤣

I agree, you can never go wrong with black. It's always a safe option 😎 He's falling and he's falling hard 😆

The ps4 was something I inserted because Karen asked me why an Xbox when ps4 is better apparently, so I thought why not. Let's just pretend that they are not as expensive in this story as they are in real life🤣

Are they actually going to kiss though? I didn't think about it going down that route at first but cliffhangers are great when I'm not the one reading them 🤣

Still deciding that tbh, depends on how much I end up writing I suppose. Might have to split it in two again.

Thanks a tonne bro!

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shivangi yadav

@lovelifeangle

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Please update soon eagerly waiting 😊

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Sdea
omg omg omg my update is here at last🤗
I love you for this Nemo
I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY and this update was so amazing.
I am going to start from the bottom, they are going to kiss OMG OMG OMG i am literally blushing ☺️.I could just imagine everything in my head and i have a very good imagination power so you can understand my excitement reading the end😳
So my guy passed of course he did, taneja tutored him after all.And she gifted him a PS4, they be such cutieeesss.
This Verma dude gives me trouble vibes😕 And he seems sooo boring.Why is Twinkle even interested in him😒.
But i can totally see the sparks flying somewhere else😳.Their conversation was so good regarding the whole date.And the guys are sooo cute,loved how they went to being annoyed with each other to good friends ❤️
is the story already getting over?😭 But koi nahi do update soon.
You honestly don't know my excitement when i see this story updated

Sammy your comments are love! Thank you so much 😆

I'm glad you have great imagination, I need you all to be on my level of greatness 🤣

Dw who is Verma in front of our Sarna? He's no trouble I assure you, although the I haven't decided yet tbh but considering I want to wrap this up, I'm not going to extend the drama like that. LOOOL Twinkle will be thinking the same thing once she goes on that date I promise 😆

Yup it will be coming to an end soon, but I'll try to make it a good one bro.

Thank you for being such a sweetheart with the amazing comments !

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Cobra

@FoodSmuggler

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Nemo, i think i am partially blind cos i didn't see this update

I think i have two chaps to comment upon

Will do that soon

P.S being an enthu cutlet, i read about a kiss, well an invitation to kiss Mr Sarna. I better get to see a kiss lady 😆

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#179

update soonish please 😃 team #nemoneedstoupdate is here 😎

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: 3dancelover
BRO YOU KILLED IT
I absolutely loved it
the dynamic the guys share with Twinkle is amazing
THE ENDING you can't leave me hanging for long plz update soon!
I am overly excited for part 5

Thank you so much dude!

I love when guys get protective over their female friends, personal experience, it's so adorable at times 😆

I will try my best honestly but no promises😳

Thanks again!