TwiNj 5S - Don't Fall For The Tutor - Part4/Page21 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kardooks

She gift him a PS4 eh, ok so I'm going to take credit for that😆.

I was curious though in the party when she couldn't find him I was thinking oh no don't tell me she's going to fing him in bed with someone😲 relieved that the boys got her back. Yuvraj is really sweet in this story. Was he shocked, hurt or disappointed in hearing that she wasn't a virgin, seems Sarna is confused, did he just challenge her to kiss him.
Oh boy oh boy things are getting interesting😆
Awesome update Nemo.


You can take the credit for that because it's true 🤣
LOOOL OMG KAREN I LOVE YOU 🤣🤣🤣 I'm not going to lie, I was so so tempted, but it would make the story long and I wanted to wrap it up so I played it shareef 😆
Yes Yuvi's the good guy, because my KuVi feels don't allow anything else to happen. Their bromance is a must 😆
I don't know, you tell me? Maybe a bit of all three? I guess he might've wanted to be her first but she wouldn't be his so it's only fair 😆
I'm so glad you're liking it! Thanks a tonne stace!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update 😳
Simply superb
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww.. Today is probably the great day for me.. Since lately m here on forum for practically more than 1 hr and went through so many awesome stories..

I just love Twinj here.. They so wanted to be around each other.. Twinks feel protected in his company and he finds reasons to be near her to make sure she is safe and sound.. Moreover they are not known abt their attachment and fondness..

The last one was a smart move from sarna.. Its not just that he wanted to prove but he wanted to kiss her.. He couldn't bear the fact of her being not a virgin.. Wow.. This is totally my kind of story..

Love you nemo for bringing this..

Next update plz.. What else is there in reserve apart from kiss..??

I m getting so impatient now..

Update..!! Update..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
People fight for spot one and I think I have become a permanent last spot member.. All the credit goes to the busy life..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Inkheart

Dude what the hell just happened

That was too much for me to digest. I'm totally shipping Twinj right now. but I'm sort piss Twinkle wasn't pristine, I wanted Kunj to do the honour. Btw, this PS4 is not at all a bad choice... way to go girl. Update quickly pretty please.

I'm going to take the first line as a good thing 😆
Yes yes yes! Totally ship them!
Awhh sorry to disappoint but the girl has had some action before. As much as I think first times are very intimate and special between a couple, I didn't want to go for the typical good girl, bad boy storyline where the girl is literally portrayed as an untouched pious soul. Twinkle Taneja isn't a saint here, she's a sassy sherni 😎
Ps4 credits go to Karen, she called me out on it before so I thought I'd incorporate it 😆

Thanks for you comments! Will try to soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs

Fantastic Nemo..

Kunj Sarna is a smarty...
Loved the date scene..
And I love the equation twinkle share with the boys..
Wait twinkle is not a virgin?? Look KUNJ was shocked or confused..
Boy she challenged her to kiss him to prove she is a good kisser
Wow..
U r going to finish this nooo..
Plz update next part soon.


Thank you so much Lavs!
I'm so glad you're liking it, I love her equation too!
Things are about to get interesting between them now 😆

Thanks again dude!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love LOVE ABSOLUTELY LOve this story!!

This chappie was amazing👏👏
The biys and Twinkle are becoming such good friends *sigh*
Loved how Kunj wrapped his arm around her and said 'I've got you'!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃

Loving this story to pieces..
Thanks for this gem!


It makes me so happy that you like this story because I love all your works! ☺️
Thank you so much for your response dude!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Duumps

Awesome update
Loved the comaraderie the guys share with Twinkle
How they have her back at the party
Loved the challenge Kunj threw at her for the kiss.
Can't wait for the next update.


Thanks a tonne dude!
She's grown on them more than they'd like to admit 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TWINJ_SIDMIN

Omg i loved it !!!! When are you updating the next part ??? Please update soon !


Thank you 😳

No promises 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Anjum.

Wow wow wow !! Just awesome dude... I'm totally in love with this one :))) plz . update it soon !! N nooo last one ??

Ohhh !!!! Plz updateee


Thank you Anjum 😳
Yup aiming to wrap it up at part 5 so hopefully next one is the last one 😆

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