TwiNj 5S - Don't Fall For The Tutor - Part4/Page21

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Flower.girl
Ohhh dear , amazing update ... please continue soon... why did you left me in a suspense 😉... please tell me when are updating

Thank you so much! I wasn't planning on leaving you all on a cliffhanger but my mind decided it would work in my favour so here it is 😆

Will try soon but no promises 😳

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

WHY DID YOU HAVE TO LEAVE US HANGING!

Great!Now I can't pick a favourite chapter coz this was just as good as the previous ones so this is my favourite 5S overall!
I love how Twinkle gets offensive most of the times and she thought that Kunj wanted to go out with her.😆
Kunj asking the boys when trying to convince Twinkle about the 'Guys way' of paying attention to girls reminded me of Friends!
And I love that she has not only bonded with Kunj but withothers too,how protective everyone got for her

Update soon!!!

THE BEAUTY OF SUSPENSE NATS 😆

Thank you so much bruh, that honestly means so much to me! Motivation is key in getting quicker updates btw 🤣

I love bro-buddy relationships, it's why I love SidMin so much, so I thought it was a must in this story! I'm so happy that you're enjoying it, I'll try to keep their growing friendships in mind more often.

Thanks again Nat!

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel
Nemo, i think i am partially blind cos i didn't see this update
I think i have two chaps to comment upon
Will do that soon

P.S being an enthu cutlet, i read about a kiss, well an invitation to kiss Mr Sarna. I better get to see a kiss lady 😆

LOOOL it's fine Tee, no worries. I guess I should send out PMs but I'm too lazy 😆

Yes you do, take your time buddy. Looking forward to your response 😎

🤣🤣 Out of everything, you see the kiss? What have we done to you? 🤣

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
Loved the update 😳
Simply superb
waiting for the next part

Thank you Anisha ! 😊

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: docritu99
Awww.. Today is probably the great day for me.. Since lately m here on forum for practically more than 1 hr and went through so many awesome stories..

I just love Twinj here.. They so wanted to be around each other.. Twinks feel protected in his company and he finds reasons to be near her to make sure she is safe and sound.. Moreover they are not known abt their attachment and fondness..

The last one was a smart move from sarna.. Its not just that he wanted to prove but he wanted to kiss her.. He couldn't bear the fact of her being not a virgin.. Wow.. This is totally my kind of story..

Love you nemo for bringing this..

Next update plz.. What else is there in reserve apart from kiss..??

I m getting so impatient now..

Update..!! Update..!!

Dude, the forum is like every fans dream come true with the amount of new fanfics and shots we've got lately. I'm always reading something, it's great!

Thank you so much for your lovely comments Riya! I'm so happy to know youre liking it so far 😎

I don't give away spoilers bro 😆

You won't have to wait long hopefully, the next update will most likely be the last one so just hang in there a little longer 😳

Thanks again dude 😃

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

ARE YOU ANALYSING MY WRITING? Bruh even I haven't thought about the reasons behind Kunj's actions yet 🤣

I agree, you can never go wrong with black. It's always a safe option 😎 He's falling and he's falling hard 😆

The ps4 was something I inserted because Karen asked me why an Xbox when ps4 is better apparently, so I thought why not. Let's just pretend that they are not as expensive in this story as they are in real life🤣

Are they actually going to kiss though? I didn't think about it going down that route at first but cliffhangers are great when I'm not the one reading them 🤣

Still deciding that tbh, depends on how much I end up writing I suppose. Might have to split it in two again.

Thanks a tonne bro!

I don't why but it happens with me in everything. I end up analyzing jokes. 🤣😎

THEY BETTER KISS OMG ARE THEY? WHAT S THIS SO MUCH SUSPENSE! 🤪

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Hey everyone!

First of all a huge thank you to you all for your comments and appreciation. You guys are amazing and someone as lazy as myself needs all the motivation she can get, so thank you for all the PMs and nagging for updates too 😆

Right so here's the bad news. I know I left you all on a cliffhanger and a lot of you really want the last part to be updated soon but unfortunately with Ramadan potentially starting tomorrow, I haven't had time to write it up and I probably won't have time to do so throughout Ramadan either. Therefore, the last update will be posted next month most likely. Sorry for the long wait but until then, I hope you guys will stick around the forum 😃

Thanks a tonne guys!