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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-2
twinkle who was praying to her babaji heard kunj's roar nd hurried towards bebe's room
[COLOR=PINK]meanwhile in bebe's room[/COLOR]
ANITA: akhir ye ladki chahti kya hai..pehle bhaisahab ko hospital pahonchaya or ab ye mera toh dil baitha ja raha hai bechara kunj ab toh usha bhi nahi hai kaun sambhalega ise...sarna parivar toh jaise bikhar hi gaya ho..aur in sab ki wajah kaun hai
MAHI: twinkle di
ANITA:exactly pata nahi kis janam ka badla le rahi hai sb se
kunj who was already seething went mad after hearing
twinkle came nd saw kunj..
Twinkle's inner talk: bechara kunj kya kuch nahi sehna pad raha hai use i knw wo bahot naraz hai but iss waqt use meri zaroorat sb se zyada hai...im with you kunj sb thik ho jayega we'll wade through this
TWINKLE: kunj tumne bulaya wo mai babaj...
Before she can complete her words kunj dragged her outside of sarna house nd barked
KUNJ: bebe ko dawai tune di..he was not shouting his tone was menancing nd eyes bloodshot burning with fury
TWINKLE:kunj baat kya hai
KUNJ: haan ya na he closed the distance BW them
TW:haan par..
Kunj pinned her to a nearby wall nd said
Kunj: us dawai expire hogayi thi.. aj teri wajah se mere pariwar ki yeh halat hai..
TWINKLE: thats impossible kunh maine khud check kiya tha
KUnj:jhoot bolna band kat twinkle
ab kya wo doctor jhoot bol raha hai...
Before twinkle can defend herself twinkle heard smthing which left her defenseless
Kunj:you are the biggest mistake of my life twinkle taneja.i hate you with every fibre of my being..pata nahi kyu mai tujh se mila i jst wish i can go back i my life nd undo evrything lets say remove you from my life teri aur tere so called boyfriend ki wajah se hamesha bhugatna meri family ko padta hai. Aur
MAHI:jiju doctor apko bula rahe hai
nd with that kunj left a shatterd twinkle..minutes after kunj lefr
twinkle who was crying started laughing hysterically
TWINKLE:babaji ye kaise kaise sapne dikhate ho aap..aisa bhi koi karta hai kya..hmm jitna darawna sapna hai mera kunj,mera kunj mere liye aisa kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta bolna toh bahot door ki baat hai..
with that she startes pinching,scratching herself hoping that she will be out of this nightmare when she will open her eyes but alas it was not a dream but a harsh reality...
"A heart breaking isn't always as loud as a bomb exploding.. Sometimes it can be as quiet as a feather falling.. And the most painful thing is, no one really hears it, except you.."
TWINKLE: ye sab mere saath hi kyun hota hai kya mai itni buri hoon dont i deserve love...kya mummyji sach keh rahi thi am i jinxed ? Kya mai manhoos hun ? Bolo na babaji apne mujhe aisi kyun banaya ? Kunj's word re-played in her mind nd she started weeping bitterly...
It was past 12.00am BEBE was sound sleep due to meds nobody cared abt twinkle nd she didnt dared to step in sarna house...
Due to all the happenings kunj was having a bad headache..he took sm sleeping pills nd crashed on bed before that he called the servant nd told him to call twinkle inside as its quite late
twinkle enterd the sarna house nd looked at every nook nd corner of the house... She remebers each nd evry moment spent with kunj...
She was now infront of their correction his room when she enterd the room what she saw melted her heart sadu sarna sleeping like a baby looking awwwdorable..she came near nd caressed his face
TWINKLE: im sorry kunj,extremely sorry but maine jo kuch bhi dad ke liye kiya mujhe koi pachtawa nahi hai he is my dad too i knw i should 've informed you but im sorry but this does'nt justify what you said to me jst now...tum chahte hona ki mai tumhari life se chali jaon thik hai aisa hi hoga but always remember sadu sarna I LOVE YOU nd will always love you no matter what may be we are destinies to be seperated..
She bent her head nd placed a light peck on his lips..LOVE U
with that twinkle walked out of kunj's room...sarna house nd his life
jst seconds after twinkle left kunj stirred in his sleep i love you too twinkle he said smiling nd fell into deep slumber..but call it bad luck or destiny siyappa queen was not their to witness his confession
End of flashback
with these thoughts in mind twinkle was walking on a deserted road
a car was speeding towards her unknown to twinkle...the driver of the car was continously pressing the horn
when the car was near twinkle the driver was baffled
DRIVER: what the f*ck am i hallucinating ? It cant be possible aisa kaise ho sakta hai.. A momentaraily lost of control leads to a big accident

here is the 2nd chapter..thnk you for all those wonderful comments
ps:the drive of the car will play a full fledged role in my story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Wow beautifully written.
Loved it
You are on a role ek hi din mai itne saare updates wow loving it.
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
PROMO:a devasted kunj...worried leela...sad bebejst then the bell rang..cherry went to open the doorwhen the opened the door the person infront of him shocked him ..Dressed in a ellie sab gown with a diamond piece adorning her neck a gucci hand bag in her hand with nude make-up complementing her skin tone twinkle looked like a godess who could put disney princesses to shame..Cherry: oye..G..Twink: good for nothing pls move aside she pushed him aside nd enternd the sarna houseanita was enraged,yuvi was happy,mahi was confused anand was expressionless bebe was beyond happy nd finally kunh he felt alive again his heart started to beat again he rushed towards her to take her in a bone-crushing hug when twinkle stopped him..KUNJ: twinkle tu aa gayi tujhe pata hai mai...TWINKLE: i would like to be adressed professionally mr.kunj sarna its ms.twinkle taneja ..That moment kunj felt something break inside him his heart
Edited by beingdumb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
interesting update dear <3 pls mention page no on title 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Interesting chapter and More interestibg Precape Do update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wooow unique and interesting concept!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is a really interesting story! 😳 continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter-3the morning after twinkle left...Kunj woke up with a slight smile on his lips feeling smthing different involuntarily he touched lips nd his smile widend..Kunj self talk: itna ajeeb sa kyun lag raha hai yaar..im feeling smwhat differentshrugging his thoughts he went for a shower...got dressed nd was looking hot as hell..When he turned back he was welcomed by the sight of his beautiful wife who was wearing a beautiful black sequin saree with a backless blouse showing a hint of her cleavage...kunj was mesmerised his heart started pounding at the speed of 1000kmps 😆 twinkle comes forward puts her arms across his neck while tilting her head closerKUNJ: Twi..Nk..le . Tw..inkle ye kya kar rahi hai..he thanked god that he was able to complete his sentence TWINKLE: jaan, y do you always do this ?Kunj: he gulped..breathing unsteady he replied d..o do what ?Twinkle: you cant look this hot always. She said running her hands on his shirt while unbuttoning them slowly nd seductively...Kunj: twinkle ye kya kar rahi hai...koi ajayega kunj stuttered...Twinkle: ane do "pati ho tum mere" aur waise ab bardasht nahi ho raha...u knw you always make my ovaries explode when you walk out of shower jst draping a towel..how i wish i can devour you,run my hands all over you,to kiss you senseless nd of course she said coming closer to his ears take of your towel.Kunj who was hearing all this was taken aback by the boldness of his S.queen never in his wildest dreams he thought this day will come..ofcourse he was blushing profusely...twinkle started kissing his namethat's it he cant control it anymore he pinned her nd was abt to kiss her when..."KUNJ BABA"the servant called his name for the nth time who was holding smthing in air KUNJ BABA he screamed...finally kunj jerked out of his day drean nd gave a foolish grin to the servant..KUnj S.TALK: god i was hallucinating abt twinkle or wo bhi aise god ye ladki mujhe paagal karke chodegi...Tum jao mai aata hun he said to the servant...When he again thought abt twinkle his guilt increased by 1000 folds..KUNJ S.thoghts: ye maine kya ka diya...ye kya hogaya mujhse main aisa kaise kar sakta hun patni hai wo meri...o really mocked his inner self..vada kiya tha usse ki har waqt saath dunga phir mai kaise his voice choked,tears glistening his eyes..Mujhe maafi mangni padegi..kya guzri hogi usse im...im really sorry twinkle pls i cant he wiped his tears got up witha determined face...LIVING ROOM:kunj:twinkle...twinkle he starte shouting gaining attention from evry1 anita:shuru hogaya dramaTWinkle he called again but there is no sight of herjst thn a servant came runningtwinkle baby chali gayichali gayi thw word echoed in his mind...how can she leave,no... She cant leave how can i live without her...i've lost my dad my mom is nowhere she knw i'll die if i lost her NO..KUNJ:kya matlab chali gayiS: apne kal raat bulaya uske baad wo apke kamre me gayi phir bahar chali gayi..maine pucha toh kahan wo apki wish puri kar rahi haii wish i could go back in time nd remove you feom my life he remembered his spiteful words..NO..twinkle pls wapas aajaLEELA:kedi wish kitthe gayi meri kudi ? Leela said on the verge of breaking down..ANITA: teri..bet..Before she could complete thr was a resounding sound of slap in sarna house...Anita touched her stinging cheekyuvi charged towards leela bt backed off seeing the fury in her eyesLEELA: meri nazron se door hoja varna...her voice was slow nd menancinganita was gombsacked she never saw leela in this avatar no she was not leela she is a lioness who can rip her apart if she utterd a word fearing for her life she walked out of sarna house with pure hatred expressions on her face...Kunj looked at leela nd knw thr was a lot to explainkunj explained all that has happendleela wanted to scream nd slap kunj bt she knew he was already broken nd she cant see her child breaking into pieces..she took him ina bone crushing hug nd said sb theek hojayega puttar..vahe guru hai naa kunj wept bitterly in the lap of his motherPS: chapter 3 updated
Edited by beingdumb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
This was so good,The way kunj imagines twinkle was ☺️
Looking forward to next chapter.

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