TWINJ FF: double trouble chapter 18 page 17 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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tht was quick and awesome update. loved it <3
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Loved the concept! Go ahead bro! Loved it! Update soon
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Awesome update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
read all three...very interesting
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WOW...Amazing!!! LOVED IT TO THE CORE!!!❤️
Read all ur updates in one go!!!😳
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Simply AWESOME!!!😃😳😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter-4he knw what death means thnx to the many near death experiences...death kills u oncebut ri8 nw he is feeling he is dieing with each passing second..Twinkle is missing since 3 days nd there is no news of her..Bebe's health is deteriorating each day..."meri nuh kitthe hai" she used to ask kunj only to get silence as replyin all this mess yuvi was dissapointed his plan failed yet again...he thought that by changing that old hag's medicines kunj nd twinkle will drift apart...never ever he thought that twinkle will leave sarna house..now the question is what should he do ? Other than plotting against twinj he dont have any other work...his way yard attitude got him blacklisted in the business so,him bagging a job is next to impossible as of now..on the top of that he got a moot ass in the name of a wife...who's Y...Y.Yuvi is cringeworthy..mom must be partying as her plan worked big time..he sighed nd went to sleepsmwhr in a hospital in punjab in sm XYZ areatwinkle woke up clutching her dead her vision was fuzzy...a look at her surrounding nd she concluded that she in a hospitalTWINKLe: mai yahan jb se hun ? Sb kitne pareshan honge ghar pe ? Kunj kitna pareshan hoga ? Aahhh twinkle winced..GIRL:are are zyada stress mat lo tumhare liye theek nahi hai.. DOCTORRR screamed the girlTWINKLE self talk: she heard this voice its very familiar...like she hears this voice everyday..to clear her confusion she lifted her head nd what she saw or lets the person whom she saw left her surprised,dazed, shocked...sarna house 3 hours laterevrything was still an eerie silence surrounded the sarna house...Jst then the bell rang..cherry went to open the door...the person infront him surprised him nd he was oggling her shamelesslyDressed in a ellie sab gown with a diamond piece adorning her neck a gucci hand bag in her hand with nude make-up complementing her skin tone twinkle looked like a godess who could put disney princesses to shame..Cherry: oye..G..Twink: good for nothing pls move aside she pushed him aside nd enternd the sarna house anita was enraged,yuvi was happy,mahi was confused anand was expressionless bebe was beyond happy nd finally kunj he felt alive again his heart started to beat again he rushed towards her to take her in a bone-crushing hug when twinkle stopped him..KUNJ: twinkle tu aa gayi tujhe pata hai mai...TWINKLE: i would like to be adressed professionally mr.kunj sarna its ms.twinkle taneja..That moment kunj felt something break inside him his hearttwinkle yeh tu kyatwinkle:mr.sarna as i said its miss.twinkle taneja so plss i request you to call me by my surname.Oh ho tevar toh dekho iske anita butted in 3 din se gayab thi pata nahi apne kis ashiq ke sath ghum rahi thikunj was livid how dare she to talk shit abt my wife..before kunj can reply a calm twinkle walked towards anita taking slow steps like a predatorTWINKLE: mrs anita luthra sarna you must be confused mai twinkle hin yuvi ka biological baap nahi nd plss even if was with my lover you should be the last person to complain jo apne budhape me dusri shadi kar sakti hai akelepan se bachne ke liye socho bhari jawani me kitno ki raatein rangeen ki hongi usne came a calm nd sassy reply from twinkleanita felt sm1 jst slapped her tightlyANITA:how dare you ?Twinkle: cut the crap sweetheart apna ye pravachan apni good for nothing bahu ko sunao i dnt have time to waste on low-lives like you so. Tai saas ji i kindly request you to F*CK OFF with that she moves towards her room shocking 1 nd all
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing Update!
You update really fast!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arre waah😆 !! Amazing story 😳
Lovely concept and read all the parts in a go 😳😛
I think something is missing 🤔from twinkle consciousness in hospital to her return to home ! How a sudden change in her 😕 Plz clear 😃😛

Plz continue soon 😳and plz do p.m. me whenever done 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROMO 1: USHA IS BACK------> ye kachra ab tak ghar se nahi gaya...knwing very will this will hurt her DIL the most abe yaar ab ye kachra ghar me phir se kaise agaya said twinkle with sassto say usha was shocked will be an understatement she was confused,nd enraged waise aap itni jaldi wapas kaise agayi..OH silly me! Twinkle exclaimed charon dhamo se hakal diya hoga apko she said as if stating a factnd walked of cooly leaving a bewildered usha behind
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PROMO-2after praying twinkle was leaving gurudwara...when she crashed with a woman scaterring her belongingsim extremely sorry aunty mai ise uthane me help karti humoye hoye puttar ji koi gal nahi ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi..the gorgeous woman who may be in her mid 50's replied with motherly warmthfor a second she thought its her own mammawhile picking up the woman's belongings she came across a picture that shocked herauntyji,ye photo mai kaun hain asked twinkle with hesitationBeta,ye mere pati hai...kai baras pehle inka dehant hogayaoh,im xtremely sorry waise aap yahan ke toh nahi lagte ? Asked twinkle curiously hoping to get more infohaan puttarji wo mere bete ke business k silsile me aye hai bus do din pehle waise ap amritsar me hi ruke ho naa asked twinklehaan beta...chal ab mai chalti hun..kismat me hoga toh phir milenege ..waise badi changi kudi hai tu replied the womanab toh milna hota hi rahega aunty ji the woman leftOMG! Screamed twinkle to ye aurat anita aunty ki sautan hai..matlab yuvi ki step-mom twinkle murmured to herself astonishinglybahot shauk hai na logon ki zindagiyon se khel ne ka tum dono maa-bete ko...ab jo sehlaab mai laane wali hun usme tum dono ka dubna pakka hai...said twinkle with an evil smirk
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