TWINJ FF: double trouble chapter 18 page 17 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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AMAZING PROMO!!!
Eagerly waiting for the nxt part!!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum, sorry for being late.
Amazing story.
Very excited for what's coming up.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you every1 for encouraging me...nd for commenting..i saw that many writers saying this is not my usual writing style,i've attempted smthing different blah blah blah...im nt one of those as i dnt have any writing style this is my 1st story nd i expected a lot of criticism but you all lovely people are praising my work...its very motivating..Ok so, my name is samaira...my UID is beingdumb because my friends says that im a dumbo😆...im a huge fan of FEmir that is emir feriha of AFK nd i also love shayri's...im a pro when it comes to lame shayri's this piece is esplly for my love yuvraj.arz kiya hai.koi pathar se na maaro is deewane ko,gaur farmaiye hazraat koi pathar se na maare is deewane ko,koi pathar se na maare is deewane ko nuclear ka zamana hai bomb se uda do saale ko😆shukriya shukriya shukriya...i knw bahot hi acha tha i have full confidence on my talent nd i'll surely win a golden kela,ghanta or balti award soon😆..till then sayonara peeps
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update. Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for next update do continue soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The promo is deffo interestibg!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing promos😃
Sounds very interesting 😳
Plz continue soon 😳😛
And ua shaayari 😆was awesome 👏😆 good job for uv 😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Amazing Samaira di...love ur FF a lot!!!🤗❤️
😆 lol...ur frnz are wrong di u are not dumb/dumbo at all u r brilliant di!!!
U know what my frnz call me a stupid genius...as sometimes i ask stupid questions😆 lol!
Well update soonish di!!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Phycho

<font color="#0000ff">Amazing Samaira di...love ur FF a lot!!!🤗❤️</font>

<font color="#0000ff">😆lol...ur frnz are wrong di u are not dumb/dumbo at all u r brilliant di!!!
</font>
<font color="#0000ff">U know what my frnz call me a stupid genius...as sometimes i ask stupid questions😆lol!</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Well update soonish di!!!😳</font>

LMAO stupid genius that is jst so like me...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phycho

<font color="#0000ff">Amazing Samaira di...love ur FF a lot!!!🤗❤️</font>

<font color="#0000ff">😆lol...ur frnz are wrong di u are not dumb/dumbo at all u r brilliant di!!!
</font>
<font color="#0000ff">U know what my frnz call me a stupid genius...as sometimes i ask stupid questions😆lol!</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Well update soonish di!!!😳</font>

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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter-6
"haan yahi par rokdo"usha said to the driver of the cab..stepping out of the cab she looked at her home intently "AH" her home how she missed it...sure she had gone for a piligrimage but her heart was not at peace an eerie feeling engulfed her heart..hence here she is standing infront of her house..she paid the amount to the cab driver nd went inside..usha got nostlagic thinking abt all the past events..her husband is in coma..nd her son is in immense pain why ? Oh why her family has to suffer ? "TWINKLE" that girl is the sole cause of the misery in her house..she was against the wedding of her darling son to that brat girl from the start as she knew that she cant be a "sarna bahu" cursing her fate nd twinkle usha rang the bell only to find the door ajar "arre ye darwaza khula kyun hai" usha thought..opening the door she went inside but the sight in front of her mad e her blood boil..twinkle was having an animated conversation with sm1 on phone...hearing her laugh usha cringed.."yahan mera pariwaar shok mana raha hai or ye itna khilkhila rahi hai"muttered usha
twinkle saw usha from the corner of her eyes but ignored her presence once she was done she turned and looked at usha with a confused expression.."pata nahi manohar sarna ne isme kya dekha jo isse shaadi karli" mai toh iske constipated expressions dekh kar hi reject kar deti thought twinklewith a fake smile plastered on her face she walked towards usha"arre mummyji" said twinkle...before she could completetoh ye kachra ab tak ghar me hi hai...said usha with a winning smirk knowing very well this will strip twinkle's smile from her facelittle did usha know this was not the same twinkle she left behind before 4 dhaam...with a wide smile on her face twinkle replied"ab ye kachra phir se ghar me agaya" not fair babji complained twinkleusha was shell-shocked the twinkle who didnt dare to look directly in her eyes taunted her back...usha was taken abackwaah! Toh tum mujhe par taana kas rahi ho...well isme bhi galti humari jo tum jaisi ladki ko bahu bana kar laayeusha said hoping to gain upper hand in the argument..exactly! Bahuein meri jaisi nahi honi chahiye..bahuein toh apki badi bahu ki tarah honi chahiye jo zarurat k waqt maike bhag jati hain...mai hun hi pagal jo yahan sb k liye itna sab karti hun...she said spreading her hands...waise ap 4 dhaan gayi thi na toh phir "OH silly me" hakal diya hoga apko wahan se she said as if stating a fact..nd walked off cooly "usha sarna you had ur chance you screwed me good but i'll screw you bad" said twinkle her voice laced with pure hatred...in all this argument usha was tongue-tied no matter how much she denied twinkle was their for the family through thick nd thin nd she cant discredit her for that"..wondering abt twinkle's changed avataar she went towards her room..After her confrontation with usha twinkle needed a break...or lets say her favorite starbucks coffe..she was driving her car nd bring it to a sidden halt "ab is signal ko bhi yahi red hona tha" DARNNN SHE hits the steering in frustation jst then she saw smthing which made her blood boil...a boy who may be 6 or 7 was pushed by a man...Why ? Because he was asking the man to buy sm flowers so that he can have smthing to eat..the man refused at 1st when the boy persisted he pushed him...his knee was bleeding but nobody came forward to help the boy..she was about to step down from her car to teach that scroundel a lesson whena gorgeous man who may be in his mid 20's came nd slapped that man hard nd punched his face.."fcuk off" or i"ll strangle you said the handsome man...the guy who pushed the boy fled from the scene..he picked up the boy tied his hanky around the boy's knee nd whispered smthing in his years that made the boy laugh twinkle smiled too..nd noticed that the handsome man has a dimpled smile...the man purchased all the flowers the little boy had nd gave him a bundel of notes...the boy was stunned..the man then again whispered smthing to the boy nd he smiled nodding his head...the boy tilted his head kissed the man's cheeks nd ran away happily..the man got-up nd twinkle noticed that he has a great physique..his black shirt with two top buttons opened showed his well-toned abs which can put adonis to shame..twinkle blushed the constant horning of cars broked her trance.."OYE kudiye cheto cheto gadi age le tere piyo di sadak hai kya ? Sceamed a woman...nahi auntyji apko galat fahmi hui hai ye toh sarkaar ki road hai said twinkle nd accelerated her car leaving the confuse woman behind
Edited by beingdumb - 9 years ago

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