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Posted: 9 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: DeewanaMastana

Sorry for butting in. I am commenting for the first time on your FF, I have been following it for sometime though.
May I suggest something?
Hope you dont mind.
How about this philandering ways of Kunj's dad was just a rumour spread by Manohar Sarna only to defame him posthumously, because he hated his brother.

evn i was thinking the same..and that brew to mu between kunj's parents...and wat abt that accident..something like was planned by manoher when he gets to knw that kunj's father got to knw that manohar was behind all those rumours ..

🤔🤔did i make sense bhaiyya??

Edited by crazyfan9 - 9 years ago

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#502

so finally I found out which update I had stopped at...

unfortunately it was an emotional sort of update...but very thrilling tooo...

maan na padega...u r very stellar and this ff is a work of pure sheer brilliance...👏👏⭐️⭐️

its amazing...when I read 55 update...I was damn intrigued to know the fact behind the people callling kunj fraud...but as always bhaiyya u left it on a cliffhanger...and then after that update I couldn't read anymore...my studies came in way ...but after returning to thread I was damn blank..while reading I never used to bother to check the update number...but realized its importance today...I had to read from beginning...but I swear I didn't feel bored ...infact I love reading it again and again...some portions where u mentioned their concern for each other..twinkle's jealousy...I can still read all those updates without getting bored...thoroughly enjoyed reading the updates again...😛😛😳😳

coming to 56 & 57 update,

awsmeee updates

loved how twinkle was proving her courageousness...sherni was killer...I loved her avatar...standing up for her husbands respect...standing firm on her belief.that kunj wudnt do anything wrong

the growing understanding between them is indeed a great thing to notice...

kunjs concern for her...all these little things makes my twinj shipper heart sooo happy...😳😳😛

kunjs anger is one such thing which is sooo inevitable...

cherry bhaiyya is also a person who made these chapters interesting...loved the way how he kept calm and handled his family...he's surely a very good elder brother..

chai scene was soo cute😳😳...twinkle indeed knows how to make kunj smile..

rt 😡😡eek...why did he have to come now ...ugghhh hate him..so hes behind reopening the case...I know by now u must have updated the reason behind him reopening the case...but as I have not read it I don't have any idea😕...will share how I feel about rt after reading other updates..

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#503

for chapter 57

amazing update as always ⭐️

twinj r sooo adorable...sooo cute..such a lovely scene...😛😛😳😳

nice idea bhaiyya...hmm kunj likes milk...😛

the complete milk scene was extra soooper adorable😳😳...they r still kids

twinkles face 😛😛...ohh god I can imagine all the cute expressions on her face

kunj sacrificed his milk for her😆😆

cherry bhaiyya with his one dialogue was again awsm here..

so rt is singhanias elder bro...hmm quite interesting...even I have doubt why she waited for one year..

anyways coming to the last scene I loved it just like how twinkle shares a bond with her babaji kunj shares a bond with his mahadev...

the last lines were sooo good...her voice lifted all his tensions😳

intrigued more and more t the story...I must say this ff is very addictive...but in a good sense..love this addiction of mine..😳

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#504

for chapter 58;

rt singhania conservation did seem a bit deadly...but as I still don't know anything more regarding rt...its better I don't ponder over him...he seems like a complete nuisance for me...

leela twinkle scene was indeed a bit emotional...I understand..its much like what happened in the show ...leela not happy with twinkle holding the shraadh for her father...but unlike the show ..I do have a feeling that leela knows that rt is alive...maybe wrong but I felt sooo

huh..now to monu sarna...ughhh I hate him😡😡...he is worse..very pathetic...better I don't say much about him..anand seems good for me...well his dialogues made me think sooo

now to the most important second half of this update...I cant express how much I loved it...simply sooo amazing...twinkle reading his mind..ahh..kunj sensing a feeling of attachment with her...well written scene...heheh kunjs gutter thoughts..i still remember his thoughts from that kitchen scene..poor lad...he doesn't know the fact that she already has started reading his mind..even his gutter thoughts😆😆

next scene was alsooo sooo well written

kunj sensing that she is gloomy..it all showed how much they have known the other

the embrace was bliss...loved the fact that u used the word embrace..it sounds more beautiful than hug..

awww...he pecked her on her forehead...his three points were valid indeed valid...by mentioning those..it made me understand his character more...I bet he wud have kissed her cheeks if he looked at her...my sherni was already blushing over there😳😳

last scene was very much expected...the great randhir taneja...kunj has started getting doubts..hes going in right route...

gr8 going joe bhaiyya...👏👏me getting excited😳😳

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#505

for chapter 59...

got a much clear picture n rt...he seems quite disgusting..

leela kunj was amazingly written...the descriptions of how her face changed after kunj mentioned rt name...everything was perfect...I am more driven into the conclusion that leela knows rt is alive..seems like a suspense is getting processed in your genious brain..

kunj is clever...detective type...⭐️

awww..that was sooo cute when he changed his decision not to go when twinkle came...so adorbs..he wants to be with her😳😳

now who told him she forgot about the morning session...I can bet on it she wouldn't forget it😳😳

car scene was too cute...how she explained to him...she was rather hurt when he said that the marriage was a compromise...glad to know that their relation is soo far quite smoothly going without much complications ...last lines of the scene was soo good...his concern becoming more and more evident to her😳

cherry bhaiyya's squinty look...I wud have done the same...rt doesn't have any manners..is that how u speak to someone ...huh😡

me rt hu...sooo funny😆😆

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#506

for chapter 60 :

dhamaakedar lines by kunj...I loved his angry man avatar..

this rt is surely very disgusting man..i guess he dumped leela...my petty thoughts never mind

one thing Is confirmed for sure that twinkle is rts daughter...this guy doesn't even like his daughter or what ...didn't he even try to meet her once...show's rt had insurance problem...now what does this rt have???he is getting on my nerves😡

surjeet tauji is a perfect indian man...he followed his traditions..and spoke with calmness...if head of the family is nice family is bound to be nice

the small prtion where twinkle placed her hand on his shoulder...indicating her support and asking him to calm down...that was soo good...I know right it wud do wonders for kunj😳

Urmila textiles...hmm..so its kunjs mothers..i had this doubt ...I had noted his mothers name from the first chapter...this track seems quite interesting..twinkle is sure to be in dilemma..quite possible she doesn't know her mil's name...

now who was that her...sangeeta singhania??or leela??/why so much stressing on her..

excited to read the next update

will repeat once again...awsm gr8 going👏👏

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#507

for chapter 61:

I'm sooo surprised...even though the full update was of rt ...I didn't feel bored...ur stoty telling magic⭐️..gr8 way of explaining..

but bhaiyya why is this rt sooo disgusting??...what is his actual problem??...he doesnt like leela or what??..my guess was right or what rt dumped leela??huh...he doesn't even seem like a normal good person to me..

last lines were quite intriguing...twinkle will get to know rt is her father...

one part in the update made smile..ofc chinkle scene..that was cute😳

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#508

for chapter 62:

ohh my good heavens ...what a horrible dream was that...its damn scary..

bhaiyya u r epiccc!!!!...hatsoff to u...👏👏

u wrote this update sooo brilliantly...the emotional quotient was damn sooo high

the way u explained twinkles face ...her movements...it all seemed sooo real

the way she broke down...my god...i'm getting sooo emotional..😭

I'm trying to understand this equation between leela and rt...whats sooo hidden??

chinki...she became a perfect friend to twinkle...nice part indeed

kunj's guilt trick was cute tooo...both of them understanding and moving closer to each other is such a treat to watch...rather than screaming papa..maa ..she screamed kunjjj I loved it😛

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#509

for chapter 63 :

this was mindblowing...!!!!!

the way u described everything with this much intensity...appreciations wud fall less..that was spellbounding...all the dialogues were of superb intensity..u r sooo perfect in creating such dialogues...I cud visualize the whole scene cuz of the amazing descriptions u left behind..

twinkles state is really heartbreaking😭😭...im least surprised on how she reacted..it was bound to happen...she was kept away from such an important truth of her life...how will she ever stay normal...kunj..im really not sure but I feel it wud have been better if he had said that the textile mill belongs to his mother..less complications will be there...I guess twinkle will be filled with guilt soon in no time...the consoling part was tooo good..

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#510

for chapter 64:

a splendid update...

kunj is really angry...palash chacha such an awsm man...his timing was epic...kunj understood the matter..how he reasoned out she was stubborn,wud speak up whatever she feels..but still she holds concern for him...that whole para was beautiful..

twinkle's guilt is something that was sure to happen...her monologues..increased a lot of emotional quotient..

kunj wanted to hear a sorry from her...it shows that he had started expecting from her..and that's a very good sign

twinkle's determination of bring him back in the room...was awsm...great going