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--Nazakaat-- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
for chapter 68:
once again an amazing twinjilicious update...๐Ÿ˜›
bebe...I luv her...the way she said to kunj about twinkle's preparation for kunj..and that tooo indirectly...she is mom goals...
kunj's little guilt was sooo good..
look how sad she is...its all cuz of u ...u idiot ...I loved this monologue..
car scene was sooo adorable...
twinj scenes r always sooo perfect...no matter what ...so was the feeding scene...sooo alluring
kunj didn't want her to think that he was showing sympathy...how thoughtful of him..ohh god the last scene...the army people attacking on the gajar halwa with their super weapon the SPOON...๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
u literally cracked me up bhaiyya...how funny was that...
CHOTU๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...such a cute funny name...I cant stop laughing

--Nazakaat-- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
for chapter 69:
my god...1st half killed me๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...I cant stop laughing...even though the 2nd half was annoying cuz of rt...I cant stop myself from pondering over bebe and the three army men๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..their fight for the precious gajar halwa...ohhh..i cant stop rofling...it was sooo lighthearted and damnn funny...bebe's keh ditta...I loooveeed it !!! I love kunj being called chotu...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
true Ishaan and juhi r less childish compared to them..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
bebe eating it ...it cracked me up...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
true kisi ka nazar na lage...such an adorb family...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
huh...what is this rt made up of???I cant even understand his pov...whats going on in his mind...twinkle is his daughter..i'm sure about that but why don't this rt love his own daughter...he wants to harm her and her husband more...even after knowing that she's his daughter..ughhh.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก..he is sooo pathetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

My thoughts were along the same line...that Manohar and Usha would go to any extent to get the upper hand in the property...perhaps their aim was to cause a rift between husband and wife...leading to a divorce...less people in the family...less claims to the wealth? Or...maybe Kunj's dad did have a weakness for women...and it does come to fore that he had such a vice...but was not a strong enough man to overcome it. As such this may be a good opportunity to get inside Kunj's head...what does he think as a man, a husband, etc...is he a man strong enough to overcome...is it battle of Nature vs Nurture...how will he fare...will his mother's upbringing win over a potential disposition to inherit his father's trait? Will the LOVE a good woman tie him for life?? I know we don't like to see negative characteristics in our heroes, but its these gray characteristics that make them real and allow us to connect to them.
Sorry for ranting...I am sure your creative mind will come up with some great stuff...as always!๐Ÿ˜›

Actually... the thing is... its late to show such characteristics from Kunj... it would have been a whole lot better if I had shown such flaws in Kunj before hand.. and the journey right after their marriage would be of Kunjs transformation...
The way I have wriiten Kunjs monolouges... and his thoughts about Twinkle and this marriage... it shows the importance it carries for him...
Also thinking it in a way that growing up knowing the ways of his father his only goal in life had become a totally different prsnality than him... and that led him to stay away from having multuple gfs or even thinking about adultery afer marriage...

And the idea of Manohar and Usha doing it for upper hand in property and trying to get Kunjs parents divirced is quiet a possibilty... Ill think over it
Thanks for the input dear๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 9 years ago
bhaiyya update soon...long update ha..u promised us...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for today's longgg update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
When r u updating d next chp just cant wait to read what comes next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 79
She woke up.. beside him.. he was on the other side of the bed.. and she was in the middle with one hand over his right shoulder... he was sleeping peacefully... remembering last night.. her face had a smile of admiration of how well she knew her husband after je opened up to her... she wasnt sure if Kunj would remember in the state of bhang.. but she would surely remember last night for years to come as a new begining to their relation

She looked over to the clock and it was 8.00 ...
"Kunj... "
"Utho Kunj..."
He opened his eyes...and saw her beautiful face...she had worn a peacock color suit...she looked eternal...and he smiled...taking in the feeling of being woken up by your wife... from last two days she was the one all ready before him...
"Twinkle tum ready bhi ho gayi"
"Haa. Kunj... mein soch rhi thi Gurudwara ho aau... aaj pehli hearing hai na..."
"Toa muje jaldi utha deti mein bhi aata...na.."
"Nahi. Kunj.. abhi shuklaji aane vale hai.. tumse milne.. aur.. muje uske bad office bhi jana hai.. and mein tumko court mein milingi direct..."
"Oh.. Madam.. aapka boss yaha.. samne baitha hai.."
"Haa. Toa"
"Twinkle tum office kyu ja rhi ho.. I mean.. gurudwara ho k...ghar aa jao... fir sab sath mein chalenge court.."
"Nahi Kunj... pichle.. na jaane kitne dino se.. mein.. skip kar rhi hu.. tum abhi case pr dhyan do.. mein.. time pe aa jaungi na"
Kunj looked surprised that.. she had planned it all for the day.. and he felt good... she herself wanted to be in the office.. he just wanted her to be around as.. he woudl miss her till afternoon... nyways... he could control his swelling teeanage heart for a while...
"Okay... as you wish Mrs Sarna" he said... while getting up..
"Kunj jaldi ready ho.. jao.. mein nashta laga deti hu.. dont be late"
"He watched her.. retreating figure giving him orders... hell.. what is with this girl...muje aise order kyu kar rahi hai...
Twinkle as she woke up.. had thought about going to office as resolved last night... she called Maya and Akash... then she answerd Kunjs Phone.. Shuklaji thier lawyer was calling them... he wanted to talk to Kunj before the hearing...

As he headed for the bathroom.. he felt a slight head ache... he couldnt remember properly what had happened... previous night... he just remember that he was talking a lot... he remembered she kissed his forehead... maybe he blurted too many things out... and she dint mention right now... what did he talk about...

As he headed downstairs...he saw everyone sitting in the hall... Tauji was having breakfast... Twinkle was serving him
"Aa gaya.. sher puttar.. "he patted patted hard purposefully on his back... like he does evertome and.. Twinkle chuckled at Kunjs reaction
"Tauji kya kar rhe ho.. aap.. lagti hai..."
"Huh... ab bado ka pyaar bhi bacho ko bado ki maar lagta hai..huh"
"Tauji.. kitna drama karte ho aap... aapko.. toa kisi theatre mein acting karni chahiye.."
"Jo makhan muje laga raha hai... vo khaya hota... bachpan mein toa.. itni lagti nahi tuje.."tauji.. fired back..

"Oye.. Kunj.. vo is case k lawyer aye hai.."cherry walked in the dining area..

"Shuklaji.. aaiyye.. baithiye ."
Kunj looked over to Twinkle... and she understood she went in to make some tea...

"Dekho Kunj.. case toa humari side se strong hai..par unke samne vala lawyer bhi.. bohot pohcha hua hai.. vo tumahri image ko spoil karne ki puri koshish karnege.. and tumko hyper karne ki try karenge.. par gusse mein aa ke kuch bhi media ya on record aisa bol dena jo tumare khilaf use ho sake..."
"Ha.. of course..Ill take care.."
Twinkle walked in.. listening what shuklaji had said.. she now needed to keep Kunj calm.. his anger was his biggest.. weakness..and she would have to make sure he keeps it in control...
"Aur.. last time.. case.. tumahre aur singhanias dono k against tha.. aur.. public prosecuter tha jo lad raha tha case... but is bar... well established lawyer.. lad raha hai.. unke pas... paisa bhi hai.. powere bhi hai.. aur.. contacts bhi hai... toa we need to be more careful"
He just nodded his head...
"Kunj.. koi aisi.. baat.. jo tumne.. mujse shareNahi ki... toa bata do.. kuch mere liye vaha surprise nahi rehna chahiye.."
"Nahi shuklaji... aisa kuch nhi hai.. sari baate aapko bata di hai.."
"Vaise bhi sari files mere sath hai.. Ill try ki ye case.. secomd hearing tak jaye hi na.."
Kunj smiled at him...

Twinkle left for... Gurudwara she walked inside and saw her... she walked near her and..
"Maa"
"Puttar tu yaha..."
"Ha.. ma.. aaj case ka pehla din hai.. toa meine socha ki babaji ka ashirwaad le lu..."
"Kunj kaha hai..?"
"Vo ghar par lawyer se meeting kar raha hai..."
"Maa.. vo.. apki.. Papa se bat hui.. ?"
Twinkle asked.. a bit afraid..
Leela looked at her.. she was still hoping that HE would take the case back... how would she explain her daughter.. that he knowing now that Twinkle was Kunj Sarnas wife he would be more adamant... for this case and there was nothing she could do... she very well knew about yhe damage that he was capable of... shs cant risk.. her daughter... getting carried away.. and also she had faith in Kunj..
"Nahi puttar...nahi hui..."leela said.. looking calmly at her...
They both left the gurudwara in different ditections thinking about their man... one in disgust and one in pride...

She made her way to the office and... got a note of all her pending work... Kunj had made sure.. that nothing lags behind but still he could not make others over work... Twinkle planned out everything how she was going to cover up in the coming days.. she could also sense.. that work enviornment had become a bit dull... becoz of the case mostly... they were having a negative attitude... towards the projects.. as most of the clients were backing away to sign new ventures... this was all not looking good...

Court...
He was present at the court before hand... he and shukla left together from Sarna House...they were sitting in shuklas office..
Twinkle reched there with Tauji and Cherry...
Anand Manohar were going to be there...soon..
They were just standing in the corridor...
Just then.. a large.. car drove in.. and the reporters hovered around..
He was expecting RT to step out..but
A woman quiet in her 40s draped in a violet black saree... a heavy make up.. dark kohl eyes... and an extra large bindi.. she had mocking eyes.. full of over confidence...smudged on her face...
Twinkle looked confused at to who was she... and made.. a frowny face... she might have seen in her mothers business parties when she was yound but she doubted she knew her persnally.. on the other hand... Kunj looked at her taking in the womans changed appearance... she looked too evil now... when he defeated her last year.. she looked helpless.. and she lost her husband just after the case... he dint see her.. after the legal penalties were being paid by both the companies... but today she looked.. differnt... and he knew all this arrogance dripping from her was becoz of RT supporting her...but where was RT...

Leela just drove in and walked towards the building she saw a large black car... standing right between the road.. but when she saw her.. her face went blank.. she needed to talk to her.. before she gets a glimpse of Twinkle...

"Sangeeta..tum yaha kya kar rhi ho?.."
"Meri Pyari Bhabhiji... kitne din bade mile hum... ya .. kahe ki saalo bad mile hai..mein yaha nahi .houngi toa kon hoga...mera case hai ye... mera bhai lad raha hai ye.. aapne toa unse sare rishte chhod diye.. par unki behen unko har mod pe support karegi...vaise little star kaha hai..usse baate karni hai.. kitni saare.. Bhai ne.. purane bohot si baate mujse share ki hai jo.. Twinkle sunegi bohot khush hogi..."
Leela stared shockingly...She knew the Real truth...

(If possible try to imagine Sudha Chandran as Sangeeta Singhania))
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Posted: 9 years ago
I know less Twinj scenes but... the drama needs to move ahead too...๐Ÿ˜Š
Let me know if you guys want a Holi special.๐Ÿ˜Š.. actually the calendar in the track is one week late... so Holi will be after a few days...
Edited by joe10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updates
dear
i just loved it
hope twinj win the case
and both rt and sangeeta fail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Want the case drama to end well ...
Whats the truth ???
Want twinj scenes tooo
Plzz update soon

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