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joe10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#511

Dear Maha,

I did not imagine so much love and admiration I would get for this FF from you😊. My godd.. I thought when you would be free and read you would make a long comment... but making comments on every update you liked...was beyond my imaginations...Thank you so much... I guess you are still reading... and keep reading... lots of amazing chapters are on the way...😉

Once again thank you...the details you described are some that even I dont remember... becoz they come out in flow whe I write and are not pre planned...

Yours

Joe😃

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joe10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#512

Readers,

Today there will be no update... I m too tired 😕...I promise a long update tommorow forsure... 😛..Twinkie Promise..😛

Joe

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: joe10
Dear Maha,
hiii bhaiyya😊
I did not imagine so much love and admiration I would get for this FF from you😊...jab story itni achi ho, admire tho karna hi padega na😃 My godd.. I thought when you would be free and read you would make a long comment... but making comments on every update you liked...was beyond my imaginations...Thank you so much...no thankuuus...u deserve them.. I guess you are still reading...actually I took a break...my bro wanted the laptop..if I read on my mob I wont be able to make proper comments...I will resume in a while..i stopped on 48th page and keep reading...sure..with pleasure lots of amazing chapters are on the way...😉I know right...my bro is soo awsm😉
Once again thank you...the details you described are some that even I dont remember... becoz they come out in flow whe I write and are not pre planned... but I love those...so always write in the same flow.
Yours
Joe😃
yours
maha😛

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: joe10
Readers,
Today there will be no update...😭😭 I m too tired 😕ohhh take care...I promise a long update tommorow forsure... 😛...double update milega na??by today ni8 I will finish reading😛..Twinkie Promise..😛i believe u bhaiyya😃
Joe

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: joe10
Readers,
Today there will be no update... I m too tired 😕...I promise a long update tommorow forsure... 😛..Twinkie Promise..😛
Joe

no problem

update when u r free 😃😊

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joe10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: crazyfan9

evn i was thinking the same..and that brew to mu between kunj's parents...and wat abt that accident..something like was planned by manoher when he gets to knw that kunj's father got to knw that manohar was behind all those rumours ..
🤔🤔did i make sense bhaiyya??

Of course it makes sense...

And thanks to both of you for your input...😊

Now the thing is Manohar and Usha are just supporting villains...

Alongside RT Anita and Yuvi...

Also... they are just a bit more greedy and selfish... and they are too coward to pull off such an act...them planning this accidnt is pure evil... which would kill their humanity...and till now I have shown Usha and Manohar as just... disliking step parents...towards Kunj and Twinkle... they have not shown any signs nor have committed any act of crime till now...

But I like your thought about this being done by some1 with whom Kunj is related... will think about it... surely... thanks...😊

And yes Manohar plotting and Kunjs father finding about it.. and so Manohar planning that accidant is quiet a nice way to fold the past... but this would become quiet obvious...keeping in Mind Manus behaviour...😉 and would Kill the surprise element... and obstruct any new entry...😉

And I

Still am foccussing on RT... and the case... anything about the past... would unfold... after this Track wraps up...

Keep Reading😊

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#517

for chapter 65 :

my goodness how much I love her...twinkle...shes such a beautiful blessing to kunj...how sweet of her to prepare all his favourite dishes for him...she has started understanding his tastes tooo...cute story telling ...I loved that part

I am surprised by the fact that usha knows about kunj's favourite dishes..

bebe is awsm...such a positive catalyst she is...admire her a lot...even in the second scene cuz of hr twinkle got to know its kunjs moms textiles...the way she told her about kunj...that was damn good..how sweet of bebe to handover the bangles to twinkle

felt a bit bad when kunj attended the phone in a rude way...last line is exactly true ...when we r completely depressed or in a bad situation...we feel god is playing with our emotions and laughing upon us...that did make an emotional impact on me..

twinkle's monologue...it was sooo touching..she has started missing him..good sign

last scene was the best in whole update for me...kunj have made his mother's property on twinkle's name...this really shows how much he trust her

last line...twinkle clutching the letter to her heart and feeling its warmth...I am completely sure she wont sign on the papers...afterall she considers his mother to be her mother too..so theres no chance she will do it

overall a beautiful update...

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#518

for chapter 66 :

light hearted yet an emotional...wonderful portrayal of their emotions...

kunj really felt bad on his behaviour with twinkle...kunj admitting to the the fact that after seeng twinkle's cute face...he cant hold onto his anger self...I loved it

he is ready to sacrifice anything for her...he just want to see her happy...awsmeee

the club scene...even I felt doing sooo...twinj shipper heart u see...they were all happy until this rt came into picture...ughhh😡

he was soo young when his mother passed away...feeling bad for him...but no worries twinkle is there na...she will take care of him more than anyone no doubt on that

kunj's cricket session with the children..was indeed a treat to read...

the way twinkle understands kunj ...how much I love to read that portion...even though kunj was not at the mahadev temple...her guess that he might be there showed the fact that twinkle has started understanding his feelings

her monologue was once again awsm...the determination evident in her thoughts...was really good

her happiness lies in his happiness...that was the best monologue

twinkle has also started😳😳...ohhh god...I hope things become straight as soon as possible..

this tashan e ian loved this update a looot😃

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#519

for chapter 67 :

twinjilicious adorable update...loved it loootsss

ohh god..twinkle...her thirst...I will die laughing..

ab to adat pad gayi...that dialogue sooo bad...but the rest of their conversation I loved it completely...twinkle also has started using damnit...I have only read and seen kunj saying...today even she started the same

the person who is the most closest to him and whom he feels is only his...ohh...this line blowed me over...kunj has fallen for her😳😳so has twinkle...eventhough some tiny gaps r there between them...wud luv to see the gap reducing as soon as possible...

twinkles question was valid...why cudnt he say it was his mother's property in the first...the less trouble they wud have suffered...but I know with every problem that arises ...their relationship wud also grow more strong..

their nhok-jhok mode is back...I loooved it

how both them like each others smile...so sweeet..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: DeewanaMastana
Sorry for butting in. I am commenting for the first time on your FF, I have been following it for sometime though.
May I suggest something?
Hope you dont mind.
How about this philandering ways of Kunj's dad was just a rumour spread by Manohar Sarna only to defame him posthumously, because he hated his brother.

My thoughts were along the same line...that Manohar and Usha would go to any extent to get the upper hand in the property...perhaps their aim was to cause a rift between husband and wife...leading to a divorce...less people in the family...less claims to the wealth? Or...maybe Kunj's dad did have a weakness for women...and it does come to fore that he had such a vice...but was not a strong enough man to overcome it. As such this may be a good opportunity to get inside Kunj's head...what does he think as a man, a husband, etc...is he a man strong enough to overcome...is it battle of Nature vs Nurture...how will he fare...will his mother's upbringing win over a potential disposition to inherit his father's trait? Will the LOVE a good woman tie him for life?? I know we don't like to see negative characteristics in our heroes, but its these gray characteristics that make them real and allow us to connect to them.

Sorry for ranting...I am sure your creative mind will come up with some great stuff...as always!😛