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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Too Good...

Continue Soonnn

Thanku dear 😊
Ok dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bas ab kar rahi hu update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone.
How are you all?
I hope you guys are doing gud.
Actually i don't continue the story until someone spammed for it.😔 And that's the reason i didn't typed the third part but seeing Hridey's comment i decided to write.
I know its strange that i write according to people's wish but can't help it because even one comment can motivate me to write. So here i am and this one goes to hridey.
Enjoy guys 😊

Part 3

2 days passed and twinkle had nothing with her as a proof. She had done mahi's checkup with cheating giving her injections, reports were to be out after 2,days.
Sshe went to kunj and cheered him with her useless talks, that what she did, what she ate, she always wore a brave face but only bebe and usha told him the real story that she didnt ate properly, didnt took her sleep, always wore a mask of braveness.
Twinkle was getting ready to go to hospital when she got a call from leela.
"Hello maa" twinkle spoke.
"Puttar mahi abhi ghar se nikali hai bahana banake ki use fresh air chahiye. Tu uska picha kar sakti hai" leela spoke.
Twinkle got up and spoke walking "maA main bhi nikal gayi bas"
Leela spoke "dhyan rakhio apna puttar"
When she was going she informed usha "mummy ji main ja rahi hu, ati hu kuch der mein"
Usha spoke "kuch khake toh ja bete."
Twinkle spoke "nahi maa bht zaruri kam hai"
Usha act smartly and wrapped one pronthi in roll. "Yeh le raste mein kha lio"
Twinkle couldn't deny, she took that and ran out of the house.
Twinkle so mahi taking a taxi, she too took her car and followed her.
Mahi told the driver to stop the car after 30 minutes drive. It was deserted area, one warehouse was there.
Twinkle too stopped the car at a distance, she got out and carefully followed her.
Mahi went inside, it was a bit scary, twinkle too followed her taking her Baba ji's name.
Twinkle saw mahi meeting with a man, that man's back was facing her front so she couldn't saw his face but maybe luck was with her today.
That man hugged her and than he stood in a position where twinkle could see his face.
The man shocked her to core, it was Yuvi.
Twinkle unlocked her phone and opened the video and started recording there talks.
"Yuvraj tumne jaisa kaha maine vaisa hi kia" mahi spoke with a smile.
Yuvraj spoke "that's brilliant jaan. Ab us twinkle ko pata lagega ki kaisa lagta hai jab tumhare apne maa baap tumhare against ho. Usne tumhare maa baap tumse chin liye, ab uski bari"
Mahi spoke with anger "ha Yuvraj unhone mere maa papa ko mujhse china toh maine unhi ke pati pe itna ginhona ilzam lagaya"
They both laughed on twinj's state.
'Chalo ab main chalti hu Yuvraj ghar pe sab wait kar rahe honge. I love you. Bye" mahi again hugged him.
He too hugged her and spoke "i love you too jaan."
Twinkle saved the video and hurriedly went to her car. In hurry her arm got cut with a sharp thing bjt she didnt care as She was in shock, Yuvraj used mahi to take revenge from her.
She drived to police station, she need to share this infro with kunj.
"Kunj mujhe tumhare khilaaf suboot mil gaya, ab main tumhe yaha se nikalva lungi" she said happily.
Kunj saw her arm and asked "yeh kya hua hai twinkle? Yar dhyan nahi rakh sakti kya?" He spoke with worried written all over his face.
Twinkle didn't notice "yeh shayad vaha se nikalte time laga hoga"
Kunj spoke "kaha se?"
Twinkle than told him and Kunj was angry "tu pagal hai kya twinkle? Tujhe kaha tha na koi aiso harkat mat kario"
Twinkle spoke calmly "tumhare liye toh main koi bhi dard sehne ke liye ready hu kunj phir yeh kya chiz hai"
Kunj took her dupatta and cleaned that wound "yar thoda toh dhyan rkha kr apna"
Twinkle spoke "tumhe kis liye rakha hai?"
Kunj was in awe. Twinkle continued "jab pata hai ki pati hai sambhalne ko, ek maa hai zabardasti khana khilane vali, ek bebe or papa hai toh main ku time waste karu apna dhyan rakhke"
Kunj just hugged her 'mat kia kar yar aise. Kyu karti hai? Kyu apni jaan ke sath khelti hai?"
Twinkle spoke being in his arms "kyuki tum family ho meri Kunj. Is mahi fiasco ne mujhe ek family de di jisko main apna keh sakti hu.
Kunj didn't spoke anything just stayed in his arms when twinkle gave him the shock.
"Kunj yeh sab yuvi kya hua hai" twinkle spoke.
Kunj broke the hug and spoke "whats? Vo vapis aa gya?"
Twinkle showed him the video.
Kunj was angry "main chodunga nahi ise. Twinkle apna dhyan rakhio yeh bht shatir hai"
Twinkle spoke "ab jo bhi ho jaye main tumhe yaha se niklva ke rahungi no matter what."
Saying so she bid him goodbye.

She straight away went to hospital and took her reports. She smirled seeing the reports because they showed that nothing happened with her.
Twinkle dialled leela's number "maa mahi kidhar hai?"
Leela spoke "ghar pe. Kya hua bete?"
Twinkle spoke "apke pati ghar hai?"
Leela spoke "nahi vo kisi kam se bhr gaye hai kal ayenge. Hua kya?"
Twinkle spoke "mujhe mahi se bat karni hai main apke ghar aa rahi hu"
Leela spoke "hua kya?"
Twinkle "kuch nahi maa"

Twinkle went to leela's house and straight away went to mahi's room and locked it.
Mahi got scared but sudden events "yeh kya kar rahi hai aap di?"
Twinkle slapped her in anger "kitni ghatia ladki hai tu mahi. Kabhi nahi socha tha apni behen hi mere sath aisa karegi or vo bhi mere dushman ke sath milke"
Mahi got scared "yeh aap kya keh rahi hai ?"
Twinkle showed her the video and asked "kya kami reh gayi thi mere pyar mein mahi?"
Mahi spoke in anger "kya kami? Adopted hone ke bavajud mere mummy papa apko zada pyar karte hai. Kyu? Akhir hai kya ap mein aisa?"
Twinkle too shouted "toh mujhse badla lena tha mahi kunj se nahi. Tune or us yuvi ne is bar mere kunj ko dard pahochaya or Baba ji ki kasam kabhi maaf nahi karungi."
Mahi spoke "di yeh jo suboot hai isko galat bhi prove kia ja sakta hai"
Twinkle spoke "kya chahti hai? Suboot toh bht hai par main nahi chahti ki teri izat kharab ho. Kunj ke khilaf apni complaint vapis le"
Mahi spoke "toh ek deal karte hai. Aap India chod ke kahi bht dur chale jao or main apke pati ke khilaf complaint vapis le lungi"
Twinkle spoke "thik hai. Kal subah police station milte hai"
She was about to go but stolped and spoke "jisse tu pyar karti hai na vo tujhse dhoka de rahha hai. Yakeen nahi ata na toh use bas itna bataio ki tune mujhe India chodke jane ko kaha or phir uska reaction bata dega ki vo tujhse kitna pyar karta hai kyuki vo tere sath pyar ka natak kar raha hai taki vo mjhe hasil kar sake. Varna khud soch agar use mujhse problem hoti toh vo tujhe mujhe hurt karne ko kehta naki kunj ko. Sochio Mahi."
Twinkle left leaving a confused mahi.
Mahi to herself "kahi di sahi toh nahi bol rahi?"
At the same time Yuvraj called her, mahi picked the call.
"Hi jaan. Kya kar rahi ho?" Yuvraj asked.
Mahi replied "vo abhi di ayi thi. qnd we made a deal that she will leave India and uske badle i will get jiju out"
Yuvraj lost it and shouted on phone "tumhara dimag kharab hai mahi? Tum kunj ko kisi bhi condition pe bahar nahi nikalogi"
Mahi asked "par kyu Yuvraj? Hum toh di ko dur bhejna chahte the na toh kunj jiju se hume kya matlab"
Yuvraj spoke rudely "tumhe kaha na ki kunj ko bahar nahi nikalna. Jitna kaha hai utna hi karo. Bloody behenji" and he hung up the phone. Mahi was broken, Yuvraj just used her to take revenge from her sister. Oh my God what blunder she has created.

Twinkle thought a lot about mahi's offer and she decided to leave alone, because till the time she will be there kunj cant live peacefully.
She went home and called everyone in living area and told them about her deal with mahi.
Bebe spoke "toh thik hai na puttar hum sab yaha se chalte hai"
Usha spoke "ha bte hum sab chalte hai"
Twinkle spoke "nahi bebe or maa. Main jabse ayi hu bas sabki life mein problems hi ayi hai, bas or nahi. Or is bar aap sab mera sath dena"
Manohar spoke "ek shart pe twinkle."
Twinkle asked "kaisi shart papa?"
Manohar replied "London mein jab kunj padta tha toh maine use vaha apartment leke dia tha, tum vahi rahogi. No more discussions on this thing"
Bebe spoke "monu tera dimag kharab hai? Tu usko aise kaise jane de sakta hai?"
Twinkle spoke before papa changed his mind "thik hai papa. Lekin aap log kunj ko is bare mein kuch nahi bataenge"
Usha replied "yeh ho kya raha hai?"
Twinkle spoke "is ghar ke bete ko hamesha ke liye safe kar rahi hu"
Bebe asked "reh legi uske bina?"
Twinkle just gave a faded smile and spoke "main ek last time kunj se milke ati hu kal sidha mahi jayegi or apni FIR vapis le legi." She than spoke to manohar "papa kya aap meri ek ticket karva denge?"
Manohar replied "ha bete. Lekin promise karke ja vaha jake hume nahi bhulegi"
Twinkle just hugged him "apne papa ko koi beti nahi bhulti. Main nahi janti mere asli maa baap kon hai, lekin is ek shadi ne mujhe ek pati, ek papa, ek maa, or ek bebe dedi jinko main lifetime yad rakhungi. Or main aap sabse touch mein rahungi"
Usha spoke "vo tere bina kaise jiyega?"
Twinkle spoke absentmindedly "jaise main jiungi"
Everyone heard that and she excused herself.

In police station.
Twinkle was happy as well as sad.
Kunj noticed that, the moment he saw her but she didn't told him anything.
twinkle just stayed in his arm, this last time she want to capture all the moments, relying on which she will spend her whole life.
Kunj asked again "tujhe kya hua hai? Bata na twinkle"
Twinkle spoke "kuch nahi. Chalo mera jane ka time ho gaya main chalti hu." She got up and hugged him tightly.
"You know what kunj. I love you" saying so she placed her lips on his for few seconds and ran from there without turning back.
Everything was so sudden for kunj that he couldn't say anything, he didn't got her weird behavior. He was happy that his syapa queen love him, he was damm happy. Tomorrow when she will come he will confess his feelings to her.

Twinkle went out and cried like hell she looked at sky amd spoke "Babaji apne kunj ko apko chod ke ja rahi hu. Meri amanat ka khayal rakhna. Plz Babaji"
That whole night twinj couldn't sleep, twinkle because she will have to leave her love and go to a strange country.
And kunj, because he was so happy he could still feel her lips on his. He was excited for the coming day.

But both didn't know one thing, life doesn't go the way we want it to be.
New morning has something different for all in stock.
Lets see, because Baba ji knows whats good and what's bad for us andhe is the main game changer.

So how was it guys?
Love Vish❤️
Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Awesome update. Loved it.
Eagerly waiting to see what is going to happen next.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Beautiful
Loved it!
Hope you continue it soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Oh dear , it was very very lovely 🤗👍🏼
Itna late update 😲
Sorry once or twice I think I asked you abt the update 😆
But happy that it's updated 😳
& plz do continue soon 😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Hiii vish di
Loved the update as always !!!!!!
I dont want them to seperate plzzz
And do update soon plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
I was reading the update with song bhula dena in background.
I have a habit of reading the update after i post it.
I was on a verge of crying.
I never knew there is so much pain in me 😆
But it was nyc update with perfect emotions.

Haha ya i am weird. I compliment myself when i am gud and punish myself when i am wrong. So commented 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
The update was super duper fab n lovely 😳😳
Yeah vish the song bhula dena is quite heart touching 😳
Plz don't ever punish uaself !! anytime! !
It's our nature 😆human nature ..many a times we do certain mistakes😳but then we feel.. so realise it... n try to correct ourselves 😃
So in no way hurting ourselves 'll work out 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved it
Update was amazinggg
I was waiting for an update
Stupid Mahi and Yuvi
I want TwiNj together😭
please continue soon

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