Twinj SS New Found Family Part 5 updated on page 18 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm chappy. Loved it from the begining till the end. Kunj's disguise is just excellent. And twinj confrontatin is so cute. And manhor loved him he played cupid's role. Mahi and rt ke saath theek hua they don't deserve forgivness
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous
Finally they are together
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was a happy chaptet,I soo loved it,You did an amazing job!
Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Vish this is one of the best chaps i have ever read. You did the sardar accent perfectly. And so many emotional dialogues. Good thing she did not forgive RT. He said meri jaan and she cares about him soo much so cute. COntinue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all parts in one go.. this was amazing..
Loved the plot.. fab depiction..
Ur punjabi accent is good...
I jus felt that u should use words similar to the one chqracters use in show..it helps to comnect through them.. u use ur words like rakhio aaio jaaio khaioo.. i was reading and imagining and suddenly this unusual words break the flow..like ye kunj or twinkle ni ye koi or bol rha h..
Just a piece of advice..dnt take it to heart..i jus wrote what i felt otherwise i loved the story compeletly..
Waiting for comingbup romance..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii everyone.
How are you all?
Hope you guys are doing good
So here i am with another update.
Enjoy reading guys 😊
Part 5

Finally they boarded the flight, twinkle was looking out of the window. All the events were playing in her mind, these few days were very hectic for her.
Kunj drifted to sleep because of lack of sleep from few nights, and last night he couldn't sleep for a second.
Twinkle after good 30-35 minutes turned her face to Kunj and saw him sleeping.
Her heart was telling her to not wake him, but her other part of heart couldn't control the urge of being with him. Finally she got the true love of her life and now she can't control her sweet emotions of caressing his face, pecking him. Now he is her private property.
Twinkle brought her face close to his ears and spoke. "thanku kunj. For coming in my life and making it so beautiful, tumhe pata hai meri jaan nikal rahi thi yeh soch soch ke ki main tumhare bina kaise rahungi. Kunj never ever leave me alone, i am blessed to have a hubby like you. I love you"
Kunj spoke still eyes closed "i love you too meri jaan"
Twinkle "haw tum jage ho?"
Kunj spoke sleepy "kan mein bolegi toh nind khulegi hi na. Chal ab soja"
Twinkle was in full mood of disturbing his sleep.
She treated him like a baby, as if talking to baby. She pulled his cheeks. "Tum kitne handsome ho kunj. Haye mere cutie pie"
Kunj being grumpy, no doubt if it was some other time he would have been enjoying this moment but now he is sleepy. "Twinkle sone de na"
Twinkle crossed her legs and lifted her a bit to Match his level. She kissed his forehead, "mera pyara sa baby. Man karta hai tumhe kha jau"
Kunj finally gave in but still acted as if in sleep, he pretended to be irritated.
Twinkle than came to his cheeks and spoke "meri pyari si jaan" saying so she bite his cheek making him open his eyes.
"Twinkle yeh tu pyar kar rahi hai ya mar rahi hai" kunj spoke.
Twinkle spoke "mera na hamesha man karta hai ki chote babies ke cheeks bite karu, so tunhare bite kiye. Jab hamara baby hoga na toh main uske cheeks bite karungi"
Kunj got protective "no way. Tu hamari princess pe yeh torture nahi karegi. Tujhe jo karna hai mujhe kar"
Twinkle spoke "kyu Kunj. Main use karungi bite"
Kunj spoke "nahi. Tu mujhe kar jo karna hai"
Twinkle spoke "thik hai." She bite his cheek.
Kunj spoke "mujhe nahi pata tha tu itni violent hai"
Twinkle giggled and spoke "ruko phir" she placed her hand on his eyes moved closer.
Kunj couldn't see anything but could feel her breath on his lips, he was wandering. What is she upto.
Twinkle moved more closer and bite his lips sucking it a bit. Kunj held her waist and took a sharp breath.
Twinkle loved the effect she had on him.
There moment was disturbed by a kid who came to them roaming around. "Haw. Aap kya kar rahe ho?"
Twinkle startled sat on her seat. She saw the source of voice and saw one baby of 3-4 years standing there.
"Kuch nahi baby" twinkle spoke.
Her mother came calling for her "kia. Baby yaha kya kar rahe ho?"
Kia spoke innocently "mumma uncle aunty bhi kissi kar rahe the jaise papa aapko karte hai morning mein."
Twinj and that lady flushed in embarrassment They gave nervous smile to eachother.
That lady spoke "sorry."
Twinj just nodded. Both left leaving a shy twinkle.
Twinkle couldn't face kunj, kunj took her in a buddy vali hug and spoke "aww mera baby sharma gaya"
Twinkle blushed even more and hid her face in his chest, kunj hugged. "Kaisi si hai tu twinkle, ek pal itni bold or ab itni shy"
"Actually main excited ho gayi thi ki i have a man, jo sirf mera hai. Jisko main jab chahu jo bhi chahu vo kar sakti hu, toh bas tabhi. You know vo ek feeling ki now i can touch you, caress you while you are asleep, kiss your cheeks, sab kuch. Shayad tum nahi samjhoge"
Kunj spoke "kahi tum us feeling ki toh bat nahi kar rahi ki. Ab tu so rahi ho toh main tujhe cuddle kar saku, be jhijhak tere fringes face se hata saku, tujhe jab man kare tickle kar saku, tu sote hue jab cute lagti hai toh tujhe zor se hug karu kisses karu"
Twinkle saw in awe "you too feel such things?"
Kunj spoke "ha toh kya sweet chizein karne ka copy right sirf tum girls ka hota hai?"
Twinkle spoke "mujhe sach mein laga tha ki boys ko sirf physical intimacy hi romance lagti hai"
Kunj spoke "nahi yar. Ha kayi hote honge, but obviously ek relation sirf sex se nahi chalta. Pure feelings, sweet gestures, small pecks here and there. Sab zaruri hai, mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai sidha sex pe aane ki, you are mine only toh main tujhe apna us din banaunga ji din tu ready hogi"
Twinkle snuggled more into him inhaling his fragrance with a smile on her face "you know Babaji ne ek dam perfect ladka mujhe dia hai. I knew ki you are different par you are a gem, par sirf mere"
Kunj smiled "or tu meri. Tere muh se apni tareef sunke khushi hoti hai"
Twinkle spoke "or mujhe tumhari tareef karna pasand hai." Kunj placed a kiss on her forehead.
Chit chatting, finding solace in each others arms both slept.

Finally they reached London.
Both came out of airport, twinkle saw the surroundings. Girls roaming around in shorts actually mini shorts, skirts, back less tip, sphegite. Twinkle's face formed a perfect O.
Kunj was finding a taxi he didnt even saw that girls but his eyes were on boys who were really handsome, he thought twinkle might get attracted to them but twinkle didn't even noticed them.
Twinkle spoke a bit loudly "kunj tum in ladkio ki taraf nahi dekhige"
Kunj spoke "kin ladkio ki taraf?"
Twinkle spoke "yahi jo ghum rahi hai, i know yeh bahut hot and sexy hai but you will not look at them"
Kunj spoke "main bhi toh keh sakta hoon ki tu in ladko ki taraf nahi dekhegi"
Twinkle spoke "konse ladke"
Kunj said poiniting at few "main kyu dekhne lagi?""
Kunj spoke "toh mujhe bhi kya zarurat hai twinkle?"
Twinkle smiled a sheepish smile.
Kunj spoke keeping one arm around her "vaise kamal hai na?"
Twinkle spoke confused "kya?"
Kunj spoke "ki tune in ladko ko ek bar bhi nahi dekha or maine in ladkio ko. Dono ko ek dusre ki tension ho rahi hai"
Twinkle keeping her head on his chest "haan sahi mein. Vaise kunj you are really handsome, par agar tum na bhi hote tab bhi main kisi ko na dekhti. I love you, main chahu bhi toh kisi ladke ko nahi dekh paungi"
Kunj spoke "seriously twinkle. Tu in sabse bahut beautiful hai. I will always love you like this no matter what. You are a beautiful girl not only outside but from inside too"
Twinkle spoke being naughty "andar se tumne kab dekha mujhe?"
Kunj was shocked "mera baby kuch zada hi naughty ho gaya hai"
Twinkle giggled "yaha sharma ke koi fayda bhi nahi hai" she winked.
Kunj spoke "acha. Ruk phir" he dipped his face down and took her lips in his. Twinkle was shocked and part away. "Kunj sab dekh rahe hai. Kya kar rahe ho?"
Kunj spoke "yaha kisi koi parvah nahi hai. Vo dekh" he showed a couple kissing.
Twinkle spoke "agar aisi bat hai toh thik hai" she lifted her heels circled her arms around his neck and took his lips in a kiss.
They broke apart for the need of oxygen "hamari london ki and vause bhi first proper kiss" both spoke in unison. And laughed.
They took taxi and headed to there apartment.
They took the keys from a person who was the caretaker of that apartment which will be a house soon.
They were about to enter inside, kunj got in and sat on his knee not letting her to come inside.
"Yeh kya kar rahe ho kunj?" Twinkle asked.
Kunj motioned her to keep quiet, "twinkle last ke kuch din bahut hectic rahe hai hamari life mein. Tujhe yeh pata chala ki tu najayaz hai and according to you, you are unwanted.
Please main tujhe adopt karna chahta hu aaj se lekar hamari akhri saans tak. Kya tu is apartment ko ghar banaegi? Kya tu mujhe mauka degi ki main ek father ki tarah tujhe duniya se bacha saku, maa ki tarah laad pyar(pamper and love) de saku, ek sibling ki tarah tujhe tang kar saku and tera partner in crime ban saku? And last but not the least kya main tujhe ek pati ki tarah pyar kar saku?
Please twinkle i want to adopt you and fill your life with all the hapiness you have dreamt of? I know main tujhse naraz hounga, gussa bhi hounga lekin i promise kabhi tera sath nahi chodunga.
Agar aaj tera answer ha hai toh aaj ke baad you are not allowed to be sad for my sake.
Tu nahi janti lekin tu bahut important hai meri life mein, infact hum sabki life mein. I don't know about rt uncle but for mahi too you are important.
Main teri ankhon mein ansoo nahi dekh sakta yar, please mere liye is ghar mein enter karne se pehle jitna rona hai, purani baton ko, buri yadon ko yaad karna hai karle. Lekin is ghar mein enter karte hi leave everything bad outside.
Are you ready?"
Twinkle was in tears, she cried a lot and as he said for the last time thought about all bad memories.
And asked him to get up "i am ready kunj. Hum aaj se apni zindagi ki nayi shuruwat karenge."
Kunj hugged her tightly and took her inside in bridal style.
Kunj took him to the the room in which he stayed.
Twinkle looked at the room "its beautiful"
Kunj spoke "just like you" he said back hugging her.
"Kunj i am so excited. New place, new ghar and we are alone. But i am missing everyone" twinkle started cheerfully but got sad because she is missing everyone.
As if all were missing her too, they called her.
"Kunj ghar se phone hai" twinkle spoke.
"Badi strong yaad hai teri" Kunj joked. "Acha tu baat kar main fresh hoke aya."
Twinkle nodded and picked the call, as she picked the call she heard multiple voices "hello twinkle"
Twinkle smiled at them "hello sabko. Bebe, papa, maa sabko namastey and baki sabko hello"
Bebe spoke "kaisi hai puttar?"
Twinkle spoke "main thik hu bebe aap sab kaise hai?"
Usha replied "hum sab bhi thik hai. Kunj bhi thik hai na? Or tum log aram se pahuch gaye na?
Twinkle spoke "ha maa. Vo bhi thik hai bas abhi fresh hone gaya hai. Abhi thodi der pehle pahuche, aap sab ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai"
Leela replied this time "hum bhi bahut yaad aa rahi hai puttar"
Manohar spoke "twinkle ab vaha jake sad mat hona, khub enjoy karo or ek dusre ka dhyan rakho"
Twinkle spoke "ab sad nahi houngi, itni sundar family hai or itna pyara pati hai meri kaha se majal jo main sad hou"
All laughed.
They chit chatted for few minutes and hung up the phone.
Kunj came out only in his tracks wiping his hair with towel whistling.
Twinkle turned and saw him like this, she saw wanted to do something to him but controlled herself, she never saw him whistling.
"I never saw you whistle before" twinkle asked.
Kunj spoke "umm. May be because i was never this much happy"
Twinkle spoke flirting with him "and whats the reason behind your happiness"
Kunj too flirted "hai kuch. Actually i got my love today so that's why"
Twinkle spoke "ohh. I too got my love today. What a coincidence, nahi?"
Kunj spoke "yeah. Ok you go and freshen up"
Twinkle was disappointed she was expecting some romantic move but he kind off changed the topic. She too took her shorts and tees and went for shower.
After good 15 minutes twinkle came out of bathroom and saw his life sleeping like a baby, she adored his baby like figure, she went more close to him and noticed him closely.
He looked like a cute baby with lips pouted, relief on face. She dropped the towel carelessly on floor and lied on floor still glaring him.
She placed a chotu si kiss on his lips and turned. Within a second she was pulled back by her hubby by an arm on her waist.
In his sleep he placed a kiss on her hair and both slept hugging each other.

Precap :- more romance😉

So how was it?
Hope you guys like it.
Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
reswa...
I think I missed this story ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
will read ASAP Shaluu puthar 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Iss forum p page khane keliye koi nahi h kya 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
oops...soyyi meri shalu ki readers...
res for u all...😳

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