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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3:Vishwas

Twinkle:Maa woh wapas aa gaya hai,he knows I am in delhi,I met him maa.

Leela:Kon puttar?

Twinkle:Kunj.

Leela was surprised to hear that twinkle met kunj in delhi,even after years of hiding away he has finally got her,leela knew exactly everything that happened between kunj and twinkle , leela was not in contact with kunj all these years just some occasional formal meeting.

Leela:Dekh beta tu chinta mat kar, Calm down,we'll see what we can do.

Twinkle:Maa he knows I am here but he should not know about sara and kabir at any cost,if he will come to know toh pata nahi woh kya karega maa.

Leela:Tu chinta mat kar puttar usse dono bacho ke bare mai kuch bhi pata nahi chalega,trust me.

Twinkle nodded to leela and took a deep breath.

She didnt had any idea what will kunj do but she knew this time its not going to be easy to escape from him.

Seeing him face to face after such a long time refreshed all the moments she spent with them,everything which they tried to forget in last 6 years just came back in a moment,he still looked same except the stubble that he has grown,his face looked a bit stiff and it was visible even through his suit that he has been working out a lot.

She knows that how much she has tried to forget him in these six years but she has failed,everytime she wanted to forget him he came back to her, sometimes she him checking her out, sometime teasing her or sometimes sleeping beside her and then came Sara and kabir,she loves her kids more than anything but for a moment they also reminds her of him,sara has eyes exactly same to kunj and kabir's mannerisms and habits are exactly like kunj.

She knew if kunj will come to know about sara and kabir he will leave no stone unturned to get thier kids to him and her too,but how can she forgive him after what he did with her,he even accepted himself that he tried to cheat on her,he broke her trust,he broke her and still he expects Me to forgive him thought twinkle.

Somewhere in delhi,a girl was thinking about whatever happened six years ago,life of two lovers changed forever,one was left broken and other was left alone all because of someone who only wanted to take revenge.

It has been 6 years since maya has been living in guilt of whatever happened 6 years before,except her and kunj and off course Yuvraj luthra no one knew what actually happened and why it happened,Yuvi's plan failed that time when twinkle left and he was never able to find her.

Maya never met kunj afterwards ,she sometimes called to check on his health and ask him is twinkle back, but why will she be back, her trust was broken,she saw thier entire encounter on the road as well as whatever happened in sarna mansion.

Twinkle was never wrong in whatever she did,according to her,she was betrayed by her love,her husband and he himself told her that he tried to cheat on her so there was no benefit of doubt she could have given him,even maya tried to reach out to twinkle in past seven years because she was not able to see kunj like that and she knew how much kunj loves twinkle with all of him.

Maya was happy that yuvraj luthra died in a car crash last year,and now she can mend the things between kunj and twinkle,she called kunj to ask if he knows anything about twinkle and kunj informed her that,he saw twinkle in delhi,he even met her and hugged her she was real ,he also told her that she still hates him but he will do anything to get her back.

That moment maya was determined that she will tell the truth to twinkle,she just have to find him,and she will make everything alright.

Twinkle woke up in the morning and made kids ready for the school,after dropping them she went to her office.

In office her cabin was different,it was decorated with flowers all over,for once she smiled and then she saw a sorry card,going to the boquet of flowers she took out the card and opened it,there was something written in the card.

-Card-

Twinkle I know what I did six years ago was nothing less than a crime and I deserved punishment for that,but twinkle I am really sorry for whatever happened,trust me twinkle I love you with all I have,you mean the word to me twinkle,I was and always will be yours please try and give me a chance twinkle.

Yours,

Kunj

-Card-

A tear drop fell from her eyes on the card,the ink fading away due to the tears exactly like thier relations faded away after that horrible night.

Twikle kept the card aside and asked her Peon to clean the cabin,she sat on her seat,closing her eyes and remembring all the moments she spent with him,life was so blissfull with kunj on her side than why did it happened,was it neccassary?she asked herself.

All the beautifull moments they spent toghther will always remain so special for her,will she ever be able to hate him,every part of her wants to deny the fact that kunj did something like that but his confession made it difficult for her how can she forgive him when he himself accepted he did.

Kash kunj uss din mujhse jhoot bolta toh mai uss par ankhien band karke vishwas kar leti thought twinkle tears flowing down her face.

Wiping her tears she thought I can't be vulnerable right now,I have to be strong I have to face him with confidence,he broke me once I wont let him do it again.

Twinkle took a half day from the office as she made her way to the mall to get some gifts for the kids,she just completed her shopping and was going to get in her car but she felt a hand on her shoulder,turning around she saw her,she closed her eyes the images of kunj and maya on one bed with each other,came back,she was angry she never saw maya after that night nor talked to her but she did what she would have done that time without thinking about anything Twinkle slapped her hard,maya kept quite and accepted it after all she can understand what twinkle felt in these past years,how much she hated her and this was accepted.

Twinkle:Kyu aayi hoo tum yahan?,ab kya chahati hoo,mere kunj ki toh mujhse tumne cheen hi liya tha ab kya chahiye tumhe?

Maya kept quite and the words escaping twinkle's mouth told her that how much hurt she was and how much anger she has stored in herself for such a long time.

Twinkle turned her back to maya and when she heard her say,

Maya:Kunj abhi bhi tumhara hi hai twinkle,woh kabhi tumse dur gaya hi nahi,woh hamesha se tumhara hi toh hai.

Twinkle clenched her fists and turned around,

Twinkle:He is mine,have you forgotten maya what happened six years ago you snatched him from you,because of you He cheated on me,because of you I had to leave him and tum bol rahi ho ki woh abhi bhi mera hai?

Maya:Mujhe sab yaad hai twinkle,what happened sic years ago I can never forget it,6 years ago two lovers were seperated fate played a very bad game,twinkle uss time kismat na toh tumhare sath thi ,na hi mere aur na hi kunj ke bus kismat ne uss ekk insaan ka sath diya.

Twinkle was confused what maya was saying,

Twinkle:Kis insaan kaa sath ,kaise kismat tum kya bo rahi ho maya?

Maya:Yuvraaj luthra aur shayad se god has punished him for his evil deeds by taking away his life,yuvraj is dead twinkle and now its time to tell you the truth which has been kept from you for long 6 sis years,the truth due to which you and kunj had to go through all this.

Yuvi was dead she was shocked to hear it,truth what is maya talking thought twinkle.

Maya:I know twinkle you are confused but its the time that your questions should be answered,i Have been searching you for past 6 years twinkle to tell you the truth,I promised kunj that I will never ever tell this to you but I made my mind to break the promise as soon as you left twinkle.

Twinkle:What do you mean maya,bolna kya chahati hoo tum,saaf saaf bolo.

Maya:Twinkle first come with me,I have a room in the nearby hotel we'll go there and talk because I cannot tell you everything here.

Twinkle:Ohk.

They went to maya's room and maya handed twinkle a glass of water and sat down beside her,and starting telling her everything that happened 6 years back.

Maya:Twinkle kya tumhe sach mai lagta hai ki kunj can cheat on you aur that too with me.

Twinkle:Maya sach kaho toh mera bilkil mann nahi tha tumse baat karna ki infact I hate you from the bottom of my hurtBut I saw a guilt in your eyesthats why I am here and you know what maya I would never believe that kunj cheated on him,every fibre in my body tells me that kunj can never do it but what can I do maya when he himself confessed to me that he cheated on me.

Maya:I know twinkle,you believed it because he told you but I know your heart still believes he never did such a thing,maya held twinkle's hand and said,

Twinkle everything that happened six years ago was a plan.

The revealation stunned twinkle,A plan for what,who made the plan what is she talking about,twinkle's heartbeat increasing with every passing second.

Twinkle:Plan kaisa plan,kiska plan aur kyu maya?

Maya:Twinkle this was all planned by kunj,everything he did it purposefully.

Twinkle felt if her world came crashing down once again,the same feeling of betreyal returning back like she felt on that day six years ago.

Twinkle:Par kyun?

Maya:Kyunki woh tumse bahut pyaar karta hai twinkle,because you are the most important person in his life,nothing matters to him more than you.

Twinkle:Pyaar maya you call it love,kaisa pyaar hai yeh jisme dil thodne ka plan banaya jata hai,kaisa pyaar hai yeh jisme apni hi sathi ko akele chod diya jata hai are you kidding me maya,your talks makes no sense at all.

Maya:I know twinkle it appears to be rubbish to you but it is the truth,and you still are unaware of why the plan was made.

Twinkle:Go one yeh bhi sun lete hai,tell me.

Maya starts telling her whatever happened.

-Flashback-

Maya and kunj were in college and kunj was supposed to drop maya at her place,when they reached maya's place invited him for a tea and as he was tired he said yes.

When they entered maya's house,it was all dark in the house and someone was whistling in the house and soon a single showed them who the person was,it was yuvi.

Kunj:Yuvraaj tu yahan kya kar raha hai?

Yuvi:Itni bhi jaldi kya hai kunj waise bhi tumhare hi matlab ki baat karne aya hun.

Kunj:Yuvi mere pass faltu ka time nahi,mujhe ghar jana twinkle is waiting for me.

Yuvi:Agar woh zinda bachegi toh tumhara wait karegi na..

Kunj looked at yuvi with anger filled eyes how dare he say something like this to twinkle and then panic over shadowed him what if twinkle ko kuch ho gaya toh,in two long strides kunj was standing infront of yuvi and his collar was in kunj's grip.

Kunj:Kya kiya hai tune twinkle ke sath,agar twinkle ko kuch bhi hua na yuvi toh mai teri jaan le lunga.

Yuvi:Itni bhi kya jaldi hai kunj,waise twinkle abhi theek hai leking shayad se uske pass sirf 1 ya 2 din aur hai then woh bhagwan ke pass hogi.

Kunj held yuvi's collar more tightly and said,

Kunj:Twinkle ko hath bhi mat lagana varna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Yuvi:Twinkle ki jaan bachana sirf tumhare hath mai hai kunj ,mai jaisa bolunga tumhe waisa hi karna hoga and twinkle will be fine.

Kunj:I am not gonna fall for your threats yuvi.

Yuvi:I guess I need to give you a demmo,just wait for few seconds kunj and you will get a call,Tik Tok Tik Tok Tik Tok and kunj's phone rang,it was leela.

Kunj picked up the call and what he heard made ground slip beneath his feet.

Leela:Kunj puttar tu jaldi ghar aja twinkle ka accident ho gaya hai,usse zyada chot nahi lagi hai but tu ghar ajja..

After kunj disconnected the call,yuvi said,

Yuvi:Shock laga na kunj ajj toh bas chota sa accident hua hai,usse injuries bhi nahi hui hai and I can see that usse zyada pain tere face par dikha raha hai mujhe,Now decide kunj if you will agree to what I saw or tommorow you will see her dead.

The fear of loosing her took over kunj and said,

Kunj:I am ready,tell me what I have to do?

Yuvi:Its very simple you have to do something due to which twinkle will hate you and she will leave you,Once she leaves you and goes away from you,I will never harm her she should just stay away from you for your entire life You have two hours to think about what you will do and then inform me,I will be waiting for your plan kunj and yuvi left.

Kunj sat down on the couch and maya gave him a glass of water,

Maya:Kunj dont do anything,twinkle ko lekar out of india settle ho jayo sab kuch theek ho jayega ,mai janti hun both of you love each other very much and no matter what you will do twinkle will never leave you.

Kunj:She will go away if I will myself tell her that I cheated on her than woh mujhe chod degi,I know uska trust sirf mai hi tod sakta hun,aur koi bhi nahi.

Maya:But tum kya karne walo ho kunj.

And then kunj narrated her the entire plan,how he will make someone call twinkle and will ask her to come to the hotel and check on him and in the hotel she will see maya and him in compromising situations,and then when twinkle will confront him he will telk her that he got carried away and cheated on her.

Maya:I am not gonna do that kunj,and you know twinkle will break after this,she will never be able to overcome it.

Kunj:I know maya but I love her very much and I cannot see her dead infront of my eyes,I just cannot,she is my life and I can do anything to keep her safe,Even if it means to let her go away from me atleast she will be save.

-Flashback Ends-

Maya:And everything that happened after this no one knws it better than you twinkle,I dont blame you for going away,you were right your decision was right but twinkle ab bahut time ho gaya hai,You should go back to him knowing that he hurted you and broke you he will never come back to you,he will just keep saying that he will get you back,but woh aisa nahi karega.

Twinkle after you left kunj was broken he never talked to anyone,manohar uncle tried every possible to way find you,Kunj kept himself locked in his room hugging a photo of your and hus wedding,he barely ate and talked to anyone,he was so weak that nearly he lost his life,twice he tried to suicide and afterwards doctors diagnosed him with acute depression they started therapy and medicines but they didnt help much kunj was in mental asylum for more than a year and when he came back he was mentally fine but he was not the same kunj,he never smiles he only smiled when he talked about you,Everyday he talked about you,I never met him all these years but bebe told me all this,twinkle he loves and will always love you,please twinkle iss baar usse jane mat do warna woh mar jayega.

Twinkle sat on the chair,a river of tears flowing out of her eyes,her heart was aching listning to this,he did this to protect her and what he went through all these years,if not more he has experienced the same pain as her,his condition was not any different but she was angry he did all this due to yuvi,Ek baar mujhe bata toh dete kunj thought twinkle.

Maya placed her hand on twinkle's reassuring that everything will be alright,twinkle hugged maya tightly and the barrier of emotions she held broke down,the tears that were stopped by the Dam build by her emotions broke loose,and everything just went out.

Maya rubbed her back because she knew what kind of pain twinkle is going through.

After few minutes twinkle wiped her tears and said,

Twinkle:Aisa kar kaise sakta hai woh,mai usse batati hun uss yuvi ke liye usne yeh sab kuch kiya,maya kunj hai kahan par,I want to meet him now!

Maya:Come twinkle I will take you to him,he is in the hotel with his entire family for some function.

Twinkle:Chalo maya.

Twinkle called leela and informed her to bring the kids to the hotel.

Sarna's were in the hotel,the party just ended and they were in the party hall alone,talking regarding something because after a very long time the entire family has been toghether especially kunj.

Everyone was seated and they saw maya entering the house,bebe gave a her a disgusted look as she knew that whatever happened between twinkle and kunj 6 years ago was due to her,maya directly went to kunj and said,maine sab theek kar diya hai kunj and when she said this Everyone saw twinkle entering the hall,bebe had a smile on her face,all of them saw twinkle after such a long time and she still looked exactly same,just the spark on her face was missing.

Twinkle entered the hall and walked straight upto kunj,standing infront of him she looked directly into his eyes,hurt visible in both of thier eyes and what she did next shocked everyone,twinkle slapped kunj hard on his face,not one not twice but multiple time and he kept quite because he knew the truth would have hurted her more than the act itself.

And then she held his collar,

Twinkle:What do you think of yourself haan,samajhte kya hoo apne ko tum,jo mann ayega woh karoge haan?

Kunj:Twinkle..

Twinkle:Bus karo kunj bus karo,ajj mai bolungi aur tum sonoge,what you thought that Twinkle ki jaan bachane ke liye usse uski zindagi cheen lo haan,ek baar mujhe aakar batate toh sahi kunj koi aue solution nikal dete.

Tumhe toh bus apna hi dimaag chalana tha naa,have you ever thought ki jow many deaths I died when all that happened,do you even know how my heart was crying and breaking into pieces when I left you,left out house do you have slightest of idea of how I felt kunj,yaa fir nahi.

He tried to say something but he chocked on words.

He just moved hus head a bit,his lips moved to say something but words were stopped midway when she throwed herself on him,something that he longed for,her touch her wramth,and she cried uncontrollebly,her tears wetting his shirt,for few moments he stood still,taking into her touch,the closeness that he longed for in the past long 6 years.

Her absence made it so difficult for him to live and the guilt that he he broke her heart made it more difficult to live but now she was with him,he hugged her back,his hold on her was so tight that no one would be able to seperate them and then it all came out,the pain,the anger,the hurt if past six years came out and he cried,he cried with her name coming out of his mouth.

Twinkle,twinkle that was all he said,it felt like someone had given the gift of life to a deadbody,it was like he came back from dead.

Every fibre of his body hurted,the sternness he wore for past 6 years faded away and came out the real kunj sarna who cried for his wife on the day when she left and now when she is in his arms,pulling her mote closer to him he nearly lifted her off the ground.

Twinkle:Itna pyaar karte ho mujhse ki mujhse apne app se hi dur bhej diya taki mai theek raho zinda raho,kunj mar jane dete mujhe atleast tumhara sath toh hota,tum jante bhi ho in 6 saal mai har ek din mai marri hun,tumhari yaad mai,maut tumhare bina jine se better hai kunj.

He placed a finger on her lips and looked directly into her eyes,his eyes telling her everything how much he missed her,how much he wanted her to be woth him.

Kunj:In 6 saal twinkle sirf ek hi cheek ka intezar tha,tumhara,taki tumhe sab bata saku aur tumhe wapas apne sath le chalun,tum hi toh meri zindagi hoo twinkle aur tumhare jane ke baad mai ek zinda lash tha twinkle,leking ab lagta hai jaise bhagwan ne mujhe maaf kardia hai aur khud mujhe meri Zindagi di hai kyunki tu hi toh mera bhagwan hai twinkle,please abb mat jana kabhi bhi.

With them thier family was also crying,from bebe to usha,nikki to anand,and everyone,thier kids were finally toghether the storm was over.

Seeing them crying made them realise what both of them has been through in past 6 years and knowing the reason behind thier seperation thier hearts ached more and more,kunj and twinkle were left alone in the hall and maya told them everything.

Kunj and twinkle refused to let go of each other,kunj placed a kiss full of care and love on her forehead,finally they met and god celebrated thier reunion with falling rain drops and a rainbow adorning the sky the seven colors of rainbow were a blessing for thier upcoming colorfull and bright future,thier tears stopped and a smile came on thier faces,they talked nothibg about the past,thier eyes conveyed all the messages,all the sorry's and all the apologies.

The apologies were accepted and past was forgotten and they hugged again,this tie with more love and so tightly as if conveying that now none of them would leave ever,they will be toghether forever.

Sara:Nani mumma kahan hai,we are missing her and where are you taking us?

Kabir:Yes nani please batao naaa ,I want mumma .

Leela:Dekho bacho we reached the hotel and your mumma is waiting for you there only.

Leela entered the hotel and saw sarna's in the lobby ,everyone was shocked to see leela there along with two kids,who were they.

Leela directly asked:Where is twinkle?

Bebe pointed in the direction of hall and leela sent kids there,looking at the happiness on everyone's faces leela got to know what has happened so she decided to send the kids to them alone.

Kunj and twinkle were still hugging when they heard two voices calling out the same thing:Mummmaaa the kids were excited to see thier mumma and they actually didnt paid any attention to the man beside her,the kids ran to thier mumma and hugged her tightly,twinle smiled and bent down to match thier height and sara said,Mumma gandi baat.

Twinkle looked at her and said,Maine kya kiya?

You cried mumma and you promised us that you will never cry ,I can see tear stains on your face and your eyes are soo red..

Kunj was looking at 3 of them with a confused look and then his mind recalled the night when he and twinkle became one,something made him happy seeing the kids but are they really his.

Kabir saw the main and nudged twinkle.

Kabir:Mumma who is this uncle who are staring at us,Should I beat him with my boxing talent afterall no one can eye on my mom and sister.

Kunj raised an eyebrow on the kid and twinkle mentally laughed.

Kunj looked at her with doubt filled eyes and she understood what he wanted to ask her,she nooded her head and happiness exploded in his heart,he never thought that this day would bring so much happiness to him.

Twinkle:Kabir you can beat him because he is a very boxer himself and moreover you don't have permission to hit him.

Kabir:Why mumma?

Twinkle:Because he is your papa,and no one hits thier parents right.

Both the kids looked at kunj with thier beautifull orbs which were exactly like his,and soon tears were falling down from sara's face,from always she was a sensible child and she always missed her papa when she saw other kids specialy girls with thier dad,she so wanted to meet her dad but her mother never ever told anything about thier father to them and now she herself is making them meet him.

The big fat tears starting falling down frm her eyes and she hugged kunj,although her height barely matched his legs but she hugged his leg.

Twinkle always knew how much sara missed her dad,kabir did too but he wasmore of a mumma's boy and as twinkle never discussed about kunj with them he never asked her while sara did many times and twinkle cried too seeing her daughter cry becuase along with kunj and twinkle thier kids also suffered.

Between cries sara said "Paa paa"

Kunj felt soo good and complete he has kids and twins he is father to two of these beautifull kids.

He bent down on his knees and hugged his petite daughter back,comforting her in his strong arms,he felt so good when he hugged his daughter.

Kabir stood shocked with the revelation tha he has a father too,he looked at twinkle and she nodded her eyes assuring to him that its true and it was no later than this that kabir also threw his arms around his father,twinkle cried more seeing the three most important persona in her life uniting and crying,she thanked god that now everything was fine,the strorm was over and it will be all okay now.

The night was long but sun has finally risen into her little world.

Kunj wiped the tears from his daughter's face,he was still not able to believe that he is a father,he stayed away from his family for 6 years and it was all because of him,another feeling of guilt overcame him and he looked away from his kids.

Sara very innocently asked a questions whose answer was so difficult to answer:App itne time se kahan tha papa?

The questions was genuine and anticipated,twinkle looked at kunJ and he blinked his eyes telling her that he will handle this.

Kunj:Kahin nahi bus rasta bhatak gaya tha aur ajj apki mumma ne mujhe rasta dikha diya,aur apke papa hamesha apke sath rahenge.

The words brought smile on the faces of both the kids,finally they would get the love of a father too thought twinkle.

So what about a group family union hug,said twinkle opening her arms,and soon both of kids hugged thier mother with kunj sandwhiching the kids between him and twinkle,finally the kids had both of thier parents toghether.

The family members entered and saw the just reunited family and it made thier hearts happier.

Twinkle gayi thi toh iss ghar ki khushoyan chali gayi thi aur ab jab woh wapas ayi hai toh sari khushiyan wapas lekar ayi hai thought bebe and holded her hands to thanked babaji for giving them twinkle back.

Twinkle:Chalo kids now I will make you meet your other family members,you met your nani and your papa naa now we have some more poeple also.

Twinkle takes the kids to where the family is standing and first goes to bebe and touches her feet,bebe hugs her placed a kidd on her forehead,

Twinkle:So kids she is your bebe,hamare ghar ki sabse badi member and sabse important bhi.

The kids folded thier hands infront of bebe and said namaste,bebe bent down and said pulling thier cheeks Kitne pyaar bache hai bilkul kunj aur twinkle ki carbon copy hai.

And then she introduced the kids to everyone and finally twinkle was back in sarna family,Twinkle apologised to maya for behaving so badly with her and maya said You dont need to ask for it what you did was absolutely right and next day all of them reached amritsar and twinkle and kids were welcomed in the house and a havan was kept for the well bieng of kids and kunj and twinkle and in the evening it was a party because the family reunion calls for a party...

The kids were extremely happy and excited to be at their new and permanent home,The family showered with love and care,the love of a family was really needed for them and they absolutely loved it,And on top of that got their new and separate rooms,a pink one for sara with Disney princesses all over the room and kabir got a room full of his favorite super heroes.

The kids abosultely loved their new rooms.

Twinkle felt soo good to be back in her own house,and most importantly in her and kunj's room,she sat on the bed and remembered all their funny , romantic moments,a tear trickled down her eye,kunj saw it and went to her,wiping her tear he said,

Kunj:twinkle ab aur ansoon nahi,in 6 saalon mai both of us have cried alot but now no more crying,we have our whole life infront of us and on top of that we have to raise our kids well,and doo all the romance that we have missed in the past 6 years.

Twinkle took his hand in her's and kissed his hand.

Twinkle:Kunj jab mai yahan se chali gayi thi use pehle tumne mujhe kuch kaha but maine jawab nahi diya tha,ajj mai bolti hun kunj I LOVE YOU and will love you for mu entire life,tumhare alava I cannot love anyone,And I want to forget all those bad moments and want to star fresh with you,a new start to us to kunj and twinkle and Kabir and sara,Now I want My small little family to be happy forever, ab koi secrets nahi koi ladai nahi sirf pyaar hoga pyaar and saying this she hugged him real tight,breaking the hug he cupped her face in his hands and captured her lips in a kiss,A kiss that showed need,desire and on top of that conveyed to her how much he missed her,their kiss went on for a long time and it was broken by their kids who entered the room suddenly and the result was their parents face flused witha darkest shade of red and the kids covering their eyes..

Epilogue to be updated soon!

Edited by .FlightOfEagle. - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
omg omg such a fantastic update. absolutely adorable and perfect ending to it. it was just excellent. loved every bit of it. Thank you so much Hridey. You are really brilliant. Waiting for the epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

omg omg such a fantastic update. absolutely adorable and perfect ending to it. it was just excellent. loved every bit of it. Thank you so much Hridey. You are really brilliant. Waiting for the epilogue


Thank you jerry😃
Glad you liked it😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.



Thank you jerry😃
Glad you liked it😳



Welcome. 🤗 really loved it <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Hiii frnd...!!!
I m a silent reader of this forum. but after this amazing story, i can't stop myself to write something...
I m crying and reading the story again and again..
Hats of to u...
& thank u for giving us such a beautiful story.. keep the forum warm & excited always...
Edited by tuyapal131 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Aaw such a nice lovely heart touching amazing brilliant update 😳😳 seriously you are a fantastic brilliant writer 👏😳
And such a big jhatkaa laging from this sudden twist and revelation 😆
Superb ending 😳waiting for the epilogue 😛😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
First of thank you for updating i have been waiting
and it is 10x better than what i wished for
so emotional, its written amazingly
i loved it!
Waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Amazing update. Loved it.
So emotional, beautifull ending. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Emotional and amazing no words ...brilliant 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
What an update..Loved it..well written..😊

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