TwiNj 3s[3Shot]:Dhokha Aur Vishwas*LastPart Pg12 5/3/2016*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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3S:Dhokha Aur Vishwas

Part 1-Dhokha

Today it is thought twinkle to herself,today she will tell kunj that she loves him and will tell him how much he matters in her life,how important he is for her.

Today was the perfect occasion,they will be alone in the house,everyone has gone to some pilgrimage,kunj was not going because of his studies and twinkle decided to stay back to look after him or say to spend some time with him.

Twinkle decorated their room with red and white flowers,candles and lots of balloons,it was looking perfect.

Twinkle was waiting for him to coming back,but it seemed that kunj will get late.

Twinkle was sitting in living room waiting for kunj and that when she gets a call from an unknown number,she picks it up.

Caller:Hello

Twinkle:Hello who is this?

Caller:Just consider me as your well wisher,I am here to tell you omething really important.

Twinkle:I guess you have dialled a wrong number.

Caller:No No mrs.sarna I have dailed the correct number,now just listen to me carefully,You are waiting for your husband to com back home but he will not be coming back to you tonight,because he is busy with someone else,spending night with some other girl cheating on you nehind your back mrs.sarna

Twinkle:Ohh please stop it,I trust my kunj he will never do any such thing.

Caller:If you don't believe me then you can check yourself,Go to Ritz hotel room no.323 and the caller cuts the call.

Twinkle is confused should she go there,but why she trusts her kunj,he would never do any such things.

I will not go there,I trust kunj he will come,I will wait for him at the home.

Twinkle waited for kunj for around 1 hour but he didn't came,twinkle's mind drifted to what the caller said,she decided that now she will go to the hotel to see if the caller was saying truth about kunj.

Tension was all over her mind,what if kunj really loves someone,what if he is with someone else in that room,what is that girl is maya,what if her fear of kunj and maya was coming will come true.

Kunj was in the car her mind getting clouded with multiple thoughts the biggest of them was to loss her husband,she can't imagine her life with kunj yet,she has became habitual to him now.

His talks,his actions,spending time with him she loved it the most.

Twinkle reached hotel ritz and went upstairs towards room no.323,her feets tremblibg with tension,she was just walking towards the room,she just wanted the room to be empty.

Twinkle was standing infront of the door,she hands trembling to knock the door,fear overcoming her,her hands moved towards the handle and the door was opened,she turned the knob of the handle and opened the door slightly,No one was there an ounce of fear just faded away,she opened the door a little more,she say someone,she opened the door fully and was she saw broke her completely,tears at the brim in her eyes,her knees giving away as if someone has drained the entire life force our of her,she felt as if color of her sindoor was fading away,her magalsutra being broken,her life was becoming dull.

Tears flowing out of her eyes and her fists clenched in anger,she was angry and devastated at the same time.

She never though this will happen,all her trsut was broken,she trusted him soo much but seeing kunj like this broke her heart and trust.

The sight in front of her was devastatsting a shirtless kunj on top of a girl in the bed and she was maya,all her fears came true,tears uncontrollable flowing down her face,in the shock twinkle dropped her phone on the floor,the sudden sound made kunj turn his head back and he saw twinkle standing theremtears flowing down her face,her face told him that she was hurt,actually very hurt,he knew what she saw is not what she is thinking it is,twinkle is takig it in a wrong way,but anyone would believe it the wrong way,kunj got up.

Twinkle bent down and took her phone she took few steps backwards as kunj took few steps towards her,he grabbed his shirt and wore it twinkle turned and started running,kunj ran behind her he called her name "Twinkle",but she didn't replied,twinkle kept running and crying.

She stepped out of the hotel and kept running kunj was following her,she kept running and reached a deserted road,she was hurt very hurt,kunj finally got hold of her and pulled her near him,twinkle tried to get away from him but his hold was very strong,kunj turned twinkle so she was facing him,kunj looked him her eyes and saw that she was hurt and she must be after what she saw.

Twinkle was still crying and trying to get away from kunj,she started hitting him on his chest but kunj didn't budged even a little he kept holding her,after sometime twinkle stopped her attacks,her knews gave away and she sat on the ground crying uncontrollably,kunj kneeled down and hugged her tightly,he kept saying twinkle please calm down,just hear me once please twinkle.

Twinkle pushed him away with full force and kunj fell back,twinkle hugged her knees and kept crying.

-To be continued-

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yay! Another story.. Loved it. Well u must have become accustomed to this because i keep saying this over and over againg but seriously bauhat achha tha.
Aur the way kunj was found, koi bhi wahi samjhega joh twinkle ko laga.
Excited to know what justification he has.
You are an amazing writer.
Chalo ab i will shut up. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Yay! Another story.. Loved it. Well u must have become accustomed to this because i keep saying this over and over againg but seriously bauhat achha tha.

Aur the way kunj was found, koi bhi wahi samjhega joh twinkle ko laga.
Excited to know what justification he has.
You are an amazing writer.
Chalo ab i will shup up. 😆

Thank you for the tareef!
Actually I havnt decided the justification myself yet!
I have 2 or 3 options Will choose one soon😆

I wanted towrote on this as soon as I saw that promo!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters

Thank you for the tareef!
Actually I havnt decided the justification myself yet!
I have 2 or 3 options Will choose one soon😆

I wanted towrote on this as soon as I saw that promo!

Haww mujhe laga itni tareef ki hai toh next part jaldi mil jayega. Saare plan pe paani daal diya. Lol
But i am sure joh bhi likhoge achha hi hoga. And i love such scenes. Mujhe bada maza ata hai jab aisa kuch hota hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg so heartbreaking and intense. very well done. cant wait to read more 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mind-blowing start.
So heartbreaking yet so amazingly well written.
I cannot wait till you write the second part.
I wonder what sort of justification Kunj has.
Once again, such a beautiful plot line👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Continue sooon..can't wait. ..
beautiful start... 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
kya start he yar?
its was heart wrenching! seriously! u managed well to convey twinkles emotions
continue soon i want to know what happened
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update.
Very emotional scene, loved it.
Continue soon plz.
Edited by hailly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This so dam good n interesting.Waiting for Part 2 n what justification Kunj will give.

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