SR DOTW#2 (July 14, 2017)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Nyna beautiful work

change things u know if we change the thing according to ours then whole sr will change except 1 or 2 tracks😆

i will change swara mahaanta toward those spinless people over again & again.🤢

how dadi & ragini never got any punishment for their crime.

than ML, Tashan track etc.

our complaints will not end & u know that so thats all.

Thanks for new thread

stay happy dear.

loads of love

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Res 😛😳
Will be back with 3 things I would most have loved to see changed/modified/nuance added, in the serial. 😊 There are a few more, but these are the 3 things which called out to me the most. 😉

Res for now.

Lovely thread Nynu...🤗

I am back 🤗🤗

Well, here goes :

1) Ragini's redemption: Though I was and always will be a SwaSan fan, Ragini is a character I always found extremely intriguing. There was so much potential there for a meaningful redemption track, which IMHO, the serial near-totally wasted.

To my mind, there were 2 distinct opportunities they could have taken to show this---One, they could have actually made Ragini's pretend 'memory loss' a real one. Or what if, she got back into Maheshwari House pretending to lose her memory, but actually got amnesia owing to some mishap Lucky subjected her to? Perhaps some accident she sustained during that kidnap track?

Or again, they could have shown Ragini genuinely repenting after the kidnap track, when she saw how far her diabolical planning had driven Lucky to.

2) Though the SwaSan Sindhoor marriage and Sunny Boy's drunken love confession will always be the most poetic, goose bump inducing sequences I have ever had the good fortune to watch on TV, I do wish they had shown some more buildup to Sunny falling in love with Swara. They did do a good job of showing his resolve and determination to always stand by her, to atone for the way he had treated Swara as 'collateral damage' in his machiavellian plan for revenge against DP/ Lucky. But IMHO, they could have shown some more time with the SwaSan friendship building and deepening, with Sunny perhaps battling his growing attraction to Swara for some more time.

3) The 'Ragini as malkin' track was rather poorly executed. The idea of DP managing to transfer all the properties in her name violated all tenets of business law, whether one considers the Maheshwari empire as an HUF (most likely), partnership (less likely), or limited company (least likely). Plus, I would have loved to see a titanic battle of wits, wiles, will and guile between Ragini and Sanskaar during that phase. Ragini trying furiously to capture the Maheshwari business, wealth and home; and Sunny thwarting her plans. The ex guru--chela fight would have been a joy to watch. 😳

Would love to know what are the things you all would have liked to see differently in the serial. 😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Viji🤗

🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

I am too excited to see you here, no way can I post anything much.😳 Just replied to one of your pms now will try to get back to the other.

Do you know that your presence is the best present for us, though as the birthday girl, you should be the one receiving the presents. But then it is like you, giving of you to us.

loads of love,

Nyna

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phoenix27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Happy Birthday Viji Dear :)

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Sushma Yadav

@Limerence

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Alot of things which i don't like in Serial but well serial depend on trp and makers only want that.

I really thought it willshow a great bonding of sisters and their struggles but its okay

1. I really don't like how low Ragini went for getting Laksh, In first only if Ragini hadn't encourged Swara then she need not to do all that.

2.I really felt Ragini got alot of chances to redeemp but that never happens even when finally she got chance to redeem herself that was also not in proper way.

3.I really felt very disapoined in many places having strong background of Suuny boy. Well Swara, she is Mahaan no doubt, she was somuch addicated for a family that she forgave everyone so eaisly but why Sanskar left people so eaisly.

but he most disaponted track for me was Malkin track, the way Ragini treated everyone that made me feel Swaragini worthless as she took every evil of side of her dadi.

In Swaragini the bond which was needed between siblings and couples was not shown much .

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

I am back 🤗🤗

Well, here goes :

1) Ragini's redemption: Though I was and always will be a SwaSan fan, Ragini is a character I always found extremely intriguing. There was so much potential there for a meaningful redemption track, which IMHO, the serial near-totally wasted.

To my mind, there were 2 distinct opportunities they could have taken to show this---One, they could have actually made Ragini's pretend 'memory loss' a real one. Or what if, she got back into Maheshwari House pretending to lose her memory, but actually got amnesia owing to some mishap Lucky subjected her to? Perhaps some accident she sustained during that kidnap track?

Or again, they could have shown Ragini genuinely repenting after the kidnap track, when she saw how far her diabolical planning had driven Lucky to.

2) Though the SwaSan Sindhoor marriage and Sunny Boy's drunken love confession will always be the most poetic, goose bump inducing sequences I have ever had the good fortune to watch on TV, I do wish they had shown some more buildup to Sunny falling in love with Swara. They did do a good job of showing his resolve and determination to always stand by her, to atone for the way he had treated Swara as 'collateral damage' in his machiavellian plan for revenge against DP/ Lucky. But IMHO, they could have shown some more time with the SwaSan friendship building and deepening, with Sunny perhaps battling his growing attraction to Swara for some more time.

3) The 'Ragini as malkin' track was rather poorly executed. The idea of DP managing to transfer all the properties in her name violated all tenets of business law, whether one considers the Maheshwari empire as an HUF (most likely), partnership (less likely), or limited company (least likely). Plus, I would have loved to see a titanic battle of wits, wiles, will and guile between Ragini and Sanskaar during that phase. Ragini trying furiously to capture the Maheshwari business, wealth and home; and Sunny thwarting her plans. The ex guru--chela fight would have been a joy to watch. 😳

Would love to know what are the things you all would have liked to see differently in the serial. 😊

@bold black.

WORD old friend.
i would have LOVED that. though i won't exchange his love confession for anything in the world for it was that precious.. i still would have LOVED to see what you wrote so beautifully unfolding on screen.

same pinch Viji. after Sanskaar if there was any character which fascinated me the most.. that was Ragini. though i would have scrapped Malkin track entirely for it was so unworthy of dark Ragini .. reducing her to garden variety vamp sheesh... your spin on that track sounds SO good.

GREAT to see you Viji and read you wonderful words again.🤗.
you were SO missed.
welcome back dearest friend.

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Bang on Topic Nimmi⭐️

If I had power .. First with no further delay ..I would redeem

Swara😆🤣 turn her into normal human with flaws than being portrayed as I - Know - all, big hearted , Mahaanta ki moorthy and would erase the her line .." Kabka maaf kardiya " to Sanskaar permanently . God! That line still stings me like hell 😡😡😡 and will let her mutter " I am sorry too" and will change her pricking dialogues and attitude which stung too during ML track . Any Swara bhakts here ?😈😆. She has partial amnesia , but the 360 turn around .. It was unbearable at times and that stupid monologue , they gave her as grace .. " Natak tha" during Sab tera BG in jungle 😡.. and above all .. One word I hate the most " KHOONI" - in dolby surround sound which bled my ears😔.. and ...Hmm let me think

@ Viji ; 🤗🤗🤗I am sounding repetitive but .. it feels so good to see you back ❤️ and Build up to Sanskaar's confession , I remember discussions in the forum then when the OLV came out, how most of us felt .. It was a bit abrupt , like it was being rushed .. wish we had more scenes .. leading to this ... but that damn confession of Sanskaar when it aired, it kinda over powered every ounce of doubt ..None of them could think of nothing but rave about that ardent potent and to die for ,declaration of love . ⭐️Best moment in SR for me at any point ..⭐️😳

I think it portrayed the extent Swara affected Sanskaar , a single word or action. I think the fight he had with Swara over " gala dabaavo" of Ragini , the feeling that Swara doesn't trust him any more .. hurt him such an extent ... it brought out his inner most feelings in form of confession of his misdeeds and his love for Swara ...

Ragini - The forceful redemption... I wish it was more sturctured and agree with nimmi ..If after Sanskaar, any character which held such a depth and fascination , it would be hands down Ragini . Her Mohabbat Buri hain , Buri hain mohabbat, kahe jaa rahe hain , kiye jaa rahe hain" still gives me goosebumps .. I wish they had handled character of such potential with care.

and last absurd Bank robbery act .. Have Cv's gone nuts ... or lost their bolts😡😡. I would scrap that .

Might be back for more 😊

Love

Lucky

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

If I had power.. Wow I would have done so many things.. I can list them out in order.. So randomly here it goes..

Swasan Marriage.. Drama is needed for marriage drama.. I know TV shows and I totally get it.. But seriously Kavita drama and Swara life imprisonment.. All throughout the track I got annoyed with the stupid lawyer and sanskar failures to help his Soulmate.. And the final straw was when he decided to Marry because of an blackmailed.. Seriously writing about this track makes my blood boil.. Typing from mobile.. So will grace you with one by one posts..

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Next up was what happened after the wedding.. Seriously kavya Vs Swara was what we all wanted right.. Ofcourse not.. When Shekhar dragged Swara away.. I thought maybe maybe we get a proper lovely reunion of swasan.. And what I got swasan Vs kavya.. And mind I remind you about the jail track in it and the I totally forgot the new guy who helped kavya.. Such an super horrible track.. Any other time I would have handled the track but right after swasan marriage.. Ofcourse not

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

And I am here, the board meeting done, I am stranded in office as the roads have turned to a muddy river and it is a holiday today and still had to work so ranting is a very good idea.

Okay what would I want to change, almost everything 😆(except for the pairing. And Sanskaar's drunk confession, it left me so enchanted and even today is my favourite proposal, even scores over the gerua one. And yes the sindoor marriage)

Okay here goes:

The sisters' bonding

The sisters bonding which the serial was supposed to be the crux of the serial. and it was virtually non existent. I do agree that making Swara a girl brought up by a single mother with a modern outlook turning out to be the good one and Ragini, the traditional girl turning to be obsessive was brilliant. In fact it was so dazzling that the CVs went blind. So we had one sister absolutely dark without the attendant starlight that would have made us sympathise with her, a little, and rendered her redemption almost impossible. She should have been driven by the need to obtain Laksh, but still retained some basic courtesy and humility in her. On the other hand we had the mahaan Swara, completely whitewashed (more brainwashed in some sense) who would always chose her sister, her black spot being her inability to trust the one person she should.

Swara and Sanskaar

I agree with Viji and Nimmi and Lukcy, I would have loved to see a more meaningful journey of how Sanskaar fell in love with Swara. His confession timing was bang on, a reflex action when he was cut by Swara's lack of trust / faith in him. But looking back, it was not even a few weeks of the fake marriage - he took five years to get over Kavita's death, he had planned a very meticulous revenge and did not initially hesitate to sacrifice an innocent girl as collateral damage. It would have been nice if they showed him introspecting his fast changing emotions towards Swara, reluctant to even admit the attraction, unable to identify why he needs her before the scales tip and he is drunk to confess. A little pace in that track would have been marvellous to behold.

Kavita's resurrection

Scrap this track, completely- no sense whatsoever, the woman he loved, whose supposed death drove him to plan a diabolical and patient revenge plan and he left her body at the temple stairs? Which magically got transported to the middle of the woods in the middle of the night, where DP chances on the goons beating her (I suppose, did they show the scene clearly) and a whistling Kaveri discovers them (whistling in the rain, in the middle of the night - really😡). And because he is innocent he runs away and Kaveri takes her comatose daughter, puts her in a state of the art facility and waits five years for an opportunity to fall in her hands. This has more holes than a fishing net.

And Swara simply waltzs into the hospital room where it is a stroke of luck that Kavita just woke up from coma at that appropriate moment?🤢 Why could I not give up on the serial before all this was shown?

And even this would have been forgiven if Sanskaar and Ragini got a chance to prove Swara's innocence (rather than that stupid, way over the top police chase, Swara jumps from the police van and hides behind a car and they cannot find her. My one year old nephew is far more successful with his peek a boo games (and tons cuter too😳) I would have loved watching them, matched in wits and determination, Sanskaar wary, unwilling to trust her but admiring her and she, repentant, remorse ridden, wanting to make up and atone for all she has done to him and her sister. But no, we had the bumbling police, an inept lawyer, a whiny sister, a helpless lover and the over zealous Swara.

As I said, the track should have been scrapped

The Ragini Sanskaar jailhouse Swap, that did not rock, it sank🤢

The obvious reasons - logically and practically impossible. The smoke bomb lasted for like two minutes, and Sanskaar and Ragini - okay sorry for the visualisation, I am not responsible for your imaginations😉 - strip, exchange clothes and doll up again in that time frame, I cannot do that with my own clothes so I find in very difficult to believe that Sanskaar managed it and I am overlooking the size differences. Not to mention wigs

That scene was like -"the audience consists of absolute idiots who do not even have a single pea sized brain among themselves, they will lap up whatever we serve"

The ML track

I will not start for there would be no end, all I can do is pray that someday I will get over that "Khoooni" cry, my ears bleed even to this date. It was a learning experience, that amnesia leads to personality disorder and reminded me of one article I had read while researching for FM - there was a study which was conducted to check if amnesia could be used to reform convicts - it failed for obvious reasons. Guess the CVs did not read the conclusion of that study.

The grand separation track

"Maine kab ka maaf kar diya"

I have not. Not then, not now and not anytime in the future😡 That track was "how does one ruin the characters of a beautiful OTP🤢

I will get back, actually there is not much left to change either 🤣(except for the bank robbery act, which thanks to my adorable clingy nephew I did not watch. I am going to go home and give him a couple of extra kisses)

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