Swasan SS - A Game Called Love - Chapter (9 &10 )PG13( Nov 1) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Sanya17

I am loving this story sanskar kavita both were playing games but mahaan swara had to interfere not that I mind 😉 and the way she interfered 😳 I loved it sanskar has attitude but he actually seems sweet him offering his coffee to swara it was sweet sanskar won for now he got to know swaras favourite and that too without any trick just with his sweetness

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I res for three - will need some time for this unres. Seriously behind my own update (very selfish of me and I cannot blame anyone but my obsession with PS) and I have an OS demanding to be completed.😳

Nynu ... Please take care of your health ... and Obsession with PS .I know how it is . You will get hang onit soon .. and what is this OS ..Is this on Swasan ..Did I miss something? and being selfish is good .. we ought to be .. 😉

Take your time.. no hurries

Had to let you know - "I rise" and "To Autumn" - both my favourite poems😳 and my favourite line in this update: "tumhe padh raha tha" what greater compliment could a woman get when given right?

Poetry will have little role to play here. Hence mow my research is diverted towards it and I am a happy person😛.. I came across 'I rise' .. and absolutely loved it and Autumn ..I needed one to connect it to Nasim bagh ... hence routed to Keats ..😊😳

Guess this game is going to turn to a battle of emotions and a war of families?

Family war ... not much ..but battle of emotions yes .. soon in a part or two

And yes - Happy journey, stay safe

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Hi it has been a long time since you updated when will you update??

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lucky darling...

Res..

Unres..

Ahhh...im little late...read chapter 3 too..will get to that later...😳

I am much late😆😆 in revert.So dont bother talia .. Thats fine

Chapter 2 was soo fun...i soo enjoyed the tashan betw een swasan ...👏

Tashan is always fun .. adds spice to story. I have fun writing them too

kavita made an entry.😕..U know i dont like kavita😕...mention of her..makes me think that she will do something evil...as she is rich n influential too...so far nothing bad happened...fingers crossed for future...😕

Kavita ... is bound to create troubles in paradise.. but things will be fine at end . We need some one to add drama right!😆

Well story will move in this direction ..i was not expecting...everyone is playing game...kavi had one...sanky too..both were playing on..suddenly swara gate crashed their lovey dovey game...some cool twist.😃..then begins the battle..to woo the girl...swara will lose fast im sure..sanky is a charmer...i like his twisted ways to turn things in his favour...😳

How cleverly he asked lucky to bring swara for coffee..it was a pleasant scene...light n sweet..😳.overall fabulous update..still smiling ..read thrice...😉

😳 Sanskaar is college charmer and heartthrob for no reason. He is here to play and not give in easily .. but Swara will give him tough fight too😉

Going to readchappy 3 again..waitingfor more..

Love u

Talia

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lucky darling..

Chapter 3 was killer...beyond words yaar...

😳😳😳

Right from beggining it was hit...i liked how you encorporated poetry of john keats and maya angelou with your story...maya peotry depicting sharmistha's life...i loved narration of john poetry...awesome explanation...u know i enjoy when any useful information is blended nicely with story...your a marvellous writer dear...

I am all floating ...😳Thanks darlin.. and I stumbled on them for this chapter and its such a thought provoking and lovely stuff ..and glad to know you found it to be well blended

Swasan were magical through n through...sanky challenged her that he will dance with her..and again by using his ways and her oversmartness...she landed in front of him..for dance...their conversation was natural n straight forward...both are attracted to each other strongly...their proximity n dance was heart racingly hot...i got lost in them...that scene was love..

😳 That was best part ..I loved penning it too.. and gald you share same sentiments ..And Yes,Swara tired to play smart ..but caught in her own game. Sanskaar is more smarter😆😉

Climax was good..lucky noticed something between them..im sure others (kavi n sahil) would have noticed too...felt bad for them..their plan failed...kavi lost contest n sahil lost dance with swara...awww...well i feel this story is light and funfilled..emotionally strong..n will not turn dramatic..with kavi n sahil planning n plotting...fingers crossed..hoping..

This story will mostly be light hearted and fun .. with a bit of drama.. but not heavy emotional drama ..or heart wrenching stuff.😆😭

We still have story to reveal ragini n swara's actual relation...do we get to see raglak or not???swasan love story is most awaited...Excited for next...curious...

Raglak in making soon 😉 and revelations will follow too

Love u for this

Talia