Swasan SS - A Game Called Love - Chapter (9 &10 )PG13( Nov 1)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res for 4

- you will live for a thousand years, was just thinking that I should pm you, you have been missing. Anyway, I will read and unres for both 3 and 4

love,
Nyna

Nynu🤗

I am fine .. Hows your health now ? and I read you hurt your hand too.😕.. Hope you are feeling better . Take care bangaram 😊❤️

Updating in IF has become Pain ...I tell you .. The quotes thing adding everything again .. Its very irritating😡😡 ..I have to update twice .😭 Hence I am holding back till I am in a better mood to post here ..and my patience levels are high ..😆😆

Take your time ... No worries😉

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu🤗

I am fine .. Hows your health now ? and I read you hurt your hand too.😕.. Hope you are feeling better . Take care bangaram 😊❤️

Updating in IF has become Pain ...I tell you .. The quotes thing adding everything again .. Its very irritating😡😡 ..I have to update twice .😭 Hence I am holding back till I am in a better mood to post here ..and my patience levels are high ..😆😆

Take your time ... No worries😉

Love
Lucky

Shoulder is much better now, but typing is a little strenuous and leaves me with a stiff neck. And double quotation marks in IF is very infuriating. But I do not have anything to compare with, so I just accept IF as it is. Updating twice is difficult and needs a lot of patience, so thank you from the stubborn us, who refuse to move on to other platforms.

I am working on the final chapter of FM, want to and do not want to finish it, but will push myself to do so during this week.

lots of love,

Nyna

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Res lucky...😉

Thank you n nyna for eid wishes...will get back soon😃

Unres..

Lucky..this is pure cheating yaar..😭on wattpadd u updated chapter 5...n here we are on chapter 4...i guess becoz here are less readers.😕...im sorry for being little late...😕was busy in eid preparations...😛

...coming to chapter 4... it was marvellous...even lucky asked about swasan being together ..but sanky answered wisely..even he is not sure about his feelings completely...there is strong attraction between them.they just could not name it LOVE that easily...

Swasan were mesmerizing together.😳..conversation between them was so natural😉..i loved it...their coffee date..n proper dinner date was just masterly penned...

Climax was 😳..sanky is a charmer ..n swara is strongly drawing towards him...that peck on cheeks was😳😳😳...it made me soo happy...whoever had seen them..i hope does not cause them trouble...

Dying for chappy 5..👏

Love u

Talia

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Lucky ..

Unreserve above...update 5 soon..

Love u

Talia

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lucky.m

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Lucky ..
Unreserve above...update 5 soon..

Love u
Talia

Hey Talia 🤗.. Yeah I cheated😆😆 But I will make it even . I posted Chapter 5 ..and will post 6 tomorrow😉

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Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Hey all🤗

Updated Chapter 5. Do read if time permits and let me know your thoughts😊

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Lucky

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Res for 5,will get back for both 4

and 5 soon

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
I res for three - will need some time for this unres. Seriously behind my own update (very selfish of me and I cannot blame anyone but my obsession with PS) and I have an OS demanding to be completed.😳

Okay, I thought I had unres all my spots, turns out I have not done for any in this tale. So am now going to do it in the order it should be done.

Bewitched indeed - Swara, Sanskaar and me too. So while Swara was lost in Keats, Sanskaar was composing an Ode to her eyes, and her smile and the sight of her. And then as I mentioned before, the truth, that he was reading her, that was the best pick up line, honest and from the heart. No wonder Swara was caught off guard, but she was flattered too.

And the entire teasing, flirting encounters, the corner of the stairs, the dance floor and then in the seclusion in the outside - truly lost to the world and lost in each other. And though she is clever, he is cleverer by half, the dance tag switch was a gamble but he did win (dharye Sahase Lakshmi - not in the traditional interpretation but in a twisted way suits this situation😉). And the bonus - Kavita and Sahil dancing together, I was not too sure what made me happier.😆 I loved the way the dance floor was on fire - with the attraction between Swara and Sanskaar and the disappointment of Sahil and Kavita.

The face off between the brothers- great way to end- a minor cliff hanger - which in normal situations which would have made the reader ask - "Oh no, is Laksh too in love with Swara?"😲 But since I have already read 4 - no such questions. Now off for 4

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res for 4

- you will live for a thousand years, was just thinking that I should pm you, you have been missing. Anyway, I will read and unres for both 3 and 4

love,
Nyna

Crazy feeling called love - crazy, exhilarating, life altering, makes the whole world look rosy. And yes crazy for neither are truly willing to admit what they feel for each other, attraction they admit to yet I think are a little scared of the intensity of that attraction and surprisingly an unwillingness to hurt the other. And the bromance (I am a great fan of bromance and sisterly love) was simply heart warming.

The funny friendly banter regarding Ajay, a lovely read, though the heated slightly possessive way Sanskaar makes her admit the truth was even better.😉 And her burning retort, that was the best.😳

The date was good to read despite the loom of Kavita's threat, and the bliss of their kiss sort of ruined by the hint of someone having seen them - I have not yet read 5 so my mind is on an overdrive. So rushing to read 5.

Did I mention that I simply love the light breezy feel this story has, congratulations for setting it in a college setting without making it cliched.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res for 5,will get back for both 4
and 5 soon

Chapter 5 was not sweet it was hot and spicy. I love poetry and I know it can be sensuous,but under you skill it simply set the laptop on fire. It was like making love to her mind till the body cannot do without him. It was one of the best seduction scenes - where both are the seducer and the seduced and the end in a passion that threatens to consume them. Please do not spoil it by having Kavita come across them, Laksh is fine.

I sort of hoped it would be Ragini who saw them but Shekar was better, hopefully he soon works up the courage to tell the truth and I am glad that he trusts Swara and Sharmishta's upbringing.

I am now waiting, with bated breath for Chapter 6 - oh sweetest sweet (BTW - thanks for letting me know of this gem, it was lovely though for me it will always be associated with SwaSan).

love,

Nyna

PS - I am now going to res for Chapter 6

ETA - I loved the chapter not only because of the spice and sizzle but equally for those tiny little nuggets of the bromance and the sisterly bonding. Swara and Ragini are not yet aware that they are sisters, or rather Ragini is not, but she is such a lovely confidant. Makes me hope that she will be thrilled to bits to discover that Swara is her sister and would be instrumental in Shekar openly acknowledging Swara as his daughter.

Edited by Nynaeve - 7 years ago

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