Swasan SS - A Game Called Love - Chapter (9 &10 )PG13( Nov 1) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Hey lucky...

This is intriguing dear. Seems like it's going to be light hearted one using collage stuff. I'm loving this dear. 😳

With love,

Kavi

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lucky darling...

Talia🤗

Phew ..such long update and awesome too..i was wondering u all dont get tired typing so much????your fingers must be paining...???comendable job yaar..typing so much...

Typing is the main and tiresome job Talia.😕I wish I had magic quill like in harry potter

Chapter 1...I just loved the update..there was a sweet sense of pleasure i felt reading it...a smooth ride...

Glad to know it was smooth ride .. and had a nice flow.😛

Swara..rebellious one...i liked her background and how her life changed completely in matter of few weeks...her journey from mumbai to kolkata...adjustingin new environment..with her new family...it was tough..but she had faced so much in her life..having strong independent mom sharmistha surely moulded her to be strong and independent too..looking forward for her tashan ...

Yep .. Swara is bit rebellious in this one ... Sometimes its just takes a minute for the life to change .. just an event.Since Swara had already watched her mom fighting since she was young Swara developed same attitude and sharmistha's upbringing taught her to fight back

My sanky...my hero enters ..gosh his entry made me blushy blushy...why he is soo hot..we got lucky too...lucky and swara in same batch and frame that ring some bell in me..n after that ragging incident..i was like noo..he will fall for her now..even sahil presense make me irked why ??? They have to be in story ..to ruin swasan chemistry..by complicating things...im sure we will get kavita too...nooo...what can we do?? How much i detest them they are nessesary for story...i know u well blend them well...what ragini do???as in study???curious for her part too..

Ragini's study is mentioned in next part ..and we need ingredients to spice up drama right!😆Don't worry .Lucky will not fall for Swara in this .. he have other role to play and thanks for the confidence.. you know its always Swasan at the end😉

Im soo excited for next update..

Updated next 2 parts😛

Love u

Talia

Originally posted by: _InDreamWorld_

Intresting story

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Lucky

I am not frequent these days on the forum. So missed out the release of your new story.

Great plot and interesting narrative. Loved swaradevis confidence and the tension brewing around.

Love..

Veena.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And that was a fun filled bindas update - great dynamics and for once I am glad that Swara Madam has bitten off more than she could chew. It is a curious case of pride and prejudice, the twist being that both are in Swara, not that Sanskaar is not full of pride but here, when he and Kavita take on each other, it was a game they were both playing, each to their own selfish reasons. And Swara had to butt in, now she is quite trapped.

My favourite scene - the absolute oblivious-ness of Swara to the effect she had on Sanskaar, which had Kavita stalking off (damp squid she is😆) and the tables turned during the encounter in the library - guess she talks and then thinks - Swara has certainly bitten off more than she can chew. But then when love (okay, currently attraction) is in the air, the mind is taken over.

And yet, her fairness is admirable, when she admits what her favourite type of coffee is - which has both smiling, anticipating future encounters😉

loved it

Nyna