Swasan SS - A Game Called Love - Chapter (9 &10 )PG13( Nov 1) - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
Res for 6😊😆😆

My comment for Chapter 6 is going to be before the message stating that you have updated it. Cannot get earlier than this.😉

So "you and me" huh? Finally they decide to get around to the important question- the elephant in the room or rather the fire breathing golden scaled dragon- their attraction is beyond the physical and it is no longer a game for them. Though Swara did turn their date place into a game - point to her.

Ragini - go girl go - though in her vehement support of her sister/friend she let slip the word Maheswari - which did put a stop to Dadi's tu tu main main but is going to start a new game - knowing how narrow minded she is, I think she is going to poison their minds (Guess they move in the same social circles and Dadi feels she should warn her marwari brethren about the possible attack on their culture and values.) That one is going to backfire spectacularly.

And am glad they came to their senses - sort of - without any witnesses. I would not be able to take it if Kavita /Sahil saw them - imagine - no I cannot.

BTW the next post is for the epilogue - you have underestimated as usual. Good for you, more chapters for us to read.😳😳

love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
Chp 5 😳 ☺️ it was wonderful one of the best hot and romantic scene I ever read I really loved it I am really eager to read the next one you are a wonderful writer . in this story you have created the perfect combination of sweet hot and cute and these three in the perfect amount makes this story a perfect romantic story and please keep it that way keep sahil and kavita less as possible laksh ragini is fine the sibling scenes are really cute and sweet
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
Res for 5 lucky
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Lucky dear.

Chapter 5 was mind blowing... u are killing me ...where can i get such a man like sanky...wish he could be real ...im in swasan land...always..dreaming about all stories i have read about them...

You penned sanky n swara so brilliantly..their chemistry just burns everything...i was scared for dadi n shekhar reaction..but shekhar was calm..for a change ..i was relieved...
Sanky learning peotry for swara was sweetest gesture...he avoided her too..just to see her reaction...n she did came to him..all angry...but that playful argument turned into a sensual journey...she claimed him..n he own her...that scene was a treat..i cherished it...

Waiting for more...

Love
Talia
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Super excited for 6...
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Lucky dear..chapter 6 was fantasticly superb...

I am so much in love with swasan...right after that mesmerizing kiss...i was soo happy...i loved the fact that both are straight forward and dont deny the pull the felt for each other...its no longer game for them..they both are strongly in love...last update sanky unravelled her likeness for poems..he learned a sonnet for her...in this update he presented her with dozen of roses..aww how cute...
Ragini part was good too..she defended swara nicely...loved all the swasan scenes...so refreshing...

And u again cheated..updated 7 already on wp..but i read it already...im sooo glad to read it..waiting for 8 on wp ..n here too...

Love u
Talia
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
Nynu🤗😳 Sanya and Talia
Will reply for each one tomorrow.Updated next chapter.

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu🤗😳 Sanya and Talia

Will reply for each one tomorrow.Updated next chapter.

Love
Lucky


Take your time. I have unresed for 6 on page 11.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
My GOD
U have written such a nice story
Can't describe my fondness in words
Loved it
Keep it up
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Dearest lucky
Thank you and sorry for the late revert back to all the lovely updates...

All you loverly ladies are such gems...seriously thank you so much for the pm for this lovely tale. ...

Wow cannot even express how awesome it is...

Sorry but will say what I feel for each chapter in one post so apologies is it gets a bit long :)


So I see it all started from a challenge..wow what a better way to fall in love I see...The spell has been cast and a web of challenges haves been vowen and challenges have been set...

I love the way she walked in to the college and was herself got the start...swara has been an angle to protect and worship what she h's and treasures what she h's lost...must say I lie let bonding with lucky her challenge to sahil and her reverting reply to his little game...

Wow and the way she has handle kavi must say one rocking chick...

And then your ever so cool sanskaar a man of family and a few words but wow does he like.to play a game...

But must say I love there meet in the canteen and the way she tried to help kavi from.heartbreak and there little banter..poor man must have not seen that coming...

I see sometimes one action can leaf us to a journey were we never thought we may end up...its nice the way you have shown us that the way she people is my always what we may perceive to receive for he thought there was not much to her and she thought him to be a play boy...as it said time and time again never judge a book by its cover...

So I see the challenge has been set and the game has started...There minds are at war but what the fail to see is that there souls know what they want...

There little touches the small smiles and there secret meetings from the corridor to the classroom and at the dance floor...

In deed we can try to fight with our mind but yet we cannot with our soul...its simple sometimes we have to do what our heart wants...I see she craves to be held and he longs to be with her...I love the way they address each other with they surnames miss bose and Mr masheswari...oh god it's just sets the flame on fire...

Fire indeed it's another sign that of love for me is feel that it often shows what is hidden deep...is secretly shows what we dream. ...I see that with each challenge sanskaar is finding his dream woman and she her man...

After all does she not deserve her happy ending...why not...I love the way the accuse yet wish...

Wishing is just like destiny...sometimes we have to make it happen like he has done from there little date to coffee and there outing...

For me the poem have been a blessing to...They have both highlight there battle and have also shown there love seems they cannot be away from each other. ...

Yet I see darkness lurking from dadi to kavi what do they have in mind...will you be sharing...what happened to sahil and ajay make a entry too...

God I loved the way he made Sanky jealous :)

For this outstanding piece all I can say is...so far a journey that has stem from a challenge that will not only set hearts racing but souls searching...seeking what destiny has to offer...

Like many lovers have said before...

" the soul is like the moon lightning yet igniting the fire we are yet to seek...A touch is like a pool of essence a kiss is like the lightning of the new dawn...

A blessing from the sun is of th warmth that is to.come and the love yet that is to be seen for dreaming is to except and losing is to learn that life can indeed be beautiful if only we let it entry our life and sometimes for that magic to strike all it takes its a game "

"Sparkle with me and you shall see what your eyes hold are what my eyes seek...the darkness that I seeked and the warmth that I wished to ignore is on my as far as the depth of the ocean that thee eyes hold...I drawn and am drawn with only a one warning that I the end I shall fail...fail in the game of love...love me like no other "

"For ultimately my love we both shall not fail but prevail...pravail in the journey of life...and with love in hand it will only be divine...come be my family...came and be my Kingdom..."


I see this tale will indeed be one of those and so wonder will.his family be as happy as lucky...or will it all end before it all began...

Love it all...

Hope our well and keep smiling

Razia

Dear live the messages you alway send with each journey...from love cane be divine to love as all we need is faith...

Faith = swasan :)

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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
Lucky darling...
Horribly late...unres @ 11...update quickly

Love u
Talia
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@ Razia
Thank you for such a insightful comment .😛 Sorry for delay in revert .Please bear with me.😕

Love
Lucky

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