Swasan SS - A Game Called Love - Chapter (9 &10 )PG13( Nov 1) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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I did not want to delay any longer - so the chapter - great job setting out the introductions, smooth flow from one character to another and no where did you break the reader's attention.👏👏

Nynu😳😳 to hear that from writer like you ..😛

Sharmishta and Shekar - the was a wistful regret filled life of theirs - not that they regretted their decision of a night together, but they the fact that they spent a life time apart. And Shekar, for the time being at least appears to be a nice person, quite under his mother's thumb but still nice. A brief glimpse into Ragini also gives nice vibes.

That was needed to set the backdrop for this story , because this is going to play a major role in upcoming parts ..and I wanted Sekhar to be a nice person in this FF too ...he will be mostly , though he will be under thumb of Parvati Gadodia, till a point. Sharmistha's role was intended to be brief..leading Swara to Kolkata.

Swara, musically inclined but interested in MBA, which is what Sanskaar is pursuing - and baby Laksh (he is nice too😆). So are we going to have a similar triangle, but knowing you, even if it did it would be with a twist. So Laksh is already a fan of Swara and Sanskaar is quite intrigued - so much so that it leads to the challenge so tantalisingly set out in the introduction. BTW - Ragini and Swara are almost of the same age, so how come Ragini is not in this colleges, or is it that academically she becomes a year younger?

And we also have Sahil (how I love the way he is such a callous, beastly egoistic guy) and since there is Sidharth Roy, does it mean Kavita Roy's entry too?

Good you pointed about Rags .. I was supposed to add a line about her education too..some hoe missed out . Ragini is 8 months younger to Swara so she is a year younger to her ..and Ragini's passion is music ..and she intends to make music as career . Hence she is in music college .I will make sure to add these points in coming parts . I wanted Laksh to be loved here ..he's gonna be . and let me assure, there's no love triangle here b/w three .. it will be Swara Sanskaar all the way , yes we have Sahil who might pose problems and Yes you are right again ..Kavita is going to make an entry in coming part .She will play a crucial role in leading Swasan towards Challenge..you will know how in next part😉

Oh You loved Sahil .. I give my self brownie points there ..Not easy to make him likable😆 😆

For an introduction, you have give rise to more questions than facts, but it made for one great read. Loved reading it and hence had to let you know immediately.

All questions will have answers mostly by next part ... 😊

Now back to another read😊

😛

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Anahita_Leve

Dearest Lucky,

Looks like another great story in making! Loved the chapter a lot. Swara saving Laksh, oh you did it in such an amazing way! By the way I'm tensed for Swara. She'll have to face a lot once ParvatI and Ragini get to know her real identity.


Waiting for Swasan meet.

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Loved the chapter a lot. Though there were few snippets of the traumatic past, the present has made up for it. Swara's dabangg entry in the midst of ragging by the seniors, saving Laksh and creating an impact on both the Maheshwari brothers. And Sanskar having alien feelings when spelling out her name. The game has already begun, I guess, and it will be filled with different challenges, I am sure of.

Love,

Nivi