Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17 - Page 9

Originally posted by: NitaReid

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nita,

Do you know waking up to your updates is an amazing way to do so🤗 I simply love this time spinning tale, a tale of regaining lost chances only to lose given opportunities. And the way you keep the balance between the changing past which in turn results in an altering future is brilliant👏

I know that I have not been able to comment and Vijay's cleaning campaign has deleted all my res posts, on a side note that is a sort of good thing, no point using that word, if the the post gets deleted.😉

I keep reading and want to write comments worthy of the updates, but then something or the other crops up. So today I decided, I will let you know how much I love this tale, and promise to "unres" for all the pending updates (I keep pms unread, so I know which chapters I have to unres for, though I simply start reading again 😊)

lots of love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Swasain

JUST ONE WORD... WONDERFUL

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Originally posted by: chemgirl

finally read CHAPTER 1...awesome chapter...so Swara is his wife or atleast was...now Sanskar is in a mess...he is going to wamt to go back to the present...but he cannot.

Originally posted by: chemgirl

Hi Nita ,

Splendid story. Just awesome.

I stopped after chapter 1 coz I knew I wouldn't be able to stop reading and I have exams going on... ..n today when I got some free time I read it all at once.

Love the concept of time travel.

So Sanskar things it is a second chance for him to set things right but it seems to have made things worse. Interfering with time never does good. Sanskar has made things worse for himself in a way. While he doesn't have to bear the guilt of being the reason for Kavi's death, he has to go through the guilt of not being able to love her enough. And then his feelings for Swara. I guess he has moved on from Kavi but cannot accept his feelings for Swara. So he is totally in a mess. Wonder what will happen.

The last chapter is at a cliffhanger. Eagerly waiting to know what Swara will do.

Update soon.