Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: bhshre95
Wonderful update again😃⭐️
Sanskar telling about time travel to kavita was a surprising twist, i didn't expect him to tell anybody about it, but kavita accepted it gracefully and even made sanskar realise about his love for swara, loved it😃 but i hope she doesnt turn negative
N swara's plan backfired on her very badly😆 she wanted to unite kavita n sanskar but it led to their break up😆
Eagerly waiting for next part, update soon...

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update.. Yeah Kavita being made aware of the time travel was an twist needed to make her move on.. And also she only can make sanskar realize the truth.. Swara plan did backfire very bad.. Will be updating today..

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Sanya17
When will you update??

Today dear.. I will be updating in few more minutes

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Next page for the update

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

My place, from mobile will get back soon

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Okay the future series is quite similar to the Serial canon, though Swara wanting to take revenge was the twist. Ragini the same, just wants what she wants, the rest can go to hell. Laksh impulsive as usual, Sanskaar guilty as usual (though to be truthful, I did find him wanting to hurt Swara because she lied a little too much) and Swara determined to hurt them all, this was also a little difficult to accept, in a nice way.

But then as you so aptly put it, revenge is a double edged sword, and in the end, of this update we find that both Swara and Sanskaar ruined themselves in the pursuit of revenge. But then even when she offers Sanskaar a chance at redemption, she does not appear to be truly sorry for what she did, she is just tired of punishing him and wants to take his help in setting her life right. I somehow feel that she would continue to hold herself back and that is what prompts him to travel back.

Your tale and your hint for my previous comment reminds me of a O'Henry tale - The Roads of Destiny. Lovely story, do read if you get a chance but for now I will only leave a quote from that story:

"I go to seek on many roads,

What is to be.

True heart and strong, with love to light

Will they not bear me in the fight

To order, shun or wield or mould

My destiny?"

It does not matter which road they chose, Swara and Sanskaar would end up together.

Keep writing and do keep visiting, Miss you.

love,

Nyna

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Sanya17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Wonderful update I loved it

But laksh stabbing sanskar that was shocking I thought laksh was better in this story and he actually liked swara as he was patient but turns out I was wrong he is impulsive violent and crazy

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
My place, from mobile will get back soon

Take your time sweetheart 😊

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Sanya17
Wonderful update I loved it
But laksh stabbing sanskar that was shocking I thought laksh was better in this story and he actually liked swara as he was patient but turns out I was wrong he is impulsive violent and crazy

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃.. Laksh is not evil or bad.. Just impulsive.. And he reacted harshly because he felt betrayed by someone he trusted the most. His bhai.. And then he lost Swara as well and found out ragini the girl he believed had played him.. So that why he reacted that way.. Temporary insanity indeed

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Nita