Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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And i am the first, I have not even read it, have to rush to office, but will get back soon.


Dear Nita,

This is simply amazing, a brilliant spin on the serial canon, the events happen almost eerily like in the serial but the intentions are so different. And no I do not hate Sanskaar here, I do not justify his revenge or his actions, but I do not hate him.
Swara hating him, I think that is the trigger for him to go back to change his past, towards the end when he acknowledges how an intense desire for revenge can ruin a person, he is slightly afraid that Swara is now embarking on that road.

Your tale reminds me of this quote (by Euripides)

"Stronger than a lover's love is a lover's hate
Incurable, in each, the wounds they make"

And here Swara's love turns into a blazing hatred, which could destroy them. But then it is almost three years later that he decides to hunt for the time machine. What happened that he decides to wipe out their entire future and change his past.? I am dizzy trying to guess.

Keep writing and keep updating.

loads of love,
Nyna

PS - I should not be saying so will word it differently. I know I have to comment on quite a few of the earlier ones, but I somehow keep slipping up. And wanting to do it in chronological order means that I am always lagging behind.😭 so I will comment on the current updates and hopefully get to around to the pending ones soon But I wanted to let you know that I almost immediately read the updates, though I keep the pm marked as unread, so that it is a reminder that I have a comment pending. And I love you for updating despite such a sluggish response in IF (unlike the tantrum throwing me😭)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And i am the first, I have not even read it, have to rush to office, but will get back soon.



Dear Nita,

This is simply amazing, a brilliant spin on the serial canon, the events happen almost eerily like in the serial but the intentions are so different. And no I do not hate Sanskaar here, I do not justify his revenge or his actions, but I do not hate him.
Swara hating him, I think that is the trigger for him to go back to change his past, towards the end when he acknowledges how an intense desire for revenge can ruin a person, he is slightly afraid that Swara is now embarking on that road.

Your tale reminds me of this quote (by Euripides)

"Stronger than a lover's love is a lover's hate
Incurable, in each, the wounds they make"

And here Swara's love turns into a blazing hatred, which could destroy them. But then it is almost three years later that he decides to hunt for the time machine. What happened that he decides to wipe out their entire future and change his past.? I am dizzy trying to guess.

Keep writing and keep updating.

loads of love,
Nyna

PS - I should not be saying so will word it differently. I know I have to comment on quite a few of the earlier ones, but I somehow keep slipping up. And wanting to do it in chronological order means that I am always lagging behind.😭 so I will comment on the current updates and hopefully get to around to the pending ones soon But I wanted to let you know that I almost immediately read the updates, though I keep the pm marked as unread, so that it is a reminder that I have a comment pending. And I love you for updating despite such a sluggish response in IF (unlike the tantrum throwing me😭)




Hi Nyna dear,


The response in IF might very sluggish indeed.. But I can't let it dishearten me when I read such an lovely feedback from you.. I am not expecting much response from IF.. I am just posting it for the lovely ten readers who have unfortunately started reading this tale including you my sweet Friend.. And I don't like to leave it halfway.. So even if I have no response I think I will post till the end here...


Also can I say I am very much ahead in wattpad with the updates.. That makes me guilty for yet depriving you of knowing what happens in the upcoming chapters so to compensate for that I will be updating the next one next..why because I don't need million comments to motivate me.. Just one from you.. And Nimmi doesn't even have to comment.. Just her like would put me in an happy sprit.. So yeah the response might have been sluggish.. But I am not willing to miss reading your comments..


Love

Nita

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful and Very interesting story, really loved the concept of time travel. Makes me want to read the whole story all at once.😃
Sanskar going into the past has complicated a lot of things for him, but he brought it upon himself😆
I have a doubt, why did he go back to past, he had completed his revenge i guess, n was married to swara for 3 yrs, had he not fallen in love with her?
But loving the twists and turns in the story, eagerly waiting for the next uptade. Continue soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhshre95

Wonderful and Very interesting story, really loved the concept of time travel. Makes me want to read the whole story all at once.😃

Sanskar going into the past has complicated a lot of things for him, but he brought it upon himself😆
I have a doubt, why did he go back to past, he had completed his revenge i guess, n was married to swara for 3 yrs, had he not fallen in love with her?
But loving the twists and turns in the story, eagerly waiting for the next uptade. Continue soon...


Thanks dear.. Really happy to know you liked the story so far.. Time travel.. Yeah I never thought I will write on it.. But this concept seemed interesting.. Well it still ongoing so you can't read the whole now.. But I will be updating the next one now.. So you can read it..


Sanskaar did make his life complicated.. And your doubt you got to wait and read to find why he choose to go back.. Thanks once again dear for the lovely feedback

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter nine will be updated in next page
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I caught it immediately, and so did my nephew. I cannot read it now, will get back later in the day

Unreserved:

Okay, that one day turned out to be a whole weekend😕

Coming to the update, somehow in this whole story, it seems that Kavita (so far) is the true hero - she is clear in her emotions, thoughts and feelings. Sanskaar is still clouded with anger and Swara is confused and both seem to unaware and /or unwilling to admit that they love each other and that in their case, holding on to each other was and is the solution, not letting them do what they want.

It was heartbreaking, for Kavita and me as a reader, when she breaks down and cries, for the love she lost, the father she would never have and the heart which might never heal. And for you as a writer who can make such an universally hater character win so much👏👏👏

I loved your Kavita and it is pleasure to read such a mature and well developed character. I would love it if she continued to be this way and the second time round, Swara and Sanskaar get married and live a life of love and laughter. But as the writer, it is your tale to tell.

Awaiting updates.

love,
Nyna

PS - I thought the whole tale is for me, only this chapter. Just kidding,😆 love you for the general annd the specific dedication. And missing you around.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful update again😃⭐️
Sanskar telling about time travel to kavita was a surprising twist, i didn't expect him to tell anybody about it, but kavita accepted it gracefully and even made sanskar realise about his love for swara, loved it😃 but i hope she doesnt turn negative
N swara's plan backfired on her very badly😆 she wanted to unite kavita n sanskar but it led to their break up😆
Eagerly waiting for next part, update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I caught it immediately, and so did my nephew. I cannot read it now, will get back later in the day


Unreserved:

Okay, that one day turned out to be a whole weekend😕

Coming to the update, somehow in this whole story, it seems that Kavita (so far) is the true hero - she is clear in her emotions, thoughts and feelings. Sanskaar is still clouded with anger and Swara is confused and both seem to unaware and /or unwilling to admit that they love each other and that in their case, holding on to each other was and is the solution, not letting them do what they want.

It was heartbreaking, for Kavita and me as a reader, when she breaks down and cries, for the love she lost, the father she would never have and the heart which might never heal. And for you as a writer who can make such an universally hater character win so much👏👏👏

I loved your Kavita and it is pleasure to read such a mature and well developed character. I would love it if she continued to be this way and the second time round, Swara and Sanskaar get married and live a life of love and laughter. But as the writer, it is your tale to tell.

Awaiting updates.

love,
Nyna

PS - I thought the whole tale is for me, only this chapter. Just kidding,😆 love you for the general annd the specific dedication. And missing you around.



Hi Nyna dear,



Well I understand the delay.. I have been planning to read your forever too.. And you already updated part two and I am still in chapter eight last part.. I look forward to reading it though.. Nothing makes my day bright than reading your works..



You like Kavita.. I like her too.. I liked the way she shaped up so far.. And you are spot on about Sanskaar and Swara.


Honestly even I felt real bad at the last paragraph of Kavita pain.. I felt I was being an sadist by snatching everything away in an single day..


I might not be able to respond back properly to such a lovely comments.. But I can atleast give out dedication right.. And the truth is you are one of the main reason I continue to keep writing.. So you deserve the whole tale as well..

Love

Nita


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