Swasan FF:'A Trip to the past'(Ch 13&14 on pg 18[26/7/17 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

okay, I had one quick read, and boy it was complicated, in a good way. Too many emotional conflicts though and I have to read it slowly.

Swara and Laksh still impulsive, Ragini malicious as ever, Sanskaar hellbent on his revenge, Sharmista now focused on love (l am astounded, love is needed for a marriage but without trust that marriage would not last either) and Shekhar, non appearance.

But I am curious, Sanskaar is not the type to go back on his word so easily, so how did he simply let Swara leave? And though her logic is right, her timing was off, a little - she was worried about how the revenge obsessed Sanskaar seemed determined to ruin Laksh but should she not have waited a little before she passed judgement on Sanskaar? I mean, Sanskaar who was willing to go shopping with her despite hating it, suddenly changes his mind on seeing red roses, and she comes home to find the stage set for Laksh's incarceration? It just does not add up - it only will lead to more misunderstanding and separation, to such an extent that Sanskaar decided to go back to change the past.

Sigh, it is such a complex layered story, hats off to you👏👏 for both the concept and the strength to write it out. No one is right or wrong, but collectively they are one big mess.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Thanks Nyna dearest.., Well I made it much more complicated as we proceed.. I am far ahead in wattpad.. And I feel bad about the delay in updating here..

You as always have managed to be spot on with your lovely feedback.. Instead of answering questions I will update next you can find it out.. Hehe me being evil as always.. Next update will answer your questions.

And reading your comments sure leave me much happier..

Lots of love

Nita

Originally posted by: Swasain

Good Job As usual !

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anyway good update

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And res for Chapter 12

Unres:

Okay this was more like what I expected and most of my questions answered. Swara is impulsive as usual and Sanskaar, as always, knew her in and out. So those roses were for Kavita (good touch, Kavita liking red and Swara liking white). And am I glad that this time both of them talked it out.

Ragini here is more devious than ever, she has even Shomi wrapped on her little finger (surprising how both Shomi and Ragini have a twisted notion of love) Ragini willing to destroy everyone and Shomi willing to destroy her daughter, at least Dida is sensible here.

Sanskaar's "plan" as well as his expectations of how Swara would react - all proven correct and finally Swara realises how misguided and wrong her perceptions of everyone, including herself are. She finally learns that love need not always mean saying it, in fact it is the actions that make one feel cherished that are important. Laksh's love is wanting to possess, Ragini's idea is obsession, Shomi's feeling that love means showing it in cliched means, Swara's conviction that love has to be expressed contrasted with Sanskaar's silent declaration of always wanting the loved one to be happy.

Though I am inclined to agree with Swara that Laksh gave in too soon - considering the hold Ragini has on him, I am sure he would wreck havoc once again. But that is for the next update, right? And the greedy me wants to know - when will that be?😆

love,

Nyna