Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Chapter 4

Hi Nita,

I got Laksh and Sanskaar mixed up in the previous update. But my instinct proved to be right that there's a love triangle here. The hot temper of Sanskaar was such a sweet scene to imagine.

With all the lies coming back to get her, Sanskaar definitely seems to be in two minds about hating or protecting her from his brother.

Cheers

Sharon

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Lovely

Originally posted by: srividhya87

Nice part dr.

Didn't expect such a chilfhanger..

Wtng for the next part..

Originally posted by: iamreader

Again a res dear

Originally posted by: raaz19

Hi nita...

Okay sorry for the late reply and god all your writers are here to schock one after another...what is with a the dum dum cliff hangers..god help me I was not only about to faint with shock at the end but I think my tiny 💔 into a thousand little pieces...okay jokes apart 😆 let me just say I loved it...

I was just so hooked...and as I read very line I went no she didn't just say that and did he just really feel all that..must have had like a ...It was a good if better then a episode of . criminal minds...

Okay back to the detective mode in me...why did she marry lakhs.?and why did they separate? How will sk react.? Does he know?

Did he see her run.? After all promised he would look out for her?

Like this update suggest sometimes one shouldn't look at the face or the person but try to figure out what is in once heart..

I see both care for the other..moving forward from there preconceived notions...

He thought she wanted money and she thought he was arrogant...see that he cares for her as a friend yet she is not so sure..😉

Must say you have there thoughts quite magically it feels like they are so in tune to each other...For I felt like I was literally part of there mind. For this I cannot give you a big enough 🤗

Have to say if I have not said it before each update makes me fall in love with the ff even more...In a true essence it's a true modern take on cinderella but why do I feel sk is hiding some.of his secrets and maybe even an alternative motive 😉 after all he didn't like her to start with..?

Wonder how she will react to his betrayal or confession..hope you soon. ..

This update reminded me of the light that comes with the morning sun...is see the darkness has been shed from.swara as he gave her shelter and a job..He have her the security she longed for...but will she actually speak with him.

Why do I feel that he I seeking a companion in her..

A friend and carer or even just a well wishers...😔 or I may be off key here but this is all that I can think off...😳

Like the entry of his mum and dad and loved the way she said u can be with me once you are the bahu of this home..nice surprise and it also had me 😆...and I like that his dad was checking her out to see of she was criminal 🤣

This update was just perfect and nita your a awesome writer... as it was wonderfully scripted and loved the way it carried on from the last update...

Thanks for the pm...and sorry for the above typos...p's sorry of the jokes are a bit too much...😊

Take care. ..

Razia

Originally posted by: raaz19

Hi nita...

Okay sorry for the late reply and god all your writers are here to schock one after another...what is with a the dum dum cliff hangers..god help me I was not only about to faint with shock at the end but I think my tiny 💔 into a thousand little pieces...okay jokes apart 😆 let me just say I loved it...

I was just so hooked...and as I read very line I went no she didn't just say that and did he just really feel all that..must have had like a ...It was a good if better then a episode of . criminal minds...

Okay back to the detective mode in me...why did she marry lakhs.?and why did they separate? How will sk react.? Does he know?

Did he see her run.? After all promised he would look out for her?

Like this update suggest sometimes one shouldn't look at the face or the person but try to figure out what is in once heart..

I see both care for the other..moving forward from there preconceived notions...

He thought she wanted money and she thought he was arrogant...see that he cares for her as a friend yet she is not so sure..😉

Must say you have there thoughts quite magically it feels like they are so in tune to each other...For I felt like I was literally part of there mind. For this I cannot give you a big enough 🤗

Have to say if I have not said it before each update makes me fall in love with the ff even more...In a true essence it's a true modern take on cinderella but why do I feel sk is hiding some.of his secrets and maybe even an alternative motive 😉 after all he didn't like her to start with..?

Wonder how she will react to his betrayal or confession..hope you soon. ..

This update reminded me of the light that comes with the morning sun...is see the darkness has been shed from.swara as he gave her shelter and a job..He have her the security she longed for...but will she actually speak with him.

Why do I feel that he I seeking a companion in her..

A friend and carer or even just a well wishers...😔 or I may be off key here but this is all that I can think off...😳

Like the entry of his mum and dad and loved the way she said u can be with me once you are the bahu of this home..nice surprise and it also had me 😆...and I like that his dad was checking her out to see of she was criminal 🤣

This update was just perfect and nita your a awesome writer... as it was wonderfully scripted and loved the way it carried on from the last update...

Thanks for the pm...and sorry for the above typos...p's sorry of the jokes are a bit too much...😊

Take care. ..

Razia

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hi Razia,

Thanks dear.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃.. Initially I was not planning for this cliffhanger at this point of the story.. But somehow decided you all deserve to know it sooner than later.. It adds more drama right 😉

Really criminal minds.. I am flattered then 😳.. Keep guessing about why Swara married laksh.. And no sanskar doesn't know about it.. That all I can say for now..

And yeah he did see her run.. He also saw her getting hit by the car.. That a mini spoiler 😆.. And yeah they kind of moved beyond their first impressions..

And I am thrilled to read your comment.. I love reading yours and i am so glad to know you like this FF.. I am really happy to know this FF has managed to hold your interest..

Sanskaar does have an secret which I will reveal next update.. I told about his secret even in introduction.. It a big secret.. And it would be shocking as well..

Yeah Sanskaar parents will appear often.. And you will get one more introduction in the next update as well.. Once again I am really thrilled to know you like this FF.. Thanks once again dear for such an lovely feedback

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Will be here soon ...😛