Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17) - Page 11

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice..

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello Nita dear 🤗
How are you buddy!? you also take pressure on writing like Nyna what I do with u all *hand on head* I told u earlier also dear feel free don't pressurized yourself much.
Update is beautiful & awesome dear.
loved their office scenes both conflict thinking about each other. between both their is unknown affection & care hope soon this care & affection blooms as a love & sanskar take first step unknowingly.
Update when u get time dear but don't late much 😃
Bye
Take care
love u buddy.

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nita darling...

Amazing update...that was some mindblowing twist in end...sanky behaviour after whole chaos was obvious..he is a gentleman..and handled matter and swara carefully...in matter of hours swara turned into sanky's PA...and in few days..sanky's gf...aww..was not expecting this...but loved it...enjoyed this short sweet part..waiting for next..reaction n more reactions from all...curious..

Love u baby

Talia

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nita,

I have finally managed to unres for Chapter 1 (page 1), Chapter 2 (page 5), and Chapters 3 & 4 (page 10).

And yes we shall finish everything we have started, if I do not start anything else

Will unres for Chapter 5, soon.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Sounds very very intriguing. I am all in😊

And I am feeling very loved and completely forgiven😊

Unres for Chapter 1

So we have Swara, a modern day Cinderella, but the similarity ends with both of them being ill treated by their families. Cinderella simply wanted to go to a ball, once in her life, while Swara here wants to have ball, all her life. And she picks the easiest way out - marry a rich guy. Guess she has had a very rough life (she does mention that fifteen years is a very only time to be miserable) and what we see as desperation and maybe even slightly despicable, it could be the survival instinct kicking in, when life pushes you down, you either stay down or fight it out. Swara fights it out.

She takes a chance to call the guy who left his mobile number, all the while telling herself that the fake self of hers is cool (so what are the painful scars she is hiding).

Sekhar and Laddo (why did he adopt her, guess you would reveal later) - less said the better.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res

Dear Nita,

I was the first to res and I am absolutely the last to unres

So this chapter gives a hint into why Sanskaar left his mobile number with him, he was trying to "test" her for someone, I wonder whom (I have read Chapter 5 too, so will ask my question there). And he knows how fake she is and simply hates it. But he cannot help being nice to her.

Swara is also quite impressed, and is actually hopeful of meeting him again. And she does, just not in a way she ever imagined, - as her boss, the CEO of the company she joined. Talk about surprises.

I am liking this twisted fairy tale.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

res - will unres for all - hopefully by end of this week

Dear Nita,

Finally here for Chapter 3 and 4 (I did not even res for one of them🤢)

Chapter 3 - So the update is about confrontation and anger (not overt, but still there). Sanskaar upset that Swara appeared to have blatantly misused his name to obtain the job. But is is one who wants to play fair, so since she appears to be a good worker, he is willing to forgive her but wants her to realise how much of a mistake it was.

Swara guilty of the same but has a secret to hide, rather, more than one. First is her boyfriend, who longer is and the other that she is falling for Sanskaar, more than a crust, much less than love or affections, but the stirrings of the heart are there. Which is why when she runs or rather walks away from her boyfriend, she is upset that it is Sanskaar whom she has run into and his expressions are not very comforting, so she thinks of the worst case scenario.

Chapter 4

So some of the misconceptions have been laid to rest. When Swara mentioned that Mr. Maheshwari was her boyfriend, she meant Laksh (so she did not know that Sanskaar was also a Maheshwari, despite going out on a date with him?)

But Sanskaar is also a little stunned to know that Swara is, or rather was (after she clarified that she broke up with him) his brother's girlfriend. And Laksh does not like it either, when she blurts out the truth.

Laksh is the serial one here, no even worse, irresponsible and arrogant to boot, willing to play with girls but hates it when one of them pays him back with the same coin. But he is in for a ruder shock, when Sanskaar asks him to apologise to Swara (so is she, for different reasons). Guess she is fighting too many emotion, foremost being, what did Sanskaar plan to do with her?

I am sure even Sanskaar does not know the answer to that one.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: raaz19

Thank you for the lovely feedback and wow and a clip about the next update has mass me super 😆 already. ...

No worries update a hen you can...

Keep smiling 😛