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Posted: 8 years ago
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gr8 part..
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Congratulations for the new story
Awesome prologue
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Good start..
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Chapter 1- Nachde Ne Saare:

" Today , You'll be mine and I'll be yours Swara... forever..." Laksh smiled as he was sitting on the horse smiling.


" I hope you haven't done something you shouldn't had Ragini..." Sanskar thought as he was sitting in the car that was just behind Laksh's horse.

" I'll get you Laksh...I'll..." Ragini thought as she was facing Sharmishta.

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"Maa , the Baraat has come, we need to welcome them..." Ragini said holding Sharmishta's hand and passing her a slight smile.


" But Beta Swara..." Sharmishta asked tensed as she turned her face towards the other side.

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" Maa , she must be caught up in traffic , leave that , lets welcome them or what they'll think..." Ragini said coming in front of Sharmishta but lowering her eyes.

Sharmishta nodded and held her chin smiling , " You also come..." She said as she held her hand and took her from there , Ragini followed her.

**

" Ajj Mere Laksh Ki Shadi hai...Ajj Mere Laksh Ki Shadi hai..." Sanskar came out of the car and started dancing with the Band-Baja singing the lines , everyone looked at him and made laughed at his childish actions , Laksh smiled seeing him happy.

Suddenly Ragini and Sharmishta came to the place , Sharmishta having a plate in her hands.

Sanskar seeing Ragini held her hand and tried to make her too to dance while she looked at him confused.

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" yeh Sanskar Kar kya Rahe hain (What he is doing?)" Ragini thought confused while he held her hands and danced with her.

" Sanskar , we'll dance later , leave her for the time..." Laksh said as he realized that Ragini was getting uncomfortable , Ragini looked towards him while Laksh passed her a reassuring smile.


" Kash Hum apko apne Pyaar se pa pate Laksh , Hume Apko Nafrat se na pana padhta..." Ragini thought as she kept looking towards him , what she did to Swara revolving in her mind.

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Sanskar looked at her and then her eyes , " You have done something , something for sure Ragini..you eyes tell that...I wish you hadn't..."

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Sanskar left Ragini's hand and stood with Laksh , Ragini's eyes fell upon him.

" For me only Laksh matters..." Her eyes told him.

" For me you matter..." His eyes told her.

Ragini turned her face towards the other side while Sharmishta did Laksh's Aarti , " Maa...Swara..." Laksh said with a mischievous smile while Sharmishta smiled , Tension deep within her.

Ragini hearing him had tear drops falling down her cheeks while she left the entrance and went to her room.

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" In Mandap..."Sharmishta replied to him.

Sanskar looking at Ragini tried going to a side but Laksh held his hand , " Sanskar...today is your brother's wedding..." He said as he held Sanskar's hand not to let him go.

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Sanskar nodded saying , " Dupatte wali Dost...:" While Laksh smiled and said , " Yup , be with me for the time na...later with her..."

Sharmishta smiled and brought them in.

**

Ragini sat on the bed and remembered what Laksh asked , " Swara..." She said angrily but still kept calm.

She looked towards the wall clock , " Just 2 hours more for Mahurat...Swara won't arrive and then you'll be mine Laksh , you'll be mine..." She smiled a bit.

" Ragini , why are you sitting here? Today's your sister's wedding , come..." One of her relatives came to her and told her while she nodded and went outside with her , the whole Barhi had an array of relatives chitchatting to each other about different topics from Swara's looks to Laksh's background.

As Ragini arrived , she came in the eyes of many.

" By the way Laksh was for Ragini na...then this Bengli girl??" One of them said with a confused look.

" She is Shekhar's daughter only , Gadodia's hide a lot many secrets , as Swara's mother snatched Shekhar same way Swara snatched Laksh..." Another lady replied to her which reached Ragini ears.

She walked up to them , anger rising within , " I hope you are enjoying this gossiping aunty...by the way Just to tell you , My mom didn't snatch anybody from anybody and so did my sister..." She said angrily.

" Then you and your mother must be lacking something that your men went to those Bengalis ..." The lady replied to Ragini seeing her reply. Ragini looked at her more angrily and was about to reply when she felt someone's hand on her shoulder.

" Duapatte Wali Dost...Dupatte Wali Dost...Dance...dance.." Sanskar said trying to search for her Dupatta while pointing towards the stage. Ragini automatically had a smile on her face as she saw him.


" Maybe because of her behaviour only Laksh left her , now roaming about with this maddy..." The lady continued while Ragini turned and passed her a deadly glare ...one last time and then went to stage with Sanskar.

Laksh too came there after he and Sharmishta-Shekhar finished some Rituals , he saw Ragini and Sanskar going to the stage dancing.

The song started while Laksh cheered...


Munda thoda offbeat hai
Par kudiya de naal bahut sweet hai (x2)

Sanskar started dancing in an odd way while Ragini seeing him with a cute smile and then held his chin while dancing , singing , "Dhongi sa ye bada dheeth hai... Viral hogaya yeh tweet"

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Sanskar smiled forgetting that he had to act and held Ragini while dancing,

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Par phool wool karne mein cool
Tu badi tezz katari hai
Shagan teri ki, lagan teri ki
Humne kardi tayari hai"

Ragini dragged Sharmishta-Shekhar too on stage while dancing , then she in order dragged everyone else ...

Nachde ne saare ral mil ke
Aaj hil dul ke
Le saare ke saare nazaare (x2)

Khasma nu khaane! Hadipa!

Aaloo bade karare
Karam naal aaloo bade karare
Chad chad ke chaubaare
Karam naal sweetu wajan maare (x2)

Chak de!

Laksh while dancing imagined Swara dancing with him and smiled..

Munde plenty mere layi hogaye senti
O tere layi hogaye senti
Tere layi hogaye senti

Tere liye main set hoon
Iss baat ki guarantee

Par phool wool karne mein cool
Tu badi tezz katari hai
Shagan teri ki, lagan teri ki
Humne kardi tayari hai

Sehra bandh, tujhe kood faand
Tujhe le jaana iss baari hain

Nachde ne saare ral mil ke
Aaj hil dul ke
Le saare ke saare nazaare (x2)

Khasma nu khaane! Aa..

Ragini flipped her hand in front of his eyes and danced around him..

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Zor zor se shor wor kar
DJ gaane bajaane aa
Ruttde ruttde jija fufad
Humne saare manane haan (x2)

Par phool wool karne mein cool
Tu badi tezz katari hai
Shagan teri ki, lagan teri ki
Humne kardi taiyari hai

Nachde ne saare..
Nachde ne saare..

Nachde ne saare ral mil ke
Aaj hil dul ke
Le saare ke saare nazaare (x2)

Nachde ne saare
Nachde ne saare

Khasma nu khaane!

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Note : Credit for all images used goes to original editor...😃

Edited by .Piyali.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Awesome update
Continue soon
Thanks for pm 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Awesome update👏
Well done
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Feel sorry for swara n Laksh
What ragini is doing ain't right
There she's defending swara but she's done this to her
Wonder what's gonna happen now
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
wedding time.will swara reach or not?Ragini is in fear 4 sure.I liked sanskar understanding her very well.he knows that she has done something.then will he do something 2 get swara back.otherwise ragini will b in trouble.loved sanskar's eyes telling him that she matters 2 him.disgusting ppl gossiping about swaragini's mother shekar ragini laksh.though ragini is in luv with laksh she is smiling bcz of sanskar.that was nice.liked him making her dance.laksh imahining dancing with swara was nice
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NYC start
Loved it!!
Sharmishta was worried abt swaras's welfare and whereabouts
Ragini cleverly handled situation well
Laksh and his family arrived
Sanskar was hoping that ragini didn't do any mistakes that can ruin life's
Laksh was missing swaras's presence but ragini handled him too
NYC song selection
Laksh was imagining swara with him
Ragini was glaring the lady who spoke ill abt swara and her mom Ragini's answer made lady shut her mouth
Now what will happen next !?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nyc pics
Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update

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