Swasan FF: Phir Le Aaya dil Chap 4 Pg 7 27/4

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Hi guys...I already have two stories to complete but this idea was distracting me the whole day yesterday...
So i am posting it...i wrote it in an hour...I have no idea what it is like...i will take time to update...it is a simple story on Swasan...hope u like it...all kinds of criticism are welcome.😊

PROLOGUE
It was a dark night and the huge mansion was immersed in silence. It had been a long day and the occupants were all sound asleep. Except for two people. Two young souls waiting for everyone to fall asleep so that they could meet. One heart filled with pain and other with hope. The ring of her phone told her it was time to go. Time to do what she had to.

There was another person who too wasn't asleep. Savita, the old housemaid. She looked around the kitchen satisfied. She had completed all the chores for the day. Now she could go home. The Malikin had told her to stay there for the night but she had to go home. She would return early in the morning though. After all it was the wedding of the eldest son of the family. She would help Malikin as much as she could. She was really fond of the benevolent and kind lady, who was so unlike her devrani.

She took the torch. The one the boy who was going to be married tomorrow had got for her from Kolkata. She had always liked the boy. He had remrmbered the old maid who served them only when they visited this village occasionally . She wished he would always find happiness.

She left the house locking the back door when she saw two shadows in the dark. These city-bred kids. They were too careless. Roaming around the village at this time wasn't right. She had to tell them. She moved closer without turning on the torch.

Then she heard them talk. A girl and a boy.

"What does this mean? " the boy asked.

"What do you think? " the girl questioned.

"This is not the time for riddles. What does this mean? " he asked again a tone of anger in his voice.

"I want you to go ahead with this marriage. Marry her. " she replied in a timid but stern voice.

"Are you serious? " he asked hurt.

"Yes. " she replied curtly.

"How can I marry her when I love you? I want you. We discussed this. I cant do this. " he said pleading.

"I changed my mind. This is our destiny. This is the best for everyone. Your family, mine, hers. " the girl said her voice almost breaking.

"What about us? What is right for us? " he asked impatiently.

"Are you willing to hurt everyone for our happiness? Do you think we are the first couple in love to get seperated? Do you think our parents, those who we see around us, none of them ever loved someone other than the person they are married to. Love happens. But marriage is a very important decision depending on many things. " she said mechanically.

"I don't care . To me love and marriage come hand in hand. " he replied.

"Not to me. I am not ready to marry you. If we stop this wedding we will have to tell everyone about us and then if they accept us, which will be nothing short of a miracle, they will want us to get married immediately. I can't do that . " she said in a voice devoid of feelings.

"Why not? " he asked taken aback.

"I have my own dreams. You know that. I want to fulfil my dreams. " she said.

"I have no problem with that. I will support you. " he pleaded.

"But what about your family? You know they wont like it. They will want me to settle down with you. My dreams wont allow that. I want to travel. Your family will never allow that. Moreover I wont be able to adjust with your family like her. Your family will never accept me in the first place. " she said turning away from him.

"Please " he said.

"Marry her. That is the right thing to do. " she said quietly.

There was a moment of silence. He grabbed her by the shoulder.

"Ok. I will marry her. You thought about what is best for everyone except me. So you will never think about me again. Tomorrow I will marry her in front of your eyes. I will move on with my wife. And you, once we return to Kolkata I dont want to see you again. You will leave my life forever. Do you understand? " he asked furiously.

"Yes. " she said quivering.

"Good. Goodbye love. " he said pushing her away.

Savita watched the girl break down as he left. She cried in pain.

Savita walked away from there. She knew who the girl and guy were without a doubt. She was shocked to know this though. Should she inform Malikin? No. They had parted ways. She mightmight cause unwanted troubtrouble for no reason. The girl was right. The family wouldn't accept her easily. Also she would break another innocent girl 's heart by telling her that her groom was in love with another woman. No. She was going to keep this a secret. Forever.

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My exams going on...so next update gonna take time...
After 20th.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heyy!!
This is really interesting!!
Will be waiting for updates!
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Lovely start and nice update...
All the best with the exams...look forward to next chapter...

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Hey dear, 😊
Its really very interesting. 😉 Okk let me guess, so the guy is our Sanskar if I'm not wrong, right?? But who's the girl with whom the boy broke up?? Swara? Someone else?? 😕 Ughh! My over imaginative mind! 😆 Will wait for ur comeback dear. 😳 Try to update soon after ur exam gets over. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃 All the best! 👍🏼 🤗
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Hey dear...
Awesome start...u kept characters in suspense...loved it..will wait..

Talia
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good start..👍🏼

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Very interesting prologue

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Heyy!!
This is really interesting!!
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thanks😊...will update this week
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Originally posted by: raaz19

Lovely start and nice update...

All the best with the exams...look forward to next chapter...

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thank u dear..will update this week...my exams just got over😊
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Hi guys...as always I am late...my exams ended on 20th and I was with my cousins...hence the delay...sorry!!!

CHAPTER 1
7 years later in Mumbai

Swara put on her coolers as the car drove into the airport. The last thing she wanted right now was for some fan or the media to see her puffy red eyes. She hurried into the airport and without sparing anyone a glance, proceeded with the check-in process. Once that was done she sat down in the chair in a corner wishing to be invisible.

She saw a group of teenagers who were definitely her fans coming towards her. Usually she was very cordial to her fans but right now she wasn't in the mindset to even smile at them.

"Ha. The cons of being a singing sensation. Dont worry Swara. I will handle them. " Meera her friend and PA told her trying to cheer her up in vain.

"She just lost someone. "She caught Meera telling them and a tear flowed down her cheeks.

The teenagers left with a sympathetic look at her and she smiled at them gratefully for understanding her condition. Meera came back to her with a cup of coffee.

"Swara, atleast have this. You havent even taken Water. You will fall sick ." Meera told her.

Swara took it reluctantly and sipped it slowly. This wasn't how things were supposed to be. She had freed herself of work and commitments so that she and her little sister Ragini who had just passed out of college, could go on a long vacation. So when Ragini had called her at 2 am the previous night she had assumed it was out of excitement. But Ragini had told her something else all together.

"We lost her di. It was an accident. She is gone ." Ragini's words rung in her ear.

She buried her face in her hands trying not to cry. A little later the boarding was announced.

"Are you sure you don't want me to come with you?" Meera who was travelling to her own hometown asked. Swara nodded and parted with her.

"Your father will be waiting for you at the airport. I talked to Ragini." Meera informed her.

Once the flight took off Swara dozed off as she hadnt slrptslept the previous night. She woke up as the flight was about to land.She felt a surge of panic take over. She was returning to the city she loved after 7 years. She had kept her promise to him. To stay away from him. Now she was going to see him. Would he forgive her? Was he still angry with her? The hatred in his eyes as he pushed her away from him forever sent a shiver down her spine even now.

But she didn't have to worry today. She was going to be the last thing he would be worried about right now.

As soon as she walked out of the airport, her father met her. Without a word she sat in the car and they drove home in silence. She had controlled her emotions for a long time . But once she saw her mother, actually stepmother, Janaki Gadodia and her sister Ragini, she broke down crying.

"Swara, calm down. We have to leave for Maheshwari house. Freshen up and come down. " Janaki told her.

A few minutes later she joined her family, all dressed in white. A reminder that all this wasn't a nightmare. They reached Maheshwari house. Last time she had stepped into the palatial house it had been full of life and celebration as a new bride entered the house. Today it lay immersed in gloom and despair as a precious life was lost.

Swara followed her parents as they walked up to Durga Prasad and his wife Annapurna Maheshwari. Both of them looked grief stricken.

"Swara go in. We dont have long. " Annapurna Maheshwari said crying.

Ragini took her inside. She stopped in her tracks when she saw the white shroud and wreaths. She couldn't bring herself to look at the photo kept above and looked at the people standingaround all dressed in white. She saw many faces she knew but her eyes kept lookingfor someone. To know if he was alright. But the moment she saw him she wished she hadn't looked. He stood there. Looking pale and sad.

His eyes were focused on one thing. The photo with the garland
Her eyes followed his. She was there with that beautiful smile.

Kavita Sanskaar Maheshwari.

His wife. Her best friend.

"Swara " she heard someone addreaddress her.

She didn't know who it was for she was caught in something else. He was now looking at her. Their eyes locked for a moment. She had seen love, longing and betrayal in those eyes. She was ready to take that. But this look of pain, surging hatred and worst of all that broken look. That was it. She couldn't take it.

The next thing she knew she was running out from Maheshwari house.

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Hope you like this chapter...I have always imagined Kavita as a good person...hope you like that.

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