Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res Lucky dearest.. Will be back ASAP..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ressy sissy 😆. Will unres ASAP.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My breath dropped at the end...what was that? Really loved this bade bhaiyya who knows what his sister needs...I guess he was what Swara missed in the cannon a true brother who would do anything for her.
I liked the way everything was shaping up until you dropped the bomb on my head by that future glimpse. Now I can't wait to read more...still I'm loving the thrill...
Lots of love,
Saku
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

My breath dropped at the end...what was that? Really loved this bade bhaiyya who knows what his sister needs...I guess he was what Swara missed in the cannon a true brother who would do anything for her.

I liked the way everything was shaping up until you dropped the bomb on my head by that future glimpse. Now I can't wait to read more...still I'm loving the thrill...
Lots of love,
Saku


Saku🤗

It feels good to be back .I just landed in chasing Sun thread😉

😆 I am glad bomb shell ticked off in right direction .Mission Accomplished.😉 I told you this is twisted version of Hades and Persephone story😆

Sujoy has a very important role to play in coming parts😊..Him being loved is a good sign.

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dear Lucky,

I was really waiting for this gem! Sanskar is very different from Hades.His life revolved around his Shona, yet he was adamant to let go his life away. But own our Shona is adamant.(Rather I find her and Sujoy more similar to Hades and Zeus!) She played by one rule "All's fair in love and war!" She probably ruined her reputation falsely, and somehow convinced everyone Sanskar had a part. Sanskar is not happy for two reasons after realising it's Swara's ploy to be with him. One, he felt guilty for something he didn't, rather was tricked. Second,( I think this is the main cause) his love was too selfless to share his melancholic life with her. He wished a life of Queen for her. little did he knew, Shona only wanted to rule his untamed heart!

Sujoy is a darling! True Swasan shipper at heart!

Lucky don't keep us waiting too long. We always miss your writing.

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Dyuti [


Hi Dyuti🤗

I have so many updates to catch up on your FF ..though I have been reading them from phone but they all deserve a proper reply.Just waiting for maddening pace to return to normal ..Have lot to catch up.😕

Well .You can keep guesses coming in😆 of what might have happened .You will have your answers in next part. I mentioned that it would be twisted version of the story...So Swara is Hades who wouldn't give up her love so easily..and Sujoy I wanted Swara to have solid support in form of sibling , a change from usual Ragini and some one strong enough to knock some sense into Sanskaar😆😆

Thanks for Dropping by and I missed writing too .. badly ..but glad I am able to find sometime.

Love
Lucky



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m



Hi Dyuti🤗

I have so many updates to catch up on your FF ..though I have been reading them from phone but they all deserve a proper reply.Just waiting for maddening pace to return to normal ..Have lot to catch up.😕

Well .You can keep guesses coming in😆of what might have happened .You will have your answers in next part.I mentioned that it would be twisted version of the story...So Swara is Hades who wouldn't give up her love so easily..and Sujoy I wanted Swara to have solid support in form of sibling , a change from usual Ragini and some one strong enough to knock some sense into Sanskaar😆😆

Thanks for Dropping by and I missed writing too .. badly ..but glad I am able to find sometime.

Love
Lucky





So Sunny boy is the Persephone! He was abducted from his idealistic self of being all sacrificial and a knight in the shadow! Mahaan Sanskar! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for ch-2 Lucky. 😳
Unresed. 😃
I really loved the bro-sis bonding between Sujoy-Swara. 😃 Such an adorable bonding. 😳 Sujoy knows that SwaSan loves each other so he helped them to get together. 😉 I loved SwaSan scenes very much be it the flashback scenes or the present scenes. 😳 All was going well so suddenly what happened that Sanskar thinks that Swara tricked him to wed her?? 😕 He loves her right? Then?? 😕 OMG! Can't wait to read the next part dear. 😉 Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Superb..u r a awesome writer 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Hello lucky dear
How r u indeed yes long time no see
& update it's fantabulous beautifulll
I loved every moments of it their love for each other longing for each other everything. u know I again read 1st chapter to memorize continuation.
loved siblings bond except ragini she never change always jealous of swasan bond.
ohh now they married how what tricks swara & her brother played pls update soon can't wait to know what happened.
& pls don't separate them but u can make sanskar angry & swara manaofy her hubby.
eagerly waiting for it update soon dear
Bye
Take care
loved u lots...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... Wonderful... I'm loving this a lot... 😛
Lucky dear, I think this is the first time, i'm dropping my idea in your stories. But i'm a secret follower of your fanaa.. 😃 i love that a lot..
Frankly speaking, i landed up in this story accidentally and fell in love with it. I have to say this story is very intriguing. I'm loving this shona & sanskaar. Sujoy is a caring brother & a friend. Shek-shomi are loving parents. But Shekhar was a surprise for me.. 😉 Ragini & dadi.. As expected.. 🤢
I loved all swasan scenes. 😳 Their love & care for each other was amazing..
Then came the twist in the tale.. Everything was going so smooth, then what happen so suddenly causing their marriage? I know they loved each other.. But i know this also, that ragini, dadi & shomi won't let that happen so easily... They were searching some good proposals for swara & they were againt swasan's closer.Then how could they approve this? 😕 And why that sanskaar thinks that his shona has tricked him to marry her?
Oh god.. I have so many questions. Update soon lucky..
Cannot wait for it..
Love u
Kavi

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