Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30)

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srividhya87

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Lovely part...

Finally swasan became one..

Trio company is superb..

Sanky is trying hard for his company achievement but it is creating a drift in personal life and he doesn't even understand that...

We can't always chase after money. Relationships and our loved ones are more important than anything else..

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Dearest Lucky,
I feel terrible about not being able to comment on last few parts. I never missed commenting on this one before! I read the last part in Himachal! Perfect place for perfect chapter. As usual you were able to make me swoon with those passionate, steamy yet divine union of Swasan.

I can understand the fire burning inside Sanskar but he is being unfair with his salvation. He must get what his priority is. Swara or his hunger to show the world his word. Unfortunately he is untamed for the 2nd one. Where he should have shown this trait during that marriage fiasco.

Don't dare to separate them! I'll haunt you even in your dreams!

Love,
Dyuti

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Hey lucky...

Chapter 9...was.terrific...i was feeling pretty excited and proud after sanky and gang had planned and work hard for KARMA and CO...it was marvellously penned...

I liked his wicked side...he showed amit and sahil..who is the boss..i was literally grining for his ways..

Loved the entire swasan consummation part..they finally moved past all hurdles and hardship..but last paragraph made me all panicky...im scared now..what will happen..hoping this story ends well...waiting anxiously...

Love u

Talia

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: ria2794
finally, she got her sanskar as she wished him. So so sweet they love each other so much. Loved how swara decided to wait for the day he himself comes back to her. but now I am worried, how can anything be more important to him than his Shona. Sometimes we don't understand what other person need. We think that "Love is not enough" but for the other person, the only thing that he needs is love.

Hi Ria '🤗

Like you have put it , its about the way we view the things which may differ ..same is case with Swara and Sanskaar.. clash of priorities .. but they will be sorted soon 😊 I am very happy reading about Swara gaining equal foot with Sanskaar and being loved ,😳 infact termed to be more mature than Sanskaar ..We;ll for someone who is crazy about Sanskaar idiolises him to ab extent of being ultimate hero,Swara grabbing light .. no less feat for me .

Thanks again

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Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: srividhya87
Lovely part...
Finally swasan became one..
Trio company is superb..
Sanky is trying hard for his company achievement but it is creating a drift in personal life and he doesn't even understand that...

We can't always chase after money. Relationships and our loved ones are more important than anything else..

Hi Srividhya🤗

Good to read you loved the trio and Karma .. I thought the business part might get boring you guys but I am glad reading your comment.

Sanskaar will soon understand and sort his priorities

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: iamreader
Dearest Lucky,
I feel terrible about not being able to comment on last few parts. I never missed commenting on this one before! I read the last part in Himachal! Perfect place for perfect chapter. As usual you were able to make me swoon with those passionate, steamy yet divine union of Swasan.

I can understand the fire burning inside Sanskar but he is being unfair with his salvation. He must get what his priority is. Swara or his hunger to show the world his word. Unfortunately he is untamed for the 2nd one. Where he should have shown this trait during that marriage fiasco.

Don't dare to separate them! I'll haunt you even in your dreams!

Love,
Dyuti

Dyuti 🤗

Are U back .. Hope u had an amazing time at India.. and Himchal .. wow ..😳 Perfect place for perfect chapter😆 Well union scenes are always tricky for me .. I fear I might go over broad sometimes, not sure how it might turn out to be .. and lines may be crossed but reading your comment really gave me relief😳😛

Salvation is what he fears .. but very soon he will realise his priorities.Marriage fiasco and Swara's extreme step is one of key points for untamed .. hence Sanskaar had to be tamed and low at that point .

Separation ... nah .. I personally don't prefer separations ..meaning I love pain agony the separation brings in but trust me I am sucker for HEA..so Swasan will have one in Untamed.

Welcome back, Good to see you here ..

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hey lucky...
Chapter 9...was.terrific...i was feeling pretty excited and proud after sanky and gang had planned and work hard for KARMA and CO...it was marvellously penned...
I liked his wicked side...he showed amit and sahil..who is the boss..i was literally grining for his ways..
Loved the entire swasan consummation part..they finally moved past all hurdles and hardship..but last paragraph made me all panicky...im scared now..what will happen..hoping this story ends well...waiting anxiously...

Love u
Talia

Talia🤗

Phew /..Thanks sweety .. I felt business part might turn out to be boring.. but feels good to read you loved that part ..😈Wicked side of Sanskaar ..Oh I absolutely love when he gets messier with villians and his devilish side is no less hotter😳

Hurdles and hardships are part and parcel of life .. they might have few more in coming parts but be assured they will have happy moments too and and Happy Ever After

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#198

I guess ..I caught up on comments .. will be posting next part in sometime.😛

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Hi all

Updated next Chapter 😛.Pm's on its way. Do read when time permits and let me know your thoughts

Love

Lucky

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#200

res for 10 - not counting how many I have to unres🤢🤢🤢

Okay I have caught up with all the updates, have already read them a couple of times, but always worthy of another reading.

This is the chapter of conflicts - the idea of love being enough versus display of material wealth as a measure of success. The romantic me agrees with Swara but then a part of me cannot blame Sanskaar either. He was denied Swara more because of lack of material possessions rather than because he was an orphan, so his fire and the burn is understandable. It is tough to forgive someone for the way they make you feel, inferior and less than them and it is very difficult not to rub it into their face when life and karma (pun intended) give you a chance.

That being said, Swara longing to be with him, her wish to let him know that her love was never dependant on material things is right too. But then both were so hasty, she to let him know and he in misunderstanding her.

So actually, we might have to thank Sahil - if he had not carried out his despicable act, Swara and Sanskaar might have taken years to reconcile with each other. Yes, thank you for clarifying to us at least that the bullet hit only her shoulder, her collapse would be partly on account of the shock and the weakness (I do not think Sahil bothered feeding "his work of art".

And it would be a wake up call for both of them.

Now bring on as many chapters as you want, I am current with my comments.😆

loads of love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago