SwaSan SS: Another Chance at Happiness (Epilogue on pg 19[23/05/17])

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Nita my doll...

Im glad youare giving a sequel to your OS which we enjoyed alot...im looking forward for this journey...you dont need permission for giving us awesome memories..you just provide...😉

Chapter1 was fabulous...swara realizing her mistakewhich we all know..she was more wrong than sanky.but..i connected with her Povs n her realisation ... swasan convo was short n painful...but she realised thats important..looking forward for next..second chance at happiness...excited

Well i was reading some comments n read that inserial sanky apologise.. is it true??if it true then im soo angry..they just ruined the show fully...Havent seen serial since long...can someone brief what exactly happened inshow???very curious

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Talia

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 8 years ago

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

hey hun...well i am mostly a silent reader but now that exams r over and i have caught up with all my personal pending engagements, I have time to come on IF anyways I love all your work even though I cannot comment regularly and coming to this story, the beginning looks awesome, the pain and anguish both are going at the moment...SwaSan are truly soulmates who can never survive without each other, I guess Swara has realised her mistake and hopefully she is able to restore her trust and faith in Sanskaar..ohh ii feel FOR Sanskaa, h is truly heartbroken but he also needs to acknowledge the fact that he was wrong when he told Swara that she wont be welcome in his life back again if she works out, their egos was the downfall of their relationship...anyways cannot wait to read further and I am sooo happy that you r giving a proper ending to what was an awesme track but alas...never mind...please do pm me for further updates...thnx!!

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: StarySKY
I am here .. 😃
Nita .. 🤗

It so so so so beautiful ..
I am in tears right now .. 😭

I can't find words for it .. they way you wrote about their pain , the hurt and regret .. *sigh*
I am totally speechless ..

Oh I am so in love with this story .. I am very eager for the rest of it ..

Hats off Nita .. 👏

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Khushi

Hi Khushi dearest🤗

Thanks dear..You liked it 😃.. Then i am so happy.. Well i dont have words to explain how happy i am to read you liked it 😊... Will concentrate on BTM next ..Then will update Chapter 2 ... Once again thanks dear for your lovely comment

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Wonderful

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Nivijo
It was awesome Nita di. I loved it. Finally realization dawned upon swara that it was she who walked upon their relationship not sanskar. And their convo, though short, was enough to convey that sanskar was hurt at that point of time and it was not any ego of his. Waiting for swara to make up for all the wounds inflicted by her upon sanskar. And also for sanskar to allow her to do the same. Update soon.
Love u loads
Nivi

Thanks Nivi dearest🤗.. I am super happy to know you liked the update😃...And yeah i am trying to make their reunion back to each other as meaningful as possible unlike the show sudden reunion that left me speechless.. And to do that both have to realize where they went wrong..

@Bold- You perfectly mentioned my whole purpose of this SS.. Let hope i am able to do justice to it 😳..Will try to update soon but first i have to update my FF then will work on chapter 2 of this SS

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Nita

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Dear nita...

Thank you do much for writing this ss...truly I hope you do justice to the track were sr went wrong...The cos truly killed the show for the fandom...

Getting back to the first update it was thrilling and refresh to see sanskaar being his true self and letting swara know that he is hurt...The emotional conflict shown was a pleasure to read..

Hope this guilt truly makes swara reflect and makes her realise what she has done on wrong...like your intro said both were given a second chance yet swara chose to ignore it and her promises were as sanskaar stayed faithful to his words and memories..

Cannot wait to read about the past in your story...

Loved the intro...update soon..

Raz

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Nita dearest 🤗 🤗

Am on work related travel at the moment, hence keeping this comment shorter than I'd like it to be. 😕

I really liked the way you showed the interaction between SwaSan, the way Sanskaar let her know how betrayed and hurt he had felt. Certain wounds and breaches for trust take time to heal...Can't happen like a convenient snap of one's fingers.

And in the serial they made Sanskaar apologize to Swara. What utter madness. Looking forward to a much more beautifully portrayed journey of assuaging each others hurt, providing succor to each other, Swara winning back Sanskaar's trust and both of them acknowledging how they had both erred in their own ways.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Will be back

Dear Nita,

I have read it quite a number of times and I will be honest. The first time I read it I was quite upset, because it appeared that somehow you would try to apportion the blame to Sanskaar (I am ultra sensitive now) but it was on the second read that I realised, it is from her POV and it became clearer.😳

Swara here is truly quite courageous to admit to herself the reasons and the rationale that it was her anger, anger at being hurt by him,that was behind her actions and then realise that even if he was wrong, she was even more wrong, doing what she did. For her intention to hurt him was wrong and her act of appearing to choose her sister over him was somehow wrong too.

And then her regret that she failed him the most when she paid attention to his words and not his feelings, for there was no way he would choose anyone over her and there is no way he could live without her. His words were in anger and her actions were in anger. Unfortunately actions speak louder than words and what she did was like a slap on his face.

Sanskaar - he is giving up - on hope and life. He realises he can never live without her, that each time someone snatched her away from him she could fight to come back - but now when she herself chose to walk out, he does not believe she can battle with her demons to come back to him. Awake or asleep, it is always Swara for him - but he is giving up which is why he stated "it is too late"

Would Swara accept that, she knew she was his weakness and took advantage of it. And he is her strength, when he is not willing to fight, can she summon the strength - for both of them?

Cannot wait to read.

Do update soon.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

oh Nita🤗

😛

This is so good yaar👏 ..Anything that has got to do a bit of remorse from Swara...Dil ko sukoon milta hain ... hugs for you🤗 ..for taking this up..I loved the entire POV of Swara and he saying that she gave up so soon..She indeed did give up soon ...waiting for next part

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lucky

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Ginny potter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Beautiful start di... 🤗 finally a realization from swara's side which I wanted to see... 😳 and for the first time I m not finding swara's pov stupid...and actually I can sympathize with her...only because of u. 😳 too good di...can't wait for more. 😳

Lots of love,
Helee

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