The Maheshwari House Murders-Chap 6 PG 50, 26/12/16

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: elsanna
Viji di🤗

Hey Tani sweetheart 🤗🤗

Synopsis and Character Sketch Updated Page 1 😊

Love,

----Viji

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

And I fall for your tale - hook line and sinker (in a very positive meaning) or to use an idiom from your favourite game this tale is a "game, set and match" one.

I am going to read it once again and then get back.

loads of love,

Nyna

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: elsanna
Viji di🤗

Still confused😛 will wait for chappy 1😆

Tani

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: NitaReid
And i am here ..Will be right back..This time pakka..Since you did mention the three names that i have to reply back asap

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Okay i am here..You mention those three names..I cant help but comment😆.. Really Really i will be the one praying the opposite way Viji dear..Just to be clear.. Murray and Sahil oh come on 🤣...Did you know that guy almost gave me an heart attack yesterday ..And when i thought Kei would be least bit helpful he went to play like that... So yeah the final countdown is surely in your favor and i am hoping hoping it doesnt work that way though the fact my 4S will be delayed is bit upsetting but cant help it 😉... I really really want Murray to win today😆..Okay yep for all the love of tennis and Rafa we cant seem to be on the same page regarding Murray vs Novak😆.. But i suppose you know it even before i typed this whole paragraph right

But what we are on the same page is definitely regarding swasan...When i heard one more undercover mission i went 🤪 ..Really to prove he is laksh no need to disguise as maids,they are plenty of other way.. But well they are not taking ideas from you or other amazing forum writers and so ofcourse they will come up with such stupidity.. As you said it might lead to more Swara realizing that the only hope in this track because the whole plan screams a frustrated me and so yep me quite happy that you are feeling along the same lines..

Hmmm i dont like Swara the detective..I have been pretty vocal about it for so long but if if it was her profession i might change my pov ,and the biggest advantage swara got is you being the author..Her plans will definitely be approved by me since your plans are amazing ..Because trust me in this show all her plans worked out because of pure luck most of the time so i never found her plans to be amazing to qualify for her being called an detective but here i might..So i say bring it on 😳

Eagerly waiting to read it .. And i will be waiting patiently as well..So take your time ..

Lots of love

Nita

Nita 🤗

To me, Murray and Sahil are both party poopers. 😆 Sahil was a thorn in SwaSan's path; Murray is the thorn now in Novak (and Rafa's) sides, and in their march to cross Fed's GS titles haul. I SO wish Novak beats him in the World Tour Finals today evening. 😊

I am so touched by your very warm words, Nita darling. Thrilled that you are interested in this tale, and are on board for this journey. I will strive to make it as interesting as suspenseful as I can. 😳 ☺️

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
And I fall for your tale - hook line and sinker (in a very positive meaning) or to use an idiom from your favourite game this tale is a "game, set and match" one.
I am going to read it once again and then get back.

loads of love,
Nyna

Nynu 🤗🤗

That means a lot to me. 😳 ☺️ So thrilled to know that you loved the Synopsis. 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: elsanna

Still confused😛 will wait for chappy 1😆

Tani

😆 😉 I am trying to not reveal too much. There will be some hints/ clues in Chapter 1 and onwards. But some of them might be misleading clues/ red herrings as well. 😳 😆

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

God viji ...

So it's all set .. I am so excited for this genre..very intriguing and it got me all hooked..I love suspense thrillers ..and SK..uff..you make him tennis star then army general...I am sure screens will ablaze when SK meets swara ..and rest of character sketch👏👏

I always love solid background u give for characters ...so already 3 murders ...tick tick tick...can't wait but waiting ..

Awesome start ..😉⭐️ already in love

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Lucky

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Sanya17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Wow I am loving this new story of yours I always love stories with crime genre and suspense thriller type story

Sanskar being murder suspect that's something new and he was on army

Swara works with CBI her job is finding criminals at least here her plans would be perfect

Though from what is mentioned by now dp and laksh looks positive but still I can't throw out the negative feeling they gave me and dp being politician is making the feeling more strong actually ever since swaragini began dp gave me negative feeling and it went strong with some of the amazing stories I read in the forum where dp was villain

By the way for some reason durgaprasad suits as powerful politician

I am loving this story so much and don't worry take your time on games people play

Bad news is swaragini indeed seems to be going off air it seems like the show won't be able to make it till the new year I never thought it would be so soon what will happen to the forum after the show gets off air people will be leaving the forum and the plans of story memories of midnight what's gonna happen to all that I am feeling more sad and worried about the forum and what will happen to all the ongoing stories if people leave the forum after the end of the show 😭

Edited by Sanya17 - 8 years ago