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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Dyuti,
And I am finally here, for Chapter 18 (two more to go, only if you do not update before I complete).

Chapter 18 was a period of healing, a time for reforging the old bonds and discovering new ones. Sanskaar and Swara realise their feelings, their souls speak to each other, though they are yet to confess to one another. Ayaz and Kiara, meeting again, with a familiarity that simply touches you. And how well they knew and understood Sanskaar.

It was a time of realisation - when everyone around can see how deeply and completely Swara and Sanskaar have fallen for each other, and how they appeared to be meant for each other.

A time for reassessment - as the Black Wolves take stock of the situation and plan their revenge
For Swara and Sanskaar as they try to battle their emotions and he breaks out in anger at her inane actions and she attempts to understand the cause for her jealousy.

A time for recovery - with Swara being a very troublesome patient and Sanskaar a very impatient caregiver

Finally a time for recognising - when Swara accepts what Sanskaar means to her

Okay, I am not sure what I have written, just seemed to have rambled. Will be back for the rest.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Dear Dyuti,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">And I am finally here, for Chapter 18 (two more to go, only if you do not update before I complete).</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Chapter 18 was a period of healing, a time for reforging the old bonds and discovering new ones. Sanskaar and Swara realise their feelings, their souls speak to each other, though they are yet to confess to one another. Ayaz and Kiara, meeting again, with a familiarity that simply touches you. And how well they knew and understood Sanskaar.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">It was a time of realisation - when everyone around can see how deeply and completely Swara and Sanskaar have fallen for each other, and how they appeared to be meant for each other.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">A time for reassessment- as the Black Wolves take stock of the situation and plan their revenge</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">For Swara and Sanskaar as they try to battle their emotions and he breaks out in anger at her inane actions and she attempts to understand the cause for her jealousy.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">A time for recovery - with Swara being a very troublesome patient and Sanskaar a very impatient caregiver</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Finally a time for recognising - when Swara accepts what Sanskaar means to her</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Okay, I am not sure what I have written, just seemed to have rambled. Will be back for the rest.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">love,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Nyna</font>


Dear Nyna,
I guess you'll have a week to catch up. I became awfully slow now a days.Gone were those days when I updated daily or every alternate day.

Yes chapter 18 was calm after the storm. I can't handle hospital melodrama at all! Perhaps as I spent a lot of time there both as doctor and patient, and as a child of doctor couple . I can't feel those emotions anymore.
Ayaz and Kiara are support system of Sanskar, and of Swara too. As Swara is not separate from Sanskar anymore. Their hearts started to have conversations. People around them can sense their strength and pull of the bond they have formed.

Realisation...was beautiful for Swasan...and shocking for Black Wolves...

I love your 'ramblings' Nynu! They're what make my journey as a writer more enjoyable! Hope I can find them more!

Love,
Dyuti

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nivijo

I definitely need to res. Will catch up ur story after march, dyuti dear😊.

Love
Nivi






Dear Nivi,
I guess you've exams. If yes all the best for your exams! And will see ya at March!

Love you!
Dyuti



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Posted: 8 years ago

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Dear Nivi,
I guess you've exams. If yes all the best for your exams! And will see ya at March!

Love you!
Dyuti



Thanks for your warm wishes 😊.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iamreader



Dear Nyna,
I guess you'll have a week to catch up. I became awfully slow now a days.Gone were those days when I updated daily or every alternate day.

Yes chapter 18 was calm after the storm. I can't handle hospital melodrama at all! Perhaps as I spent a lot of time there both as doctor and patient, and as a child of doctor couple . I can't feel those emotions anymore.
Ayaz and Kiara are support system of Sanskar, and of Swara too. As Swara is not separate from Sanskar anymore. Their hearts started to have conversations. People around them can sense their strength and pull of the bond they have formed.

Realisation...was beautiful for Swasan...and shocking for Black Wolves...

I love your 'ramblings' Nynu! They're what make my journey as a writer more enjoyable! Hope I can find them more!

Love,
Dyuti


Dear Dyuti,

I will be "rambling" a lot. And if you really want to risk it, you could read the true ramblings of mine (the post titled quite aptly as "Random Ramblings"😆😆😆)

Love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Dear Dyuti,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I will be "rambling" a lot. And if you really want to risk it, you could read the true ramblings of mine (the post titled quite aptly as "Random Ramblings"😆😆😆)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Love,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Nyna</font>




Dear Nyna,
I'd really love to "risk" my threads(and yours too) with your ramblings. I'm a chatterbox myself, always manage to find an innocent victim and make their life hell except one... my soul sis Riya (.Avengers), who seemed equally crazy like me. Once in a while I irritate Shru in FB too(poor girl!).
Once I shed off my skin, me a real naagin!
I welcome each other in rambling hell! (Or heaven!)
Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago


Thanks Sneha❤️... for dropping by!

Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Dyuti,
I am now back for Chapter 19 and one more to go. I will do that today and for your OS - Pyre, if I do not get sidetracked with my PS attempts

Chapter 19 - the dynamics between Swara and Sanskaar, the staff within Interpol and between the hunters and the hunted are changing.

Sanskaar, and Swara too, for that matter, should be happy and relieved that they still chose and appeared destined to be together, though they will take ages to confess. Missed their chance on the beach (they think they can read their thoughts, she asks he answers in his mind, he questions and she blushes her answers. They end up kissing, quite passionate😳😳 and still do not confess. I know that as a writer there is a pace to develop the passion, but as a reader, I am quite upset with them😡)

And then the final twist (your updates do follow the essence of your title, just as winds can blow everywhere and kick up a storm, your updates leave the readers panting with anticipation), there are two Sanskaars, with Sanskaar Oberoi being a real person and not just an alias picked by Sanskaar (makes sense, which is why the background verification would have been so easy) - but then this Dr Oberoi must also have a connection with the Black Wolves (not as a part of them but definitely affected by them, I think). Have to wait to read his role.

love,
Nyna
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Dear Dyuti,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I am now back for Chapter 19 and one more to go. I will do that today and for your OS - Pyre, if I do not get sidetracked with my PS attempts</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Chapter 19 - the dynamics between Swara and Sanskaar, the staff within Interpol and between the hunters and the hunted are changing.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Sanskaar, and Swara too, for that matter, should be happy and relieved that they still chose and appeared destined to be together, though they will take ages to confess. Missed their chance on the beach (they think they can read their thoughts, she asks he answers in his mind, he questions and she blushes her answers. They end up kissing, quite passionate😳😳and still do not confess. I know that as a writer there is a pace to develop the passion, but as a reader, I am quite upset with them😡)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">And then the final twist (your updates do follow the essence of your title, just as winds can blow everywhere and kick up a storm, your updates leave the readers panting with anticipation), there are two Sanskaars, with Sanskaar Oberoi being a real person and not just an alias picked by Sanskaar (makes sense, which is why the background verification would have been so easy) - but then this Dr Oberoi must also have a connection with the Black Wolves (not as a part of them but definitely affected by them, I think). Have to wait to read his role.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">love,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Nyna</font>



Nynu,
Phew! At last I managed to reply you. Just updated my other story which was emotionally draining. I was doing some research and that left me so sad that I couldn't write a word for a long time.

The story dynamics will be changing.The entire set up will change. Many new characters, new place, Swasan's new avatar... everything will be altered .The transition is tricky and a bit difficult to handle .

Swasan confession... I know I'm frustrating you but I've plans and story lines set for them. And Sunny boy is die hard romantic. He kisses like a possessed man before confession. just imagine what would be the after effect?

I haven't yet decided when I'll bring back Sanskar Oberoi again(Actual one). Too many incidents are planned already. It's a thin line to to balance between logic and creative liberty/ imagination. I broke a major logic.. Interpol doesn't have any special agent. They're myth and only present novels and movies. .

You're catching up fast. Good job!

Love you loads
Dyuti

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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Dyuti,
Firstly a very happy Valentine's day to you. And secondly I am very pleased with myself, this is the final chapter with a pending res. Not that my overall count reduces, I have just added TAFL to the list.

Anyway coming to this chapter, the zephyr is now set to become a tempest, for both sides are running against time.

Swara settling in, the fun filled teasing of her new associates, Sanskaar's childish jealously, all was very well described. And Sanskaar and Swara are really losing themselves, once in each other's company they are quite oblivious to everyone. I hope they spoke in hindi, or else Thea must have had one very entertaining drive.😳😳So Sanskaar wants to make their love story a memorable one, but unfortunately the encounter with the Black Wolves might make it unforgettable.

The Black Wolves, they plan to strike with renewed and doubled vengeance, with Laksh now having a personal score to settle. Looking forward to the battle of wits and the race against time.

love,
Nyna

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