Hi Nyna,
Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Is it even possible between us? I too have that question, if you plan to wrap up things in five chapters, not much chance of a romance, right? But then the story is too much fun to truly worry about it, and maybe if we are very very good, you could give us a sequel😳😳, please?
Since the start of this FF, I have been adamant on not making this a love story. I have written numerous stories on romance and the challenge in this FF for me is to explore what I have not written before. A sequel is very much possible. However I am not sure how many readers would still stick around till then. Also I cant think of a new writing project until end of May when I will get my semester break. So lets see how things go.
So Sanskaar does have an idea of how valuable Swara is - I am sure that he is too professional to allow his personal interest in her to influence his decision to pull the strings and have the laptop/iphone given to her.
You are right. It's from a professional aspect rather than personal affection.
And the focus shifts to the Friday night - a nice glimpse, appears that even magic folks have the same human fallacies of cheating on their partners😆😆And Swara's reaction to Sanskaar in T-shirts(he looks good anyway you see him)
LOL, no one is perfect, proven here. Sanskaar is loosening up. Swara has only seen him in his official space. So I thought it would be like another layer to Sanskaar's character. Whether the scene examines this layer or adds this as a new layer to the mysterious character, is up to you as a reader. When I read this after some time, I felt this was putting on another layer to his character.
Now the conversation that Swara overhears, why do I think it is not about her? Even though she suspects it is could be about her? I am sure that even if both Laksh and Sanskaar fall for Swara, they would not discuss about her as an object, that too in the midst of a bar. I guess we have to wait for the updates.
The conversation is about her, but only one sentence is actually talking about her. When Laksh says that she is new and can't be left alone, that's Swara they are worried about. The trio of Elize-Nix-Orla are troublemakers and Laksh knows of this. Swara also understands this in Chap 16.
The No and No-way thing was talking about the friendship Sanskaar and Laksh share. We see that Laksh is flamboyant here. Yet he acts sensible with Sanskaar and handles their professional and personal dynamics pretty well. Sanskaar matters to him.
And the ending (I love the way you end everything with a one liner that has me scratching my head, wondering what would happen next) - Sanskaar not understanding hindi (but he grew up with Laksh, so how come?) Now I am quite eager to know why and how?
I like to leave a cliffhanger. I am used to reading page turners. If I am not looking forward to the next chapter, I keep the book down forever.
Sanskaar has a very elaborate background story. If I ever write a sequel, it will be on that.
I had planned this to be of Medieval romance genre. Haha, I am contradicting myself here by saying romance. 🤔But most of the characteristics of this story match the features of Medieval romance. And the main feature of medieval stories is that the hero is an enigma who stays the same even at the end. With a questionable past left unexplored. I am still in two brains about revealing here or not. What do you think? Should I reveal within the story or sequel?
Cheers
Sharon
Edited by Sparkler8 - 8 years ago
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