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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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REs for 17, will unres for both 16 and 17, before the end of this week - promise😳

Part unres - Okay that was Laksh, (my question for chapter 16 was - was that Sanskaar.)

And now that Ragini is off the drugs, she is reverting to her immune status and which is why she is suspicious of Laksh.

And since magic is also sort of IP, guess Swara will rope in Ragini.

God, Sharon, I was not even this excited for Harry Potter (well, I bunked the day Deathly Hallows was released, collected my pre -order at 6 in the morning and finished reading by evening, because my brother was breathing down my neck😆)

I demand a sequel, and keep Sanskaar's mysterious past for that. We need something to be eager about.

Best,

Nyna

Unres for 17 after you post 18

Well I can do nothing about it, maybe unres for 18 too (come to think of it, I did not even res for 18🤢🤢)

Okay, I have the same question, how did Laksh know that the skeleton is a "he" I know there are some basic differences but how did he identify it at first glance

And Swara's talent is not simply being an immune, there are others too - it is a combination of her immunity, her attitude and the marketing knowledge that she brings - it is that combination which could be deadly and also the fact (???) that she is a good friend of Ragini (could the pre cog recognise this link too??)

Ragini and Laksh - in Swara's dreams - guess that was your hint of the spoiler surprise😊😊

Sigh- even magical worlds are not immune, though we could be immune to the magic. But what you wrote in the end, that is so true, most of the laws / rules / principles we have address the black /white , and when an action is in the gray area, where it must be judged in full perspective, it becomes subjective and prone to human emotions. Fican thinks himself to be quite clever, an influencing spell - where the spell in itself cannot be classified as good or evil, it being entirely dependant on what the user intends. They are in a bit of a spot right, though Swara has Ragini in mind, which Chapter 18 confirms.

And onwards to Chapter 18. Will get back soon.

Best,

Nyna

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: RAONE8
Awesome update!!!
Really getting interesting with each update

Eagerly waiting for next chapter
Cont sooon

Thank you dear!

Hopefully I can finish this story by this weekend.😊

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Unres on page 39😊

Replied for both 14 & 15 👍🏼

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Sharon,

Take your time, we will wait, though I am saddened to read that we are nearing the end of this FF, maybe you would write a sequel, please.

And yes, res for 16😊

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Nyna

Aww.. a sequel.. My first FF had a sequel too.. so I am still in two minds whether to write the sequel for this. Once I complete this story, I will try to write an outline. If I am satisfied with it, then I can churn out a sequel.

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Aww.. a sequel.. My first FF had a sequel too.. so I am still in two minds whether to write the sequel for this. Once I complete this story, I will try to write an outline. If I am satisfied with it, then I can churn out a sequel.

Our replies got caught in the crossways😆😆, I have already written how badly I want a sequel above.😳

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#287

Again a res! I'm extremely sorry Sharon!

At last I'm doing this! Hope you're not going to update so soon, are you? ( Just kidding! 😉 )

Fican sensed the alteration in the way MSI is playing. So he guessed Swara as the new player in the squad. That's why he attempted to cause an injury to send her to dug out or... possibly out of the arena! But she turned to be a tough cookie! And her team mates are endearing, looking after her like a close knit family members do! I'm liking Lakshya a lot.He takes the responsibility to protect Swara in Sanskar's absence. He's the only source for Swara and us to know what Sanskar has hidden in that enigmatic mind/heart of him, as he is extremely reserved. I want the sequel of Whimsical corporation like many others do, but hope to get a hint of Swasan's future romantic journey before you end this one!

After stopping those drugs, Ragini' got her immunity back.By the way does it mean she doesn't find Luc handsome anymore?! 😉 😆
Just like Sanskar had discovered Swara, the latter discovered Ragini. Perhaps grey shaded Ragini(correct me if I'm wrong) is the answer to Fican's grey shaded magic spells?

You're doing a commendable job with this FF. So far your best work and one of the most unique concepts tried on Swasan.

Love,
Dyuti

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Res sharon...😃
Will get back soon...muahhh😳

Update as usual was terrific...👏and Admist all the magic n spells ...merlin made swara his secretary..hain????.one question...why...?? Why on earth he is doing this...???they are on extra generous mode...now ..i agree she is good..but in few months only...she is department head n now secretary ...im suspicious.now..what i believe is too much sugar can cause diabetes...is he really merlin??? Sometimes i wonder he is some imposters..or related to swara...just some stupid thought...swara does not get alarmed at such pleasant surprises...im alarmed...

and Ragini ...she saw fairies..hmmm interesting...i guess lucky n ragini are dating somehow...nix n orla actually hate lucky...n vice versa..so they are doing something to ragini to scare her.black mailing her??? Casting spell on her???..maybe lucky is thinking of hiring her..n both are jealous ..now..already swara had made her mark n now ragini too...i think this idea popped in my head...

Sanky doesnot know hindi..i think this point would be turning point of story...or most important part in future update...i guess alot today...hain na???
Swara attacked ..it was shocking...made me panicky...i know the mystery man with soothing voice helping her...😳 any guesses??

Many mysteries are on veil...im just curious...what is going to happen??reveal soon plzz...i m literally out of ideas..my mind is at dead end..waiting

Love
Talia

N yes i want sequel of this too.. im with nynas idea..if possible..want swasan lovestory too...

Hi Talia

You think a lot, dear. Since this story is in first person perspective, you will only learn what Swara knows. Even Swara is surprised at their generosity. Now why are they being so generous will be revealed in Chapter 17.

Yes he is the real Merlin.

Lucky and Ragini have nothing going on as of now. They might start dating soon.. ;)

I edited some parts on fairies. They tend to be notorious and that was the reason Sanskaar and Lakshya were worried about Swara mingling with them. Ragini knows none of Swara's colleagues.

Sanskaar not knowing Hindi was last minute deal for me, because I thought it would create some mystery around his character. I have not required that in the climax till now.

I will try my best to write a sequel.

Cheers

Sharon

Edited by Sparkler8 - 8 years ago