'The Return of the King'--A SwaSan/Abhi/Ragini/Nikhil 2S UPDT PG 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Nivijo

I'm too in viji. Waiting for the Drabble.

Happy weekend!
๐Ÿคฃ. Let me have control on my laughter, viji. Not able to stop. Imagining laksh/abhimanyu as a gollum. Still I'm in my laughing session.
True beta hona aur bete jaise hone mein bohot fark hai. Ap and Dp, though treated sanskar like a son, werealways partial for their sons. They have differentiated between blood and water. How much relationship is thick, it is not their own. This they both have surely proved time and again.
Dadi ki parchayi was all set to marry nikhil. Itni jaldi pyar badal gaya kya. But laksh was back to save his ring..oops..his precious ragini ๐Ÿ˜†. Where are swara and sanskar. Jaldi unhe is mental family se mukti mil jaye. Send them off to some desert area. None can find them. Roothna manana wo dono wahi kar lenge. How is my idea ๐Ÿ˜‰.
Love u loads
Nivi



Nivi my dear ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—


Glad I could make you laugh with this part...I was giggling when I wrote it too. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† Oh yes, Abhi/Lucky is Gollum / Smeagol. ๐Ÿคฃ And he had come right on time to rescue his ring. ...oops, his Ragu...from Bilbo Baggins...err...Nikhil from Canada. ๐Ÿ˜‰

AP and DP...at one level, they are doing only something which any parent would do. After all, their own sons would matter more to them than their nephew, it's only natural, though they do hold Sanskaar in a lot of affection and regard. But the issue is, they keep pretending that they love him no less than their own sons...and keep repeating that lie again, again and again...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Sanskaar and Swara...you will see where they are, in Part 2. Since this is set in July 2017, and the irritant of Nikhil is no longer between them; they would have already reconciled in the meantime. What they are up to in this precise moment, I will reveal in the next part. ๐Ÿ˜‰ There might be some surprises there, with Swara being surprised by a stranger. ...or perhaps not really a stranger ? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

You made my weekend with your lovely words. ๐Ÿค—

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res'ing for part 1. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Unresed. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Gawwd Viji!! ๐Ÿ˜† What was this?? ๐Ÿ˜† I loved the madness at the Maheshwari Kingdom...oops...Maheshwari household. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† And I can totally imagine Rags as Cleopatra. ๐Ÿ˜› Gollum oh no Abh...oops sorry Laksh. ๐Ÿคฃ Nikhil and his Canadian accent! ๐Ÿ˜† And what do I say about Sujju, Punnu and Duggu?? ๐Ÿคช Punnu made poor Uttu run with her preggy belly for calling the shield and sword oh no her Bhai Sanskar and Bhabhi Swara for clearing the chaos made by her li'l lamb Lucky and Nikhil for clamming her daughter like DIL Ragu. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Eagerly waiting for the return of the King along with his Queen. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Update soon. ๐Ÿ˜› Thanks for the pm. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
With love,
Aheli.


Aheli sweetheart ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Lots of crazy things going on in the Maheshwari empire. ...errrmmm. ..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ˆ Maheshwari mansion, no? ๐Ÿคฃ Oh yes, Abhi/Lucky is Gollum/ Smeagol ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
He has come just in time, to rescue his ring...errrmmm ...๐Ÿ˜ˆHis preciousss Ragu----from Bilbo Baggins, aka Nikhil with a Canadian accent. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Annupunnu the Dowager Empress was so furious seeing Nikhil trying to fight with Abhi, for Ragu . ๐Ÿ˜‰ She realized, from Abhi's insane chant, that he was her wee little ram lamb, cutie pie Lucky. So as usual, she summons Sanskaar to fight the battles on their behalf, to suffer cuts and bruises in order to rescue Lucky, and the family. But she and DP don't realize, that the Fates have decreed----The Time for the Return of the King , has come. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Maharana Sanskaar . ...wearing that saffron bandhgala/ jodhpuri coat...๐Ÿคช ๐Ÿ˜ณ

You made my day with your lovely words, Aheli dear. ๐Ÿค—โ˜บ๏ธ

Lots of Love

Viji


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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Dear Viji ..๐Ÿค—

OMG .. ROFL ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
My stomach hurt from all the laughing .. I still laughing while writing this words .. ๐Ÿคฃ

The lines you used and the Emotions you used in the middle .. I loved this .. ๐Ÿ˜†

At the last the encounter between Ragini ( the ring ) , Abhi/Lucky ( the gollum ) and Nikhil .. ๐Ÿคฃ
My mother did cast me a worried look from all the laughing ..

Every weird thing happens in the Maheshwari Kingdom -- oops the Maheshwari house .. ๐Ÿ˜†

I have a lot to say .. but with all this laughing I can't write in a proper way .. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Waiting for the king to make his entry ..๐Ÿ˜‰

Love
Khushi



My Dearest Khushi ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—


So glad I could make you laugh with this chapter. ๐Ÿ˜† I was giggling and grinning to myself when I typed it out. ๐Ÿคฃ

Really thrilled to know you loved the encounter between the One ring (Ragu); Gollum/Smeagol (Abhi/Lucky) and Bilbo Baggins (Nikhil) ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†

And yes, complete madness going on in the Maheshwari Empire...errrmmm ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ˆ Maheshwari House. ๐Ÿ˜‰

The KING will make his entry in Part 2. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿคช

Lots of Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago
#44


Sorry for being late along Viji dear..I wanted to read it the first thing i got up in the morning and let you know my take right after that as one more res will haunt me


I loved it and i was literally ๐Ÿคฃ throughtout.. I know my precious will come soon enough, no reference from LOTR can be as awesome as My Precious๐Ÿ˜‰... But i loved it here LuX as Gollum ..Hmmm i think Gollum as brain more than Lux but still it was awesome especially his last entry and his insanse chatter that was epic



Nikhil is Bilbo Baggins..๐Ÿคฃ...And Ragini is the ring Well that was such awesome connections you did.. Amazing..๐Ÿคฃ..Can i say i loved loved reading Nikhil and Rags love story..It was so good.. ๐Ÿคฃ..Especially Rags as cleopatra and her tears spot on it was like watching that scene right before my eyes, no wonder Nikhil fell for it ๐Ÿ˜†



DP and AP being DP and AP.. Bang on .This two idiots.. And Uttara is preganant ๐Ÿ˜ณ ..Suju wanted to be best Grand Mom ..I loved all those moments..So king will return next part and i am very eager to read about him.. I will wait till monday as that when you said you will post but me super excited to read it


Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: NitaReid



Sorry for being late along Viji dear..I wanted to read it the first thing i got up in the morning and let you know my take right after that as one more res will haunt me


I loved it and i was literally ๐Ÿคฃ throughtout.. I know my precious will come soon enough, no reference from LOTR can be as awesome as My Precious๐Ÿ˜‰... But i loved it here LuX as Gollum ..Hmmm i think Gollum as brain more than Lux but still it was awesome especially his last entry and his insanse chatter that was epic



Nikhil is Bilbo Baggins..๐Ÿคฃ...And Ragini is the ring Well that was such awesome connections you did.. Amazing..๐Ÿคฃ..Can i say i loved loved reading Nikhil and Rags love story..It was so good.. ๐Ÿคฃ..Especially Rags as cleopatra and her tears spot on it was like watching that scene right before my eyes, no wonder Nikhil fell for it ๐Ÿ˜†



DP and AP being DP and AP.. Bang on .This two idiots.. And Uttara is preganant ๐Ÿ˜ณ ..Suju wanted to be best Grand Mom ..I loved all those moments..So king will return next part and i am very eager to read about him.. I will wait till monday as that when you said you will post but me super excited to read it


Love

Nita



My Dearest Nita ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—


No sorry between pals ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ณ If you start saying sorry, I have to say a truckload for my still pending un res on gee of your works ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ญ. Will get down to them asap, after I wrap up part 2 of this Drabble. I plan to take a 10 to 15 day hiatus from writing to recharge; so at that time will catch up with pending un res. ๐Ÿ˜Š

I am so very thrilled to know that you loved this chapter, and that it made you laugh a lot. I was giggling and grinning while typing this chapter. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ

Yup, I couldn't resist imagining Abhi/Lucky as Gollum/Smeagol. ๐Ÿ˜† He is so possessive of his preciousss ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ ring...errrmmm ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ˆ Ragu. ๐Ÿ˜†

Ragu can make a wonderfully beautiful and dramatic Cleopatra na? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Can just imagine her having those poignant tears in her eyes, those powerful dialogues, and dramatically clutching a cobra to her arm or her bosom. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

Nikhil is Bilbo Baggins, totally captivated by the One Ring...Ragu of course. ๐Ÿ˜‰ He was clean bowled, hit for a 6, by Ragini. ๐Ÿ˜‰

AP/DP...they are always partial towards their own sons. They are trying to prevent the rightful King from being crowned; they favor Lucky and Adarsh after all. But the time for the Return of the King has come. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰ The KING will make his grand entry in the next chapter. ๐Ÿ˜‰ You can guess who this would be, surely. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Sujju is certainly eager to be the best Grandma ๐Ÿ˜Š She plans to pamper Uttara's little baby with utmost indulgence. ๐Ÿ˜Š

You made my Sunday, my dear ๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ

Loads of Love

Viji


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum



Aheli sweetheart๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Lots of crazy things going on in the Maheshwari empire. ...errrmmm. ..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ˆMaheshwari mansion, no?๐ŸคฃOh yes, Abhi/Lucky is Gollum/ Smeagol ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
He has come just in time, to rescue his ring...errrmmm ...๐Ÿ˜ˆHis preciousss Ragu----from Bilbo Baggins, aka Nikhil with a Canadian accent.๐Ÿ˜‰

Annupunnu the Dowager Empress was so furious seeing Nikhil trying to fight with Abhi, for Ragu .๐Ÿ˜‰She realized, from Abhi's insane chant, that he was her wee little ram lamb, cutie pie Lucky. So as usual, she summons Sanskaar to fight the battles on their behalf, to suffer cuts and bruises in order to rescue Lucky, and the family. But she and DP don't realize, that the Fates have decreed----The Time for the Return of the King , has come.๐Ÿ˜‰

Maharana Sanskaar . ...wearing that saffron bandhgala/ jodhpuri coat...๐Ÿคช๐Ÿ˜ณ

You made my day with your lovely words, Aheli dear.๐Ÿค—โ˜บ๏ธ

Lots of Love

Viji



๐Ÿ˜† Viji darling!! ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I hate the word..So wont use it but i am here as always
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Viji di...๐Ÿคฃ you are awesome...ragini ka ring bana dia๐Ÿคฃ luccckkyyy is back to take his ring ๐Ÿคฃ nikhil ki mehnat pani me going I guess๐Ÿคฃ kyunki yeh moh moh ke dhaage sirf lakshya ji se uljhe๐Ÿคฃ

Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My place for part 2. ๐Ÿ˜›
Unresed. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I know its very late. ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Lol!! What Uttu was thinking about Abhi err... her Laksh Bhai's behavior!! ๐Ÿ˜†
SwaSan moments were my fav one!! Liked it how Sanskar was talking to Swara as 'SK' about her 'Sanskar', as if he is someone else, not Swara's own husband!! And how Swara defended her 'Sanskar'!! ๐Ÿ˜› Their moments together were teasing and so hot! โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ Uttu's reaction after seeing her Sanskar Bhai and Swara Bhabhi doing ahem ahem!! ๐Ÿ˜† โ˜บ๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜› Sanskar's weapon towards AP-DP for helping Laksh was mindblowing!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yeah, why should he always be their knight in shining armor whe he don't get anything in return from them?? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜‰ Then starts the question answer session of solving riddles between two err... three of them - Abhi, Laksh and Nikhil to win their 'Ring' oops... Ragu! ๐Ÿ˜† That part where Abhi/Lucky utters that "Can we raise two handsss?" That part was ROLF!! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ But poor them! All the answers were given by their 'Ring' Ragu. ๐Ÿ˜› Finally all the madness ended with 'Ring' Ragu going to Baadi with her Maa and Papa, unhappy that none of the two err... three could claim their 'Ring' Ragu. ๐Ÿ˜› Good that our king and queen - Sanskar and Swara left for Hyatt Regency that moment only leaving behind the Mentaleshwaris and Gadhadias!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜›
U made me go ROLF throughout the story Viji dear!! ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ I loved it so much!! โค๏ธ Thanks for the pm. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
With love!! ๐Ÿค—
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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