'The Return of the King'--A SwaSan/Abhi/Ragini/Nikhil 2S UPDT PG 7 - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Finally unresed part 2 @7. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Aheli sweetheart ๐Ÿค—


Loved reading your comment, glad I could make you laugh with this 2S. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ƒWill reply on your comment in detail, tomorrow.

Loads of Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum



Aheli sweetheart๐Ÿค—


Loved reading your comment, glad I could make you laugh with this 2S. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ƒWill reply on your comment in detail, tomorrow.

Loads of Love

Viji


No need to hurry Viji dearest, take ur time. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


No need to hurry Viji dearest, take ur time. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Thanks for understanding, Aheli my dear โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

My place for part 2. ๐Ÿ˜›
Unresed. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I know its very late. ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Lol!! What Uttu was thinking about Abhi err... her Laksh Bhai's behavior!! ๐Ÿ˜†
SwaSan moments were my fav one!! Liked it how Sanskar was talking to Swara as 'SK' about her 'Sanskar', as if he is someone else, not Swara's own husband!! And how Swara defended her 'Sanskar'!! ๐Ÿ˜› Their moments together were teasing and so hot! โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ Uttu's reaction after seeing her Sanskar Bhai and Swara Bhabhi doing ahem ahem!! ๐Ÿ˜† โ˜บ๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜› Sanskar's weapon towards AP-DP for helping Laksh was mindblowing!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yeah, why should he always be their knight in shining armor whe he don't get anything in return from them?? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜‰ Then starts the question answer session of solving riddles between two err... three of them - Abhi, Laksh and Nikhil to win their 'Ring' oops... Ragu! ๐Ÿ˜† That part where Abhi/Lucky utters that "Can we raise two handsss?" That part was ROLF!! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ But poor them! All the answers were given by their 'Ring' Ragu. ๐Ÿ˜› Finally all the madness ended with 'Ring' Ragu going to Baadi with her Maa and Papa, unhappy that none of the two err... three could claim their 'Ring' Ragu. ๐Ÿ˜› Good that our king and queen - Sanskar and Swara left for Hyatt Regency that moment only leaving behind the Mentaleshwaris and Gadhadias!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜›
U made me go ROLF throughout the story Viji dear!! ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ I loved it so much!! โค๏ธ Thanks for the pm. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
With love!! ๐Ÿค—
Aheli.



My Dearest Aheli ๐Ÿค—

I am so very glad to know that you loved this chapter. I was giggling and grinning to myself when I wrote it, so I was very happy to know that you loved reading it, too. ๐Ÿ˜Š I am thrilled that you were going ROFL at this. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I wanted to make the SwaSan scenes rather tantalizing and hot. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Very thrilled to know that you liked 'SK's' banter with Swara. He certainly is tantalizing her with his Sunny and SK avatars. ๐Ÿ˜†

Very true, why should Sanskaar always be the loyal knight for DP and AP when they treat him so shoddily? He is not trying to snatch anything from them of course, nor from Adarsh/ Lucky. He is just claiming what he himself built with the fruits of his toil and diligence; his single minded focus. He deserves to have Karma & Co. back again; the family never ever assisted him in this endeavor. And he definitely deserves a larger share in the profits of Maheshwari & Sons, he is the one driving the business, after all. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Very glad to know you loved the riddles. ๐Ÿ˜† They are from 'The Hobbit'. ๐Ÿ˜Š Yes, the Ring...ermm...Ragu ๐Ÿ˜‰ decided that she was too good for either...errrmmm...any of the 3---Nikhil, Abhi or Lucky. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜‰

The True King and Queen celebrate the end of the madness by taking an extended weekend off (maybe even 4--5 days ๐Ÿ˜†) to the Hyatt Regency Duplex, 2-level suite. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I am really touched by your feedback, dear. Made me feel on top of the world. ๐Ÿค—

Loads of Love,

-----Viji


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum



<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">My Dearest Aheli ๐Ÿค—

I am so very glad to know that you loved this chapter. I was giggling and grinning to myself when I wrote it, so I was very happy to know that you loved reading it, too. ๐Ÿ˜Š I am thrilled that you were going ROFL at this. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I wanted to make the SwaSan scenes rather tantalizing and hot. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Very thrilled to know that you liked 'SK's' banter with Swara. He certainly is tantalizing her with his Sunny and SK avatars. ๐Ÿ˜†

Very true, why should Sanskaar always be the loyal knight for DP and AP when they treat him so shoddily? He is not trying to snatch anything from them of course, nor from Adarsh/ Lucky. He is just claiming what he himself built with the fruits of his toil and diligence; his single minded focus. He deserves to have Karma & Co. back again; the family never ever assisted him in this endeavor. And he definitely deserves a larger share in the profits of Maheshwari & Sons, he is the one driving the business, after all. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Very glad to know you loved the riddles. ๐Ÿ˜† They are from 'The Hobbit'. ๐Ÿ˜Š Yes, the Ring...ermm...Ragu ๐Ÿ˜‰ decided that she was too good for either...errrmmm...any of the 3---Nikhil, Abhi or Lucky. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜‰

The True King and Queen celebrate the end of the madness by taking an extended weekend off (maybe even 4--5 days ๐Ÿ˜†) to the Hyatt Regency Duplex, 2-level suite. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I am really touched by your feedback, dear. Made me feel on top of the world.๐Ÿค—

Loads of Love,

-----Viji


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I'm glad that u liked my comment dearie. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Viji siso this is for u!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Viji
I wanted a stress buster today and chose to read your return of the king. God viji, I couldn't stop laughing,especially the way you portrayed lakshya/ Abhi. His dialogues !!!hilarious dear. Viji you are a master in romantic genre but you are the best when it comes to humour. Among all the writers of the forum ,you are the only one who excels in both genre. The Maheswari and gadodia are both equally nut cases. I loved the line about marriages and remarriages in the MM family. And Annapurna is a character which I despise eventhough they try to potray her as somewhat of a martyr in the show. I am happy you gave her a befitting role in this.
Thank-you dear for the wonderful read .
Veena.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Viji
I wanted a stress buster today and chose to read your return of the king. God viji, I couldn't stop laughing,especially the way you portrayed lakshya/ Abhi. His dialogues !!!hilarious dear. Viji you are a master in romantic genre but you are the best when it comes to humour. Among all the writers of the forum ,you are the only one who excels in both genre. The Maheswari and gadodia are both equally nut cases. I loved the line about marriages and remarriages in the MM family. And Annapurna is a character which I despise eventhough they try to potray her as somewhat of a martyr in the show. I am happy you gave her a befitting role in this.
Thank-you dear for the wonderful read .
Veena.


Hey Veena ๐Ÿค—


So very glad to know that this 2S gave you a good laugh. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜† And really happy that you liked the comic/ light hearted satirical take.

I was going all ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿคฃ when I wrote the Abhi/ Lucky scenes. So I am just thrilled to know they made you crack up too. ๐Ÿ˜Š

And I am going all ๐Ÿ˜ณโ˜บ๏ธ at your very warm words about my writing. The fact that you loved the different genres I attempted on SwaSan---means a lot. ๐Ÿค—

Lots of Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

I'm glad that u liked my comment dearie. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Viji siso this is for u!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

With love,
Aheli.
Aww...love you too, Aheli sweetheart ๐Ÿค—

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