'The Return of the King'--A SwaSan/Abhi/Ragini/Nikhil 2S UPDT PG 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I am here and will be back😊

And however firm a believer I am of the Fire and Water analogy, I do love your Water and Earth parallel too.😊

Part unres

I am not sure of any of the elements but mirth, and I have tears in my eyes. I am laughing so hard, difficult when I have to be silent, sitting beside my sleeping CM.

Ragini did suspect Abhimanyu to be Laksh and knew that he would reveal himself when his ring.. err.. Rags is going to be claimed by someone else.

But jokes aside, I loved the line, Being a son and being like a son, world of difference. And the twist, of AP and DP sternly resolve not to hand over the kingdom -oops - the fortunes to the steward (a beautiful and very tangential reference to Boromir / Faramir /Denthor - that is what struck me. I loved Faramir's character, cannot exactly say why, but I simply do)

Throwing the hanky, definitely, no towels allowed (BTW your ghandharva in a hanky rather than a towel😈 - blows your imagination😉)

I will get back with a detailed comment, my CM might wake up anytime

love you loads,
Nyna



Bwahahaha 😆🤣 Am so glad you were giggling at this...I was snorting and grinning while typing this, but then I have lost it today 😉😃

Ragu certainly expected her Abhi...errrmmm Lucky...errrmmm Gollum 😈, would come for her. Especially when she was being claimed by Nikhil ermmm Bilbo Baggins 😉

Yeah...a world of difference between being a child and being like a child. I don't blame DP and AP for being partial to the sons of their own flesh as opposed to the son after their own hearts. Certain biological impulses are hard codes in genes, after all. They can and do feel that Sanskaar is far superior to their progeny...and they do, I think, wish that he had been born their son indeed. But when push comes to shove...its always Lucky first, then Adarsh. And last Sanskaar. Massive pity, but there it is.

Where I do get bugged with AP especially, and next DP...is their repeated, vehement , holier than though assertion that they love Sanskaar just as much as their own sons. It's not true, not by a long chalk. Sanskaar knows it, much to his chagrin and dull ache---the disappointment has become so much a part of his self, that he just keeps on lavishing more adoration and respect on them, hoping for reciprocation. Or maybe not even hoping for that, anymore. 😭

Loved that you loved that dialogue---the tangential reference was indeed to Denethor, and by extension, Boromir and Faramir. This is a dialogue between Gandalf and Denethor; when Gandalf angrily points out that Denethor is merely steward, caretaker of Gondor. He does not have the right to deny the Return of the King (Strider as he is known then, the Ranger from the North. In reality, Aragon, son of Arathorn, heir of Isildur).

Faramir is one of my favorite characters too. 😳😊The way he struggles against his father's overfeeding partiality to Boromir; and yet does not let his own love for his elder brother waver or descend to jealousy and envy . ...it is so very admirable. Shades of Sanskaar in Faramir; Lucky or Boromir, and DP/AP in Denethor. Of course, in the context of this Drabble, I conceptualised Sunny more as Aragon, with some elements of Faramir. 😉 Return of the King , after all. And what a Maharana he would be. 😉

Oh yes, throw in the hanky only, no towel. 😳😉 And Nynu...Gandharva in hanky and not towel huh? ☺️🤪 Yikes . ...now our imaginations are running away with us. 😆🤣 I devoutly hope that hanky is strategically positioned and of a considerable enough size to----ahem!----cover his family jewels. 😉 Let's not wish otherwise...only Swara has viewing and ownership rights over chotte Sanskaar after all...if you know what I really mean. 😉

Hope your CM is sleeping soundly and peacefully. 🤗 Give him a cuddle from me.

Loads of Love

Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Dear Viji ..🤗

OMG .. ROFL 🤣 🤣
My stomach hurt from all the laughing .. I still laughing while writing this words .. 🤣

The lines you used and the Emotions you used in the middle .. I loved this .. 😆

At the last the encounter between Ragini ( the ring ) , Abhi/Lucky ( the gollum ) and Nikhil .. 🤣
My mother did cast me a worried look from all the laughing ..

Every weird thing happens in the Maheshwari Kingdom -- oops the Maheshwari house .. 😆

I have a lot to say .. but with all this laughing I can't write in a proper way .. 😆😆

Waiting for the king to make his entry ..😉

Love
Khushi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Khushi 🤗

Thrilled to know you loved it, dear 🤗Made my Saturday night. 😊 Just hitting bed, so shall reply in detail tomorrow.

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum



Saku darling🤗😳


So thrilled this met with your seal of approval🤗

And I was going all😆🤣, imagining Abhi/Lucky as Gollum/ Smeagol.😉Ragu is the 'One Ring' of course😉And Nikhil is Bilbo Baggins😆🤣




Now we just need Frodo to throw the ring into flames and of cause the king to return...
May I dare imagine what Swara and Sanskar are upto when they are supposed to be risking their necks for the Maheshwaries? 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24


Now we just need Frodo to throw the ring into flames and of cause the king to return...
May I dare imagine what Swara and Sanskar are upto when they are supposed to be risking their necks for the Maheshwaries? 😳


Oh yes, please imagine 😳😈 I can tell you, they will be kind of caught in a minor in flagrante delicto 😉


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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
This is an amazing concept..
LOTR is not one of my favorite movies...
But as Swasan are here...
I am in..

Ap is like this always..true.
Cool start

Thanks dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

This is an amazing concept..
LOTR is not one of my favorite movies...
But as Swasan are here...
I am in..

Ap is like this always..true.
Cool start

Thanks dear



Hey Bhardwaj 🤗🤗


Very happy to know you loved it. And AP is always partial towards her own sons, DP too, for that matter. They claim that they love Sanskaar 'like' their own son; but being 'like a son' is not the same as actually being a son! 😕

Will be back with Part 2, on Monday, all going well. Have a wonderful weekend!

Cheers

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My Dearest Aheli and Khushi 🤗

Tried replying now but I am just too sleepy to type coherently. 😊 So shall revert on Sunday. Have a wonderful weekend. 😊

Loads of Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ok here after long time and i am welcomed bybthis ..
Uff my LUCkY Day

Loved it dear

It irkes me tht sanskr call annapurna maa she is not worthy of that
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwathyS

Ok here after long time and i am welcomed bybthis ..

Uff my LUCkY Day

Loved it dear

It irkes me tht sanskr call annapurna maa she is not worthy of that



Hey Swathy 🤗🤗


Great to see you on a thread after such a long time. 😊 😳Hope all is well with you.


So happy you loved this a lot. Will be back with Part 2 on Monday (all going well), hope you would like that too.

And I completely agree...Annapurna treats Sanskaar just as an aunt would, not truly as a mother. She deserves to be addressed as badi ma, as per what the relation actually is. She certainly does not deserve to be called Ma, by him.

Cheers

Viji
Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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