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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Novo..

So sweet part...loved it...have dida ever met sanky??than she must have known he is a good guy n swara must be happy with him...that why she did not ask much question...

Overall liked a lot

Love

Talia

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Nivijo

AP is a character of multiple shades. Don't know why the cvs didn't handle her character properly. She's almost like Shivagami of Bahubali. A lady who can be a mother and a queen at the same time.
@bold- you made me blush with this comment. And there are many more writers whom I admire and get inspired from. We have a bunch of wonderfully talented writers in our forum, isn't it.
Did I get you hooked to their love angle? No worries try and guess while I unravel it in my snail pace 😆 .
Love,
Nivi

Dont worry 😛 will wait...

As for know I see update 5 is up...happy dance 😆

And as for the bold it's true...The list of writers can go on...truly everyone that post here is just awesome 😊

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Okay dear will say I loved the update but why so short...not fair...

So let me take a guess will dida play cupid in the end...

God first this twist and then there love angle what next...

But seriously loved the family element..."care is showing we dare to question...assuring is letting the person know we are there"

This is all I will say about our loveable sanskaar :)

Waiting

Razia

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Sushma98999
lovly simple sober part

Thank you so much. I'm glad you loved it.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Novo..
So sweet part...loved it...have dida ever met sanky??than she must have known he is a good guy n swara must be happy with him...that why she did not ask much question...

Overall liked a lot

Love
Talia

Thank you so much, Talia. I'm glad you loved it. Yes, Dida met Sanskar. Only one. But elders' eyes are too sharp because of experience. So, when she saw honesty in Swara's eyes she understood that her granddaughter was safe and happy with Sanskar. Hence, no more questions from her side.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: raaz19
Okay dear will say I loved the update but why so short...not fair...
So let me take a guess will dida play cupid in the end...

God first this twist and then there love angle what next...

But seriously loved the family element..."care is showing we dare to question...assuring is letting the person know we are there"

This is all I will say about our loveable sanskaar :)

Waiting

Razia

I know the update was short but I wanted to focus only on Dida and Swara and their relation and conversation. It might be kind of useful for both in future 😉. Love angle...no worries, keep guessing. There are few more twists (I assure very logical ones) in the story before Swasan move on in their life without the shadows of past lurking around them. I just loved the bold quote. It's so apt for Sanskar.

Chapter 6 is almost ready!

Love,

Nivi

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Hey Nivi,

First of all a hearty thank you for sending me the link for this story. Due to shortage of time I hardly follow stories anymore but this name actually caught my attention and I decided to give it a try.

Girl you are awesome.. I am liking the progress and story line very much. I read all the chapters in one go and found the story very gripping and intriguing. The character sketch you gave, changing the surface while keeping the base intact is superb.

The story is going on smooth yet a little rough over edges which I am loving to the core. From Swara's indecision and hesitation to the sheer acceptance lying hidden under the roof of friendship is the best part of the story. I am liking how it's proceeding.

I am not a regular reader. Sometimes I might miss commenting for few chapters in a row. Please consider it in a forgiving way and keep sending pms for the upcoming chapters...

Yours,

Eshaal

Edited by EshaalYousufzai - 8 years ago

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: EshaalYousufzai
Hey Nivi,

First of all a hearty thank you for sending me the link for this story. Due to shortage of time I hardly follow stories anymore but this name actually caught my attention and I decided to give it a try.

Girl you are awesome.. I am liking the progress and story line very much. I read all the chapters in one go and found the story very gripping and intriguing. The character sketch you gave, changing the surface while keeping the base intact is superb.

The story is going on smooth yet a little rough over edges which I am loving to the core. From Swara's indecision and hesitation to the sheer acceptance lying hidden under the roof of friendship is the best part of the story. I am liking how it's proceeding.

I am not a regular reader. Sometimes I might miss commenting for few chapters in a row. Please consider it in a forgiving way and keep sending pms for the upcoming chapters...

Yours,
Eshaal

Pleasure is all mine, Eshaal. I'm really glad to know that you loved the story. Well, this is my first story in matters of heavy emotions. So, I might stumble in between. But I'm know I have friends like you to become my anchor of my ship sinks. Their friendship will play an important role in realisation of love from both the sides. Story has just begun and I hope you find it even more interesting as the story takes the forward direction.

And don't worry about the comments. As I always say to my other friends, comments from dear one, however late, are always like an energy booster for me. So, no worries I'll be sending you pms like always.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Loving it

Thank you so much. I'm glad you loved it.

Love,

Nivi

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Nivijo

I know the update was short but I wanted to focus only on Dida and Swara and their relation and conversation. It might be kind of useful for both in future 😉. Love angle...no worries, keep guessing. There are few more twists (I assure very logical ones) in the story before Swasan move on in their life without the shadows of past lurking around them. I just loved the bold quote. It's so apt for Sanskar.
Chapter 6 is almost ready!
Love,
Nivi

Wow another chapter...so excited...

Thanks for lining the quote indeed it a hits him well😆

Of course will keep guessing it makes reading the updates more fun 😛