SwaSan OS:'I was Right, Yet i lost him'

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Superb update
Beautifully written
loved it

thnks for pm

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anotheranfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

I was just browsing the forum and read this. It touched me in multiple ways.. You have way with words and characters.. Bringing out the kind of deadlock between whats right, wrong, turmoil in both their lives with their own choices.. and the ending cant get any better.. there is so much left to imagination.. and above all it still shows the hope for them to be together whenever that might be.. Liked it a lot..

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Its painfull,its emotnal bt i lv it...
Well written nita..
Nw swara ll realize wht she did wid sanskar,hw hurt he z?
I knw in serial eventually swasan again cm 2gethr bt let her suffer the pain,,i knw she also suffering the longing 4m 6months..
Bt let her feel the pain whn ur partner walk out 4m u...
Lv it nita..

Thanks dearest 🤗... I am really happy to know you liked it even if it was painful and emotional for you.. Thanks for the compliments 😳.. Well i want her realize where she went wrong without that reunion is not gonna make me happy 😆... I dont want year of suffering just realize where she went wrong but i dont think we will get that in the show..So not hoping..But i am glad you loved this OS dear.. Thanks for the lovely comment

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice OS.. 👍🏼

Thanks Sneha dearest 🤗.. Really happy to know you liked the OS 😃

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very well written..

Thanks Mystic..Really happy to know you liked the OS😃

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: anu012
Superb update
Beautifully written
loved it

thnks for pm

Thanks Anu dearest🤗Really happy to know you liked the update.😃

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: fangirl-swasan
Dear Nita
I loved it. Was planning to write something similar but never found the time. I agree with Sansakr though what is love even if you only stay with a person when everything is right the real test is staying with someone when everything is wrong. However Swara has a tendency to doubt him when things go berserk. She needs to remember kay kahi dafa halat galatt hosaktay hain insan nahi. She tends to forget this in Sansakr's case that sometimes complicated circumstances force people to do things they don't normally do. Living alone for 6 months does warrant Sansakr loosing his faith in love. It's just that he loves her so intensely with unwavering faith she loves him but not in the same way. You write so well👏I want more stories from you😆
love
Sara

Hi Sara🤗

It been sometime that i havent seen you drabbles..I do miss reading those and also i am so very sorry for such a late reply back..Didnt mean to be this late.. 😭😭

You explained my emotions while writing this so much better because that how we feel i suppose..6 Months is an lot of time and we just cant ignore it even if we liked to do so..And you were spot on with Swara, But yesterday episode she did understand so that an huge win for us i suppose..Because i was worried that we would totally skip that part ..So good that they didnt skip it.. Thanks for the compliement dear.. I will write if i get an idea until then i am on hiatus 😆.. Thanks dear for your lovely comment , i am really happy to know you liked this OS

With lots of love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: raaz19
Lovely update...nice message even with times km wounds cannot be mended quickly...
And the anology of the puzzle pieces was awesome...like he said in your piece she will only truly know what she lost till the others left her..

The end made me a bit tearful but your skin on this particular moment was well worth the read...

Beautifully portrayed...

Take care razia

Hi Razia dearest🤗

Thanks dear Really happy to know you liked the OS..Yes some wounds need time and care i just hope cvs dont rush the reunion and consider the whole event has something that never happened.. Thanks..I am glad you liked the analogy of the puzzle piece..It is the truth ,For Swara sanskar is one important piece but she needs other piece to survive as well, while for sanskar if he lost Swara then there is no reason to survive.. Thanks once again for the lovely comment Razia dear

Lots of love

Nita

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Nita sweetie...

This was long overdue..finally im last ,here...but it was remarkable OS sweetheart..the point sanky raised were apt and bitter truth...best part was swara realised she was wrong..n asked for second chance...but ..just how title suggest she lost him...it was quite saddening...but still was litttle hope for swasan to reunite..i was hoping he will gave her chance ...but..antways ...it was very thoughtful..loved it...

Talia

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