SwaSan OS:'I was Right, Yet i lost him'

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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+ 19

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

@Aheli and Lucky dear-- So touched by your lovely comments...Will reply back to them tomorrow..Good Night guys..

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

@Tani dear- Really Happy to read your lovely comment will get back to it tomorrow..Me sleepy..Good Night dear

Edited by NitaReid - 8 years ago

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: NitaReid
@Aheli and Lucky dear-- So touched by your lovely comments...Will reply back to them tomorrow..Good Night guys..

Good night, sleep tight Nita dearest. 🥱 😉

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Will be back😊

I loved it, guess you are not as frustrated as I am with Swara, I did not have him forgive her till she... well you know. (I cried while I wrote and still did not change - Sadist ME).

The title is so apt and her attitude, even at that point she is not willing to actually concede where she went wrong. Sigh- she will not learn, will she.

I loved what Sanskaar said, you need not be right to love, being right and being able to love are two very different things, which I hope she does learn.

I will get back with a detailed comment, now off to read - slowly.

love,

Nyna

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showrav

@showrav24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Hi Nita dear
How r u!
look like it's raining of os.
beautiful os dear I like it but I want sanskar find laskh in the show.
like swasan conversation hope like this happen in the show.one line u write perfectly that for loving u u not need to be right bang on dear it's like tight slap on swara face.
need to sleep
Bye dear
Take care

Edited by showrav24 - 8 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

La la la! Will be back as soon as possible. This gave me the second round of sobs after the trigger being Nyna's os I read earlier. Will do a detailed take later...for now,
LOVED IT!!!

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Its painfull,its emotnal bt i lv it...
Well written nita..
Nw swara ll realize wht she did wid sanskar,hw hurt he z?
I knw in serial eventually swasan again cm 2gethr bt let her suffer the pain,,i knw she also suffering the longing 4m 6months..
Bt let her feel the pain whn ur partner walk out 4m u...
Lv it nita..

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fangirl-swasan

@fangirl-swasan

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Dear Nita

I loved it. Was planning to write something similar but never found the time. I agree with Sansakr though what is love even if you only stay with a person when everything is right the real test is staying with someone when everything is wrong. However Swara has a tendency to doubt him when things go berserk. She needs to remember kay kahi dafa halat galatt hosaktay hain insan nahi. She tends to forget this in Sansakr's case that sometimes complicated circumstances force people to do things they don't normally do. Living alone for 6 months does warrant Sansakr loosing his faith in love. It's just that he loves her so intensely with unwavering faith she loves him but not in the same way. You write so well👏I want more stories from you😆

love

Sara

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Lovely update...nice message even with times km wounds cannot be mended quickly...

And the anology of the puzzle pieces was awesome...like he said in your piece she will only truly know what she lost till the others left her..

The end made me a bit tearful but your skin on this particular moment was well worth the read...

Beautifully portrayed...

Take care razia

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ErangaMadhushani

@Eranga

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Nita dear,

You made me cry.. 😭 Seriously, I was alredy in a off mood with all those talks about Swaragini will go off air bcoz of low TRP.. 😭
I think I crossed the line, and I can't think a day without SwaSan. And always ready to bear any crap story of serial, just for glimpse of SwaSan.. ❤️
So those last lines, Because their story cant end like this.. And he did say-" u r special for me and i want our story to be special and after we leave i want people to remember Swara and Sanskaar" ..So how can it end like that..
😭 😭 Rubbing salt in the wound.. 😡

And it's so amazing how you write these OSs with different concepts, to the same track.. 👏 From the beginning, I was on Swara's side.. I kept thinking what wrong she did.. trying to unite "his" family at the earliest, coz after his ego and anger vanished, he's the one who going to miss his family badly.. But your one line of Sanskar, changed my POV..
I didnt need you to be right to love you, i just needed you to be my side without leaving me..
So thanks for that..
This is really beautiful dear.. Keep writing and keep sending me PMs.. 😉

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