Sanskaar's Monologues---The Dark Storm--Updt PG 1 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
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My Dearest Shru 🤗🤗

So thrilled to see you on this thread, hope work has eased up a bit. 😊🤗And that you have settled in well into your new home.

Saal mubarak. 🤗 Since I am pretty much half asleep now, I shall reply to your lovely and detailed comment within next couple of days.

Lots of Love

Viji


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Once again AMAZING job done by Nyna & Lucky so BEAUTIFULLY for an AWESOME piece of Viji's!
You ladies are extremely brilliant!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My Dearest Sneha and Nupur 🤗🤗🤗


Thanks a lot dears. 🤗 The creations by Lucky and Nynu are superb indeed. ☺️


Lots of Love

---Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Viji,

Whenever I see Swaragini now-a-days sometime or the other it naturally comes to my mind that if the CVs have read your stories and taken their inspiration, but every time I read one of your stories a new side of our Sanskar comes up that blows always my mind..

True to the beautiful banners you posted just now he is the extreme..in everything he do..his personality is like the vastness of sky and his thoughts have the depth of the deepest ocean..and you always do justice to it..u knw earliest I used to think I loved Sanskar for what he is by watching him in it..but now whenever I relate to him I always have the Sanskar of your stories..so powerful, so much intensity who can be an Angel and a devil at the same time, you make us love him even more..whenever I think I have understood his personality you always bring a new side of him..

Coming to the drabble, you always make me speechless..the beginning was so powerful a nd heart wrenching,the way he consoles himself that Swara has is no longer with him, she could have done anything but she choose to leave him somewhere knowing he will suffer the most when she will not be with him..

Very truly said wounds never heal,its just that we get used to live with them..they become a constant reminder, with time we can learn to forget the pain, but the ache is always there and Sanskar wounds run so deep..that even if Swara tries and heal them, they will still be there..a reminder of what she has done..

That call seriously took my breath away, intensity at its peak, anguish was reflecting from his every action and I think Swara gasp of pain clearly told that even she was surprised that her actions were so powerful that they had ripped him apart from inside, if only she would have though I'd the ramifications of her actions, what it would do to him..

That was beautiful really how Sanskar drinks even reminds of her, he would never be able to forget her no matter what he does, everything action or everything in one form or other will remind him of her..When she came in his life he was a devil, she changed him into an angel, he was her Knight, her love and soulmate and then when she left him, it had turned him into an empty shell filled with bitterness and hatred..for he her family always came first, it is understandable that she didn't had her family but due to that keeping Sanskar always below her family really is foolish, what can't for once he can be above everyone else, totally agree with you that the dependency of their relationship lies on Lakshya return , she once taught him the importance of Sindoor and now she herself, for once I want to see her just placing Sanskar at his top most priority, he can lay down his everything for her but she, and now he is all set to ruin her, he knows he will be destroying himself along with her but I don't think it is going to stop him..

The lines where he is says he will be asking pain for her at prayer tore my heart, he is really broken into se many pieces that it can a lifetime for Swara to bring them together, but even in this quest of hurting her,bringing her tears, will bring more pain to him and truly said even after everything his heart still beats for her and it will never be able to hate her because its made to love her always..

Heartbreakingly beautiful..you make me speechless every time..

Love,
Piya


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Posted: 8 years ago
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My Dearest Piya 🤗🤗

I am so immensely touched with your comment, I feel I'm floating right now. 😳☺️ Am caught in a lot of commitments today, will reply later when I have adequate time for a response which this lovely comment that truly merits.

You've really made my evening. 🤗😳

Lots of Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aahana133

Simply it's superb...



Thanks Aahana 🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nita my dear 🤗🤗


Love you for those warm and motivating words...well, I love you anyway 😳🤗 So immensely touched yaar, you made the start of today so very pleasant for me.

I shall reply in detail later, am going full steam ahead now to make some progress on 'Solaris Rising'. 😊

Lots of Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum


Nita my dear 🤗🤗


Love you for those warm and motivating words...well, I love you anyway 😳🤗 So immensely touched yaar, you made the start of today so very pleasant for me.

I shall reply in detail later, am going full steam ahead now to make some progress on 'Solaris Rising'. 😊

Lots of Love

Viji


I love you too Viji dear.. Me to wrote an OS.. On Swara again.. I can't seem to stop writing.. Will post it soon I think.. But I am really waiting for Solaris rising from you..


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Posted: 8 years ago
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My dearies - Viji, Lucky and Nyna, u 3 simply leave me speechless with ur works!! 😳 Those writings and banners!! Hats off to u 3!! Go girls!! 🤗 🤗 🤗
Love u all!! ❤️
- Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Viji,

Reading your works after very long. My sincere apologies for not being able to read earlier. Thank you for your pm and I promise to clear them slowly.

Like it's said, closer the knife, deeper the wound. No matter how much Sanskaar psyches himself, he can't separate Swara from his being.

The comparison of SwaSan to Demon and Angel always gets to me. I can't help but think, every action of Swara are named angelic while every action of Sanskaar are named demonic. It's a balance of both in all, and Swara and Sanskaar are not exclusions.

The anger that broke their relationship is one such example. It's what Swara blames for chasing away Lakshya, while Sanskaar blames that very anger for breaking their marriage.

Sanskaar is right in thinking that Swara will easily go back to normal as if nothing happened. However it will not be easy for Sanskaar to time and again forget that her trust in him is less that one in 100 and their love is of least priority to her, in his books.

How to love someone who doesn't believe in you? That's heart wrenching. Yet he can never hate Swara for his own good.

Wonderful piece of writing. Keep writing!

Cheers
Sharon


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