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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thanks for liking it raz😊

He is already coming out of that shell😳

Will surely pm you

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Thanks looking forward to it already 😛
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Thanks looking forward to it already 😛

No worry next chapter will be updated tomorrow itself😉
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Chapter 7

{An unforgettable journey}



Sanskaar was walking around in the jungle...when he heard someone screaming for help. He followed the voice and realized that it was coming from somewhere around waterfall. When he reached there he saw swara was hanging on a tree and was calling for help...before he could do anything she felt down with a splash sound in water.


"Tara..."sanskaar screamed and woke up with a jerk

"aaa...wha...what happened bhai"lakshya felt down from bed because of sudden noise "did you saw any ghost bhai" lakshya asked and rotated his eyes in all direction

"Lakshya... I saw swara drowning in water...let me call and check upon her"sanskaar said checking his mobile before he could dial number lakshya snatched his mobile...

"Bhai...have you gone insane just see the time"lakshya pointed toward the clock which was showing 3:30 a.m. "just go to sleep...and let others also sleep...it was just a dream"lakshya said covering himself from toe to head

"Maybe you are right...it was just a dream"sanskaar said trying to sleep again






Somewhere in a dark place a woman was sitting on a rock chair remembering her past


"Mom see I got this beautiful rose from kaka"kid said showing a beautiful rose to her mom

"Wow...Beta it's really beautiful...hmmm what are you gonna do with this "her mom asked

"Mom I am gonna keep it in my favorite book as bookmarkkid said

The kid ran to the stairs when the lady heard a cry "maaa... when she reached near she saw the child lying in a pool of blood and screamed "ananya...



Her thoughts were broken when someone switched on the lights

"Maa...What are you doing here this late

"Nothing much I was reading something and fell asleep

"Oh..Ok go to your room and sleep tight mom

"Ok...Ragini mata

"Mom...





Yesterday I saw a dream in which I saw her drowning but I don't know why I shouted tara instead of swara .l saw swara entering the college gate but before I could talk to her somebody called me but I am satisfied seeing her alright. It felt like now I can also breathe.






Days passed by and now today was the day their unforgettable journey begins. Their journey started at night,so most of the journey was covered during night time. Next day all of them were enjoying to their heart's content sanskar was not interested in their silly games and swara was more interested in looking out of the window so swara was sitting next to sanskar, Ragini with lakshya and kavya with rahul.




I was looking out of the window when my eyes became heavy and I fell asleep I saw myself lying in pool of blood inside a temple and a woman crying sitting there before I could notice anything else I was awake because of sudden jerk. I opened my eyes and saw the same temple and a very old woman sitting there. I thought it was a coincidence and ignored it but I don't know why I feel she was the same woman which I dreamt a second before...maybe it's my hallucinations but this place it's giving me odd feeling as if I have been here before I don't know why but I am feeling that this holds answers to my questions...




"Swara... Swara what are you thinking sanskar asked broking her thoughts

"Hmmm... Nothing I was just watching this place isn't it beautiful

"Yes it is... but are you sure you were thinking only this much...You were thinking so deeply as if you have to save our planet from some alien invasion sanskar said laughing

"Sanskar...hahaha swara also started laughing " Do you believe in destiny swara asked

"No...Swara" sanskar said looking out of the window "but I do believe our karma catches up one day sanskar said

"Maybe...You are right swara said their conversation was stopped in between because of an halt.

"Did we reached Ragini shouted

"Yes...Now let's get down one of the teacher said






All of them got their luggage and checked in hotel rooms. It was afternoon but all of them were tired so it took no time to get into a deep sleep. After dinner their teacher told them their schedule. They were going to camp in jungle side area for two days then on 3rd day it was scheduled for roaming in village area 4th day main city and then back to home.






Next morning as usual beautiful for all of them,they were ready to explore jungle. All of them settled their tents and gathered around.





"Gather around guys we have plenty of staple food items with us...But who will cook it is the main question. professor said

"I don't wanna do it everyone started whispering in crowd

"I know no one wants to do it that's why we will do it your way. Swara,sanskar,ragini,kavya and lakshya come this way. You guys are group 1. professor said and made 5 more groups.

"Here...It's your clue and a walkie talkie in case you guys get lost. Professor said giving the clue in lakshya hand and then other groups. "Whosoever group will find the clue can come back the last group will be doing all the chores

"Ok sir...We will be off thenlakshya said group A starts walking towards the jungle.

"Lakshya what does it readragini asked

"It says I always run,but never walk

I have bank, but no money

I make noise, but never talk'.

"What can it be...ragini said looking frustrated towards lakshya

"Don't look at me...I don't know either what to do with this clue lakshya said

"Lakshya...Ragini stop your fight I don't want to cook food for 25 peoples herekavya said interrupting lakshya and ragini "swara...Say something

"Hunnn...What should I say I am also cluelessswara said looking frustrated towards sanskar "sanskar...You are our last hope...Please do something

"I know...sanskar gave a crooked smile

"What...What do you know sanskar kavya asked

"The answer of the clue sanskar said

"Really... everyone shouted in unison

"See...It has bank but no money river have bankssanskar said

"Yes...And a river always runs never walkswara said excitedly

"And a river fall always makes noise...It's definitely a river swara said happily without even realising she hugged sanskar

"Oh...I am sorry swara said after she realized What happened

"Leave this sorry and thank you alone for sometime let's go get our clueragini said cheering

"Yes let's goeveryone said in unison






After a while

"Yaar it's already 1 hour...We haven't found anythingkavya said frustrated

"Yes...It's definitely river...It all make sense swara said

"Don't worry guys let's divide in group and search itsanskar said making a mark on the tree "I and swara will go together in East direction and you guys should go in West direction...Let's meet here onlysanskar said and all of them parted their ways to complete their mission





It's been a while after me and sanskar started walking in the east direction of the jungle. The jungle...It looked like I have seen this jungle somewhere. I don't remember where but it looked like a dream of a dream. I was thinking about it only when I tripped down "aaa...

"What happened swara...

"Nothing it's okay I was struggling to walk when sanskar said " what okay swara it's all soared up,wait for me here only and he left. I was dragging myself when I saw a tree. It looked like a very old tree and without even giving second thought I dragged towards the tree. There was carved something on it I cleaned the space and saw it was written ' TARA LOVES DEV' I was looking at it only when I heard someone's footsteps I hide behind another tree I saw a girl in white lehenga coming towards the tree. I realized that the tree didn't looked that old and the carving it was also missing. She picked up a stone and started carving something on the tree. I think she is the one who wrote it there. Who is she? Why am I present here? I had so many questions in my mind. I thought to ask it to her. I had took only one step when someone patted on my shoulder. It was sanskar I looked again at the tree no one was there and the carving it was still there. " Why did you came here swara? I told you not to walk. Can't you listen to me

"Sorry sanskar... I was just

"Don't say any further... he made me sit on a rock and took out some some green leaves from his pocket. "It will help heal faster and then he crushed it and spread it on my sore foot. "It's better now sanskar... Let us walk I said trying to walk but it still looked like I was dragging. "Swara...The competition is not more important than you let's go back .

"Sanskar...

"What now... he said in anger

"I don't want to cook for 50 peoples with this sore leg which made him broke into a little laugh.

"Okay...Okay...But it doesn't mean that you will also walk around with this leghe pointed towards my sore leg

"Ok baba... I will wait here only

"There's no need to wait I think I already found it... where I found these I think I heard waterfall sound from somewhere near he said pointing towards the green leaves






This girl why can't she take care of her. Her whole feet is swollen because of her carelessness. I think I can find BURDOCK ROOT somewhere here,it will help her heal faster. I found it,wait a minute... . Is this...sound of waterfall. Yes it is. But first I need to apply this on her feet. She must be in pain. I reached where I left her and she is nowhere to be seen. I walked some distance and found her standing behind a tree as if she was hiding from someone. I tapped her and she looked at me as if she woke up from some dream. I applied the herbs the herbs on her swollen feet and told her to get back back at the camp but she is said she can't cook for 50 peoples that's why she doesn't want to lose. I am still laughing at that comment. That's why I am back to my way to find the waterfall.






It's already 1 hour. Why isn't sanskar coming back. Should I wait more. But it shouldn't take this much time as he has already found the waterfall. I started walking towards the path where he left. I must have walked I mean dragged for 5 minutes when I saw sanskar coming from opposite direction. His eyes were telling... Something wrong happened.

"What happened sanskar? You alright.I asked

"Yeah I am absolutely finehe replied with a fake smile "See I even found our winning flag he showed me a red flag on which 'winner' was written. I know he is trying to hide something but I don't think this the right time to ask him.

"Okay then let's go back.

We reached back at the point where we moved to opposite direction the trio was already present there with a sad face. We gave them good news and headed towards the tent.



After a while all the groups were back


"So group A you guys secured 2nd position professor said

"Group B 1st position

"Group C disqualified

"Group D 3rd position"

"So group C get on your work professor said

"Ok sir group C leader replied




After an hour all of them set a bonfire chit chatted for a while and ate food. Since all were exhausted badly they headed to their tents soon.


"Fate is the magnetic pull of our souls towards the peoples, places and things we belong with."

Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys😊
I know I am super late...You guys must be angry but believe me being in last year of school is no fun😭

All my updates will be little late...Bear with it🥱


And yes it will be my last story as a writer cause I know I am real sucker at writing skills😛

Please give your honest suggestions...😊


Tani
Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tani dear...
Amazing update...thank u for updating..I know with busy schedule and studies its difficult. ..
Update was good..I enjoyed the trip and all moments of swasan raglak and kavya. ..both swasan had visions I guess...I'm waiting for more story to unfold. ..

Talia
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Waiting for your unres😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Tani dear...

Amazing update...thank u for updating..I know with busy schedule and studies its difficult. ..
Update was good..I enjoyed the trip and all moments of swasan raglak and kavya. ..both swasan had visions I guess...I'm waiting for more story to unfold. ..

Talia


Thanks Talia for understanding me😳

I am glad you enjoyed the update😳 yes both had visions well sanskar one will be also revealed soon.😉

Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi dear...
Thanks for the pm and loved the update...so both are having visions and taking care of each other. ...

Loved the bonding in the group and the mission...swasan moments were so cute...

Update soon...and as always beautifully written...

Razia
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: raaz19

Hi dear...

Thanks for the pm and loved the update...so both are having visions and taking care of each other. ...

Loved the bonding in the group and the mission...swasan moments were so cute...

Update soon...and as always beautifully written...

Razia

Thanks for liking it😳

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